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*Alyssa's sentence is beyond repair people XD *c* The original sentence violated too much errors that you don't know its meaning... is Allison bored and is sitting in her room doing nothing? Or is she sitting in a boring looking bedroom? or shall we say...
"Allison, who is (keep present tense I believe in this special case as she's probably still a boring person now? this is so confusing) a boring person, was sitting in her boring bedroom."
Frosty has no clue on how to fix it... o.o*
*next question...? =D *c*
"Super Moderator Arcanine appears to be more heroic, while Moderator Sapphire Latos seems to be stupider, but both will face anything for the sake of PokeCommunity, and hence they're both highly respected by the whole community."
(hint- error in the sentence above are as followed: (MAJOR) coherence problem, punctuation mistake(s), improper use of conjunctions, spelling error/fake words.) Try to add in as little new words as possible... multiple answer because you need to revise the whole sentence a bit. Try this one now Carol =) *
*EDIT: didn't see Yamichu's... so many words that you can just cut out to save time ^_^;
"There was place called PC, where people said hello and stuff like that. " *
