The manga ceation support club

*nods*

Hmm..Wow. You're quite a good helper.
These are all interesting ideas. I think I'll take your advice. ^^

I'm planning the series to be 11 volumes long. And as a matter of fact, she's training right now in volume four with her friends. So I'll definetely use it as a respect timing.

And actually, I know that women weren't respected in that time. When she first takes her brother's sword and everything, her first enemy battles her and keeps mocking her about her being a girl and a samurai. Same with the 2 boys: Ryou and Asuna. They don't trust or believer her at first, but later they realize that maybe women should be more respected.

Thanks.
*writes down comments in "plot book"
These are good notes. XD
 
Sure...after five or so years, you figure out what works and what doesn't and what's been done before. XD
 
well...Keizah has the idea basic for it...She draws it too...I'm just the inker and script writer...we end up useing pencils for shading when it's inked in..XD that is one long post!!!
 
Ill join^^ I love drawing manga but i only draw with pencils
 
Welcome regICE88! XD

Yeah, I draw only with pencil as well.
I'll use ink pens only in my chapter pages.
 
I normally dont use pens because i fear that i will mess up with the drawing and with pencils well i can just erase. Well i have to go cya^^
 
Kimi...you know the plot just as well as I do....you're just being lazy!! XD busted!

Anyway, here's how our story goes...

Once there was a war that went on so long, The planet itself could not recall a time of peace, and it was so gruesome, that every thing in the planet was either used or be used.
The leader of the human, Shiroyuki, was the best sage of all. She could use any magic that she desired. She went up to the king of the saint race and before any one knew it, it was an offical battle. Shiroyuki and the king battled for a lenghy amount of time, and then, the king, seal Shiroyuki with the saint blade, a prized possesion of their race. Shiroyuki, sealed inside the wall was to remain so for ever. The king, died right after the battle.
........Year and years later, A peaceful town known as suncrest is enjoying the day...unless you are in the INN, in that case, you're freaked out by a girl setting up christmas decorations in the middle of summer. Three people walk in and question the girl. The girl's name is Kimi (yep! This is where she got her name!!) and the three people are Yamako,Maho, and Huji. Kimi gets hyper and send Yamako flying into a wall. (and boy is he steaming!!) Kimi introduces herself to Huji whom has just now met her. Maho walks over to Yamako and keeps him to the point where he isn't going to kill kimi.Kimi, Maho, and Huji all help unpile the rubble from him, when Kimi snse's something werid. (her being a quater cat demon gives her strong senses.Maho is a pixie *human sized Yamako is a human and Huji is a giant.) The emtion passes by, but Kimi is still alert. 5 min. later she slashes at a hurling flamethat comes towards them. When the flame is gone, her town is completly messed up!! Water is flowing out of the house,The houses soild walls are carpeted with thick, hard ice, fire engulfs the land, and vines are wrapping around everything! (I have to say this kimi says this "Woah...if that wasn't going to be the last thing ever I was going to see, that would be really cool!" XD) They run through the town and all of the sudden, rain starts to pour down..and the fire is still going. Huji mound Yamako and Maho on his sholder and goes to put Kimi on but...she's a swinging monkey on the vines...-_-;;
Yamako says that he has an idea, but he has to leav temporaily, he ask kimi to get all of the vilagers and place them on the highest thing. (the water is already up to Huji's knees.)
She resuces them and puts the on the Inn. The wind is blowing veriously and the rain just gets worst by giving off hail. Suddenly, she hears Yamako and looks up. with him now is a huge dragon. People jump on it in a state of panic and as soon as they lift off, the Inn collapses. They fly calmly in the air, but it begins to snow. People are beginig to freeze. Maho the send out flames, She then warms them all as they go to the shirne moutain. There, they find the elder and he gives kimi the chalange of unsealing shiroyuki...why? She's the only vaugley demon creature and Maho must heal and warm up the crown. Yamako give kimi the dragon which she ends up nameing Nina. Before she leaves, the elder tells her to unseal the maiden, but no the sword. Confused, she leaves off... In the ruins, she notices a room with a huge hole in it. Nina comes flying in and help get up to the ridgid sword. She then pulls, but it doesn't come out. She plays with it for a mintute, pretending it's the lever that you are never suppose to touch in her town. (*it's something meanigless at the moment, don't ask.XD) she imitates the elder and it falls right out. Shiroyuki is unsealed and starts to attack kimi, shortly, she realizes that kimi is not her foe whom she was fighting years ago. Shiroyuki snaps her eyes open and asks her how she unsealed her. Kimi tells her and Shiroyuki dashes outside. The land looks like nothing happened. Kimi cheers but Shiroyuki looks at her sadly, they head back to the town and notices that something is not right....the whole world has changed!! When she sees Yamako, the very boy whom had protected her as a kid, bullying another child, she saves the kid and yells at him. Obiviously, he doesn't even remeber her. The Maho comes in and she's wearing leather pants chains and a tank top. Something she would never ever wear. Huji comes in and he still seems nice enough.... Kimi and Shiroyuki walk outside,Shiroyuki explains how now, her old world is gone and the new world that they are in now is corrupted by an evil soul. It is affecting everyone in the world and just becuase they act nice doesn't not mean they will not become enraged. Kimi confronts Yamako angain and when he refuses to talk to her, she slaps him and runs to the seceret hideout that Yamako himself made. (it made it into this world!) Yamako is shocked that she knows of this hideing place and begins to talk with Kimi. Of course he calls her crazy and slaps her on the back really hard. Later that night, something come in the village....it looks like a demon creature. It begins to attack the town, but it is easily taken care of ...the next day, Shiroyuki and kimi head out. They belive that if they can find the leader of the world, then it can retuurn to normal. Nina stays with Yamako and Maho becuase of the panic it could cause.walking off they have this liitle discussion I find adorable!!
Kimi: Here we go!!
Shiroyuki: yeah, yeah
Kimi: I bought supplies!
Shiroyuki: So did I
Kimi: really?! Why?
Shiroyuki: i doubt yours will be of any help.
Kimi: HEY!!!

