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The Land Of The Umbreon (revived)

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Kirin shook his head. "We don't have time to wait here." He looked over to Juni. "Come on Jay, we have to follow those people before it's to late." and with that he teleported back into the forest. Juni could see the grass rustling as he went. she sighed. "I'll uh.. i'll see you guys later okay?" she didn't wait for an answer she teleported baside Kirin.
 
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(( Uh...Restren is with us))
 
occ: oops... i didn't see her post. My bad! I'll just edit it then.
Juni and Kirin were right behind the humans' now and were waiting anxiously to find there family. "Can't they walk any faster?!" Juni yelled in her head. "Your so impatient Jay." Kirin telepathed back.
 
Silverbane awoke and it was day time,
what actually happened? why are the trees scorched? why are there so many dead humans? why do i hurt all over? he thought
His memory had to catch up on him so he asked anyone who he could fine
"what happened here? why are there dead humans, why are the trees scorched?" though he didn't dare ask why he was in pain he knew if they answered his first two questions he would understand,
It looked to him as though a raging charizard had passed theough the forest, it was sort of dead, but certainly not desolate
there had to be an explanation...
 
"Oh Silverbane, you're awake! I'm glad to see that you're ok...but what do you mean what happened here? You used metronome and a whole bunch of fireballs flew in every directions, hitting the poachers, and the trees....nearly hitting Luna and I, but we're fine! Because of you, we're safe, you're a real hero Silverbane!" Silver exclaimed happily.
 
Silverbane looked shocked
"i did..." he looked around again "this?"
he suddenly felt shy, "am i really a hero?" bhe asked bashfully, making no eye contact, he was crying from joy, he felt too shy to look at silver incase something in his eyes told her or anyone everything he felt
he felt pround but he wouldn't become big headed,
"No it wasn't me!" he exclaimed "it was all of us ok?" he demanded
looking around again bashfully
avoiding eye contact...
 
Juni had never seen Kirin so happy. They had been lead through a small underground tunnel where the poachers had been keeping all the umbreon. Juni giggled as Kirin's tailed wagged. It made him look like a helicopter. "Hehehe... Ki don't you think we should get them out before you get exicted?" she said laughing. He nooded and focused on the locks of the cages. His rings glowed green and the lock clicked open.

Kirin and Juni hopped over the unconcious humans they beat earlier and lead the way out of the tunnel. They both sighed as they reached the bright sunny surface. Juni had mixed emotions when she saw her family coming towards them. She was happy to see her parents and older brother, but she felt bad that Kirin's parents were dead. But he kept smiling and his tail twirled twice as fast. "He must be oblivious to the fact he's only got me..." she thought to herself.
 
"So it was all of us, but you did most of the work. If you didn't use that attack we'd still be fighting right now!" Silver pointed out. "And yes you are a hero because of that! So stop being so shy about it" She exclaimed laughing happily.
 
IC: Silverbane, happy as can be ran to a clearing away from the others, taking his time to look at the surroundings, he felt alive, he done something to help,
He lay down on dew draped grass, his under-belly getting wet, he was as happy as ever, he could sense a good atmosphere in the air, and it was affecting him strangely
he was, happy, then hper, then confused and now shy, he kept hiding away from the others, and he realised he was good at hiding
What was wrong with him?...
 
The moon was a ghastly pale beneath the darkened clouds. There was blood everywhere. Umbreons were scattered across the gorund. Her twin sister lay dead with the rest. Then she heard it. Kirin's high-pitched cry. Juni looked around. The humans were gone. Juni stood on unsteady legs and slowly walked towards him. His muzzle was pointed to the sky as he howled out in sorrow.

Beside him were an all black umbreon and a white umbreon with gold rings. Tears slid down Kirin's face and dripped onto his father's black body. Juni wrapped a paw around his leg, put her head against his neck, and closed her eyes. "It's okay ki...' she whispered softly.

"Juni?" "Juni!" She finally snapped back to the present. Kirin looked worried.
 
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"I think he just doesn't like to admit what he's done." I said to Silver smiling a bit. I was still quite dizzy but my mind was still intact. I shook my head a few times and stood on all four because I was laying on the ground trying to recover from the effects of the tranquilizers. And also noticing Silverbane's strange behavior when he was around Silver, I had started to conclude about some things. I walked up to Silver, which was actually a hard job to do, and muttered in her ear.
"You know Silver, I think he likes you." I said and grinned at her.
 
