Reply to Loki: *looks at Loki's massive post*
See, Shiranui? What did I tell you? We've both been spaminized XD;
eeexactly xD
Anyway, I'll go on a mini-rating spree, because I don't want to do my Math homework. Yet >.> Starting with...
Loki: Zoom in at the bottom of the banner. There's definitely a stray cream-coloured pixel there xD ANYWAY - COLOURS <3 I like the colours, to a certain extent, of course xD Though at some areas, the colours tend to look too bright, especially with that yellow overlay thing. It also makes the whole banner look a bit messier. Like, behind his left shoulder (our right), it looks really weird. And it makes the hand look eww and, er, yellow o.o Though I'm pretty much loving everything else about the colours.
I like the vector shapes as well.
Where did you get them? It's sort of a simple effect, but it looks great with the render chosen. And they're colourful. Which is always a good thing xD The white outline-ish thing to the right of the render sort of adds emphasis to the focal, so that's cool.
Moving onto the text~ The 'Carnage' bit is nicely placed, and I like how it follows the curve of the vector thing. As for the 'Badou' text, I have to admit that I never noticed it there until I saw Animad's comment >.> I think I'm just going blind. Who knows :\ I think it just blends a little too well, and the fact that the text is at two different places just makes me go, 'whut?' Or I'm just used to the usual 'the text goes here and nowhere else' thing.
Animadversion: L is luff :D I love the perspective on the render, and it would have been cool to expand on that, but whatever. It's still a good banner It's an interesting choice of colour; I never would have put L together with green, but it looks good. The effects are pretty interesting overall, with the repeat image thing towards the left end of the banner. I also like the text position, with the black bar going under it, and the tiny text thing at the bottom of the text.
Hooowever (lawls o.o) I can't say it's blended very well xP You probably knew that already, but whatever. His hand looks weird and faded (erased?), and so does the tip of his finger. And although the colours work alright with the render, the yellow-ish tone of L's skin looks really quite awkward in the sea of green. Nothing that a colour blending layer couldn't fix, though~
Uryū Ishida: It's so... cotton candy pink! xD And the render looks so cute~ I personally think it looks better without the scan lines. The only reason I might prefer the scanlines is because it makes it look a little bit darker, but you could still make it darker without the scan lines.
I'm not sure if I like seeing the render centered, but it wouldn't look good in any other place anyway xD OMG, this is the perfect kind of banner for a bubble effect C4D! I think there are some there, but the fact that the edges are blurred makes it a bit harder to see them. And the circle clipping masks would look loads better if it wasn't blurred like that. If the background was blurred, but not the clipping masks, it might look better, but I don't know. Ah, and the heart above Hinamori looks cute, but it's sort of just floating there. Move it around and see if there's a better place for it o.o
Motsuko:
SotW banner: Aww, that's so cute~
lawls, I feel so weird now, since my not-quite-done entry is nothing like the ones that have already been entered xD I like the pink and white outlines around the render, it looks great. What I'm not too much of a fan off is the wide variety of vector brushes you used. Try limiting it down, so that the background doesn't look quite as cluttered. Also, the blue brushing towards the bottom looks quite weird. Maybe try some blue vector brushing instead of the wispy stuff, just to even out the invasion of pink in the banner xD
The colours are cute~ I definitely like the pink. I just think that there needs to be a greater balance between pink, blue and white. But it's still a great SotW entry :D
That second banner o.o: Ooh, and I like the choice of colours in this one as well xD This is the sort of vector brushing which looks better; not too crowded, but not empty either. I like the scanlines towards the edge of the banner, acting like a border. It sort of gives a slight sense of depth, which is good.
What I don't really like about it is the flow. Some of the vector brushes lean like this \ where as some others lean like this /. I think it'd look better to stick to one flow. For this banner, the flow would probably be like this / since you placed the text on a vector brush which goes in that direction. Oh, and as for the text itself, it looks pretty good. The only thing I don't like is the colour. Since everything else in the banner tends to be either green or blue, it might blend better if it was green or blue o.o
In comparison to the Persona (?) vector banner Loki lent you, I'd say that the render used here is lacking in the colours like the vector that Loki used, so you're mainly limited in green or blue. It's a good attempt at replicating the style, though. Perhaps try using the pen-tool...?
evilcheese: Yay, colours~ But now it looks a bit monotone xD It does look better than the un-saturated version, so this is probably the best out of them all. It looks muuuuuch better behind the head now, without the distraction of the effect C4Ds. The front of his face looks a lot neater, as well, or I'm just imagining it o.o But yeah, for some reason, the C4Ds look a lot cleaner. Which is a good thing. Oh, but there's this weird C4D on his neck o.o The light source definitely looks better~
I'm not sure about the logo/text, though. I was going to suggest taking it off, but then it would leave the left side of the banner looking too empty :\ Try out putting your own text, playing around with fonts and stuff, maybe. Or maybe the logo would look best, meh xD Ah, well, there's nothing much I could add. Colouring is probably the main things you need to work on.
Poke'd:
Hollow Ichigo banner: Monotone~ Then again, the render
was black and white, so I can't really complain about that xD It's an interesting outcome to my tutorial, but I think that you erased a bit too much from the clipping mask. It looks quite odd o.o I'm not a fan of the spatter brushes you used, but I can't really complain about that either -shot'd- I think more spatters towards the right side of the banner would look good, just to even out the spaces between spatters. And because there's not that many spatters in that side. Then again, it sort of looks like the spattered remains of who/whatever got in Hollow Ichigo's way, so I wont complain about that either xD
Oh, and am I just imagining it, or is there this weird dark gray/orange-ish patch on the render's hair? xD If it's supposed to be lighting, I think white would look better with a banner like this. And the lighting towards the katana looks really weird, since the lighting is supposed to draw the attention to the focal, which is supposed to be the face here, I think? Ah, and the text needs a bit of work. I don't really think that the font matches the render well xP
Zeratul... or something: I can't really tell if it's smudging or filters, but it's reeeaaally blurry o.o The good point to this, however, is that it looks like the person/thing is 'in motion' or something, or he's hiding in the darkness >.> The glowy sword arm thing looks pretty good blurry, for some reason. Or the blurriness spreads the glow. Ah, but that's some good effects.
What I don't like is that you can just barely make out the render, and the focal is unclear. I would be assuming that it's the sword, since it stands out the most, and is drawing my attention. I also don't like the text, since the font just seems a bit too, er, fancy? o.o And gray text in a gray background looks quite boring, to be honest. But, it seems easy enough to improve this banner. You'd just need to erase some of the blurry stuff, and sharpen everything. Maybe fix up the text. It's good, probably the better one of the two banners you posted. If it wasn't so blurry >.> -shot'd-
Shiranui said:
Anyway, I'll go on a mini-rating spree, because I don't want to do my Math homework.
... I believe I underestimated the number of banners posted after Loki's :\ -sigh- At least I got to procrastinate doing Math.
Banner rating > Calculus 8D