Well....that 's a summary of the first chapeter and prolouge!! In the next chapter comes the first guy....he's funny becuase even though he's really nice, his corrupted soul is the worst...he'll kill anything...friends,foes,masters,complete strangers....but yeah...a verrrry long post and yes, I am well aware of the sPeLlInG eRrOr'S and grammar. But hey, you get the basic idea...phew...longest post'i've ever done!! XD
 
May I join this club? I currently am totally free, it's spring break.
I've tried several mangas, both doujinshi and original
I'm not really good at doing original mangas but I can do them fairly well when I write the story out as a novel and then manga-ize it.
I'm working on two original series and one that's from a regular book series. That last one is the farthest ahead. I already did two chapters!

Well about these two stories: it's an interesting situation because they both cross each other's path somewhere along the line and both characters affect the other characters' lives.
I'll tell you about both stories in a seperate post because both storylines are so confusing and long that they'll leave you with your mouth wide open. And I swear, they are very unique. In fact I have yet to hear a manga or anime with a similar storyline
 
Welcome to the club Crystal Clair^^ And good luck with those stories Crystal Clair and Keizah!
 
OOHH sign me up please^^ I love drwing Manga and I have my own made up too so can I join??!!
 
And good luck with those stories Crystal Clair
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Thanks, I'll really need it if I want to publish at least one by age 20
another XD for that witty quote -_-
This forum is going soooo slow today
Well here goes

The "doujinshi" I'm doing is on this series, it's the Baby-Sitters Club
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Babysitters_Club
I dont want to explain anything though because I have enough summary-writing to do.

The Night Troupe: (keep in mind, I made this group when I was only a 6th grader). TNT's really a gigantic family living in a huge palace which they turn into a school to show the community they're willing to help out their neighbors. And keep in mind, the family isn't Catholic, the mother just was very open-minded and wanted a LOT of children. And when her sisters and brothers had trouble, they'd send their kids over to the palace, kinda like an all-year-around summer camp. Every character had a relationship somehow with another character and so many characters fell in love.

These stories are so contrived that it's adorable. (to me atleast). They really take you away from real life.

The star character Bella is based on my first female crush. Bella got married three times and divorced three times (slut! XD) She even married her brother! XDDD
Of course everyone thinks Bella's a brat. But Bella will hear none of it. Bella has slept with most of the boys her mother has taken in (the non-relatives).
Trip, the brother she married late in the series has always liked her. He teased her a lot with the help of his sidekick Nick (another brother). And not only has Bella fell in love with too many boys, but Trip fell for loads of girls. (I honestly think they could've been a hot incest couple) (spoiler)they broke up at the end of the series and Bella went for one of her past sweethearts(/spoiler)
This story is about how the Night Troupe's current generation was born, how everyone joined, all conflicts that aroused, love, drama, death and even some stuff that was very unexpected. In this series, different cultures are present and very contrived things happen like the time the group's plain crashed in the middle of a desert in Arizona.
(spoiler) it was a pain in the arse ending this series(/spoiler)


The Legend of Cherry: (her first name's really Cheryl but she never says so)
You could say this series is a spinoff series of TNT but not exactly.

As cliche as the story name sounds, it was perfect. Cherry's life is based on mine and her neighborhood is also my neighborhood. (Actually, the Night Troupe formed my middle school in the series) Cherry was born and raised in a family of eight (no, they're not Catholic either) And her brother James has always looked out for her. Whenever Cherry asks James if he's her brother or cousin, he always says, "Cherry, I'm. Your. Brother." But he sounds really hesitant. And to be honest, I dont even know who he is really)
When Cherry is ten, her parents move from the world they live in to my neighborhood and Cherry attends my schools (only middle and high schools though). Cherry also finds out that she is a gifted singer. At her school is where she encounters Bella and from then on, her whole life changes.
This story follows Cherry from her 10th April fool's day all the way to high school and is still following her as we speak.
BTW, I'm being really vague on the storyline because I dont want to confuse any of you.
 
Welcome all! Do you think there should be a owner/co-owner thing? I personally don't know...After all we're all here becuase we like to draw, right?
 
Midori Chi said:
So you've been making manga for five years?

That's alot. 0.0
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Sorta. I started the manga five years ago, over the years it went through a LOT of changes to get to what I have now. If you're serious about them , over time you find out what does and doesn't work and what readers will like more. In the five years I've tried, I've made one doujinshini. It was 25 pages and took me an entire summer of working almost all day on. Of course, I was young and didn't know what I was doing really, but it gets easier as you go.
 
Ooh! I'm working on a digimon manga as we speak! Can I join?
 
Welcome, welcome. =D

Keizah: Some clubs have 'em, some don't. XD (the owner/co-owner thing)
If you think the club needs it, go ahead. If you think it's fine as is, keep it how it is. Ionno. XD

Kazuhito: Wow. I started drawing anime when I was seven, and I started making manga in 5th grade. (about 2-3 years go)
I agree. My first manga I made was horrible. It was too confusing and too cliche. And although my manga still have cliche features in it, I definetely think I've improved since then. XD
 
My story was okay, I didn't really dislike anything about it. The art was hard though, drawing manga isn't really like just drawing. You have to stay inside set parameters and you have to make sure the entire picture will look good, fit the word bubble and enlarge or decrease in size well.
 
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