Silverbane began to calm down, tired he lay on the grass again when his ears picked up something, and he picked up a scent
"is that....other pokemon?" he whispered half asking himself half asking the wind,
he wondered if there were more poachers further into the forest with other pokemon, he hoped not, especially fighting types or else they were done for,
"hey everyone, I think there are other pokemon in the forest" he yelled at the other excitedly, aswell as nervously
What did other pokemon want here?...
 
Rahul cleared the sky of the dark clouds feeling happy. He wondered over to the edge of the forest. Looking through he saw pokemon coming this way.
"Ummm, Yeh there is pokemon coming. By the looks of it a lot..."
Rahul jumped back a bit still looking into the forest. He hadn't seen what pokemon just the outline of a load of pokemon running at them.
"Maybe there coming beacause the poacheres are after them?"
Rahul turned around and sat back down again. Feeling confused mist started to form. he tried not to feel like this but really he was.
The mist thickened a bit. He didn't know what to say to the others.
i am going made with this power and just felt like hiding the other pokemon...
But no Rahul couldn't help it. Until he works out how to control his power without using his emotions he was stuck.
 
Silverbane was surrounded in a thick fog, unable to see anyone or anything
"WHat's the meaning of this?" he asked the fog, or well he didn't know who he was asking, so he asked the fog
"What if one of them has a keen eye ability they'll have the advantage" he said angrily, but he refused berserk to win
not this time berserk, i did it last time i can do it again, i don't need your help
But silverbane you do that's why i'm here
Silverbane began thinking...
 
"Juni are you okay?" Kirin said nudging her shoulder with his nose. Juni put on a fake smile. "Yeah... I'm fine Kirin..." Kirin stared at her. "What's wrong Jay?" "You never call me Kirin unless your upset." "I'm fine Ki." she said looking way. "Jay..." she could tell he was getting mad. "I'm your friend, you can tell me!" "It's nothing Ki..." she said running towards her parents. They were talking to other confused umbreon. "Mom! Dad!" They turned around when they heard her.

"You and Kirin were brave to come help us Juni." her mother said smiling. Juni remembered what Kirin said before. "It's okay Jay, i won't let anything hurt you!" Juni blushed at the thought. "Well Kirin's been protecting me this whole time." "He has?" Juni looked towards the voice. her older brother was giving her an evil little grin. "So he's your boyfriend now?!" he said laughing. Juni knew he was just teasing her, but it wasn't funny. "No one asked you Cray!" She pounced on him and they rolled around growling and biting.
 
The group seemed to be missing a few members as Silverbane looked about, he could still barely see, but as all Umbreons know , their eyes are stronger than most other pokemons,He hoped he could see the other pokemon coming before they saw them
"anyone?" he called out walking into a cave wall
"That's twice in well not even a week, stupid fog, where did it come from?" he asked as he was trampeled on
"like ouch, hello? who's there" he asked readying for battle
 
Juni lay on her back panting. Cray had ran off, and Kirin was looking down at her. She batted his ears playfully, but he refused to laugh. "Juni... there's a problem." Her smile dissapeared as she got to her feet. "What?" "Some of the Umbreon are gone." he looked towards the crowd. Sure enpugh the flock of umbreon had lessened. "Well maybe they went back to the forest Ki." His icy blue eyes fell on her. She sighed. "Alright Ki... let's go find them." She told her parents she'd be back and they ran off to the forest.

As they came closer to where she had left her friends, they could hear pokemon running in every direction, but they couldn't see them in the thick fog. "Kirin?" "Kirin where are you?"
 
Silver looked at Luna with a surprised expression. "Are you sure? You're not pulling my tail, are you?" Silver eyed Luna suspiciously, she never really thought that anyone would like her that way, but as her brother always told her, anything's possible! Maybe I'm just too oblivious about these kinds of things. She though to herself. "Hey everyone, I think there are other pokemon in the forest" Silverbane yelled excitedly from somewhere in the forest. Silver looked in the direction that his voice came from. "Maybe we should go check it out, what do you say Luna?" She she asked him.
 
Silverbane soun realised he had been trampeled but a strange pokemon

It was slightly larger than him, unless berserk was about, it was as black as a normal umbreon, and had horns proding from it's head, it's back was covered in a bone like stucture, and it looked alot like a dog, except a lot meaner, and it was staring Silverbane down, trying to win a mental battle with Silverbane but the strange pokemon was losing badly, so it realesed a jet of flames around them dispersing the fog,

Silverbane was caught in a battle with this pokemon...

OOC: would someone mind being the houndoom for a bit?
 
((I'll be houndoom. ^^ but you can start things off Haunted Angel))
 
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