The Jacob Stone Chronicles: The Begining

Wee, new chappy, new chappy! ^^;

Is the poor little cyndaquill going to be okay? /ish worried/ Ooooh, now I'm all impatient to see what happens next ^^;

Oh, I loved what you added about Jacob talking with his eyes closed and stuff, it's so...animeish O.o Y'know, anime characters are always talking with their eyes closed, but in reality, WHO talks like that?

And, about the mudkip, I didn't mean to be nitpicky, or anything, really. I often see him as part-ground too ^^;
 
Great chappu Deathspector. Short. But great. I suggest you add one more page of size 10 text onto your word processor. Makes everything longer, better, and easier.

Mudkip=water/ground in my mind. xDD
 
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*SIGH* I never double posted here, or I must be blind. I know (lol) Mudkip seems part ground but check the Pokedex, ^_^ and you shall see it isn't. At any rate, I need to move on to my question.

PLEASE tell me! Will Shanks play a big part in this Journey?
 
Yeah, I realised that Mudkip only gains its dual type trait when it evolves, but then again, it always resembles a part ground for me, but meh...I'll work on it. And Shanks might be a part of the journey, or he might not. You'll have to see for yourself, won't you? And yes, Bell, I am working on making larger chapters, but because of this, it might be another day or so before the next installment comes up. Thanks again for all your support guys (and girls, of course).

DS
 
Lily said:
No, fair reporter, you are much to young to go blind. Do you mind if I borrow the link?

https://img.photobucket.com/albums/v243/Kaiyoseila/Buttercup-1.jpg

Unless my eyes are deceiving me as well, that looks like a double post to me...please edit? o_o
Click to expand...

I have looked at that, and then the actual fanfic page. They are different, in that Deathspector has a post in between those. What's going on?
 
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