The pok?mon adopter's club (Step right in and feel the love XD)

Okay, let's see if I can't get some replies done.

Rioku, you still haven't listened. And if there's something I hate it's when people don't listen. The histories were wrong, yes, dreadfully wrong, but there is also a problem with your RP sample, okay, many problems. First of all, it's three lines, and as I told Agent9 I expect four lines at the very least. And that should be four lines of simply awesome text, so any real sample should really be a good bit longer than that. Look at the one's who have been accepted, you get the idea. Second, you're writing in first person. Now normally this might not have been a problem, but how on earth are you going to control two different characters in first person? Third, you're jumping between past and present tense in your text, also a peeve of mine. So in other words, I'd suggest rewriting your RP sample altogether. The personality fields are also a borderline case but they are within the limit.

Minako, love the RP sample (Like it better than my own actually), and the reference to shadow pok?mon is quite alright. And besides, I couldn't claim that you portrayed shadow pok?mon wrong either since it was all just gossip between two Pidgeys. Accepted with honor. ^^

Light Azumarill, it seems like 5 at the moment although I'm of course still accepting sign-ups and if Agent9 would just do something about his RP sample it would probably be 6. And yes, good luck reading our posting spree. XD

As for the starting date, it is still a bit up in the air, although hopefully it won't be too long. Since it seems like we're still awaiting some more adoptives (And since I have this nagging feeling that my mom will bust me if I stay by the comp much longer) I won't start yet. Maybe in a couple of days though, because my patience is running low and I think that we're getting a good team together here. ^^
 
Thank you, Ego! ^o^ I'm just glad it's accepted. I took a long time with that, didn't I? XD

I'm fine with waiting. ^^ In fact, I may do a character sheet for Yowu if there's time. XP Actually, I myself was going to request putting off the opening until Wednesday, just for all of our sakes. I'm sure that people are busy with school at this time. XP
 
O.o I'm a manly woman! XD Just kidding, I thought that was funny.

I don't mind waiting to start. I was just curious. ^^

Oh, and don't worry about your Celebi, deoxys and celebi master, it's a- comin'!

Yes, it is sad that the thread got closed, but as previously stated, I was about to request it closed anyway. Things were getting so out of hand. >_<
 
O ok Alter Ego sorry i just get confused sometimes. and it seemed alot longer when i wrote it O_o Ill do it over again. I fixed it on page 13. I changed the rp sample so i wasnt talking in the first person and it was more than 4 lines. I just got rid of the history completely because it was only optional.
 
Gah, by the time I read all that, I forgot what I was gonna say. XD

First off, Minako, your chars are PERFECTO!!!! ^^
See? It turned out better because you took your time. XD

Randall-Kun said:
As soon as I get my Eevee I am so gonna join!!! L_A's adoptions are the best in PC!
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You only noticed that now?

Nah, j/k. XD

We should wait 'till Saturday or Sunday morning Alter's time. Because that's when I go on posting sprees. XD

Plus, that's when three or four of us are online. What does everyone think? =3
 
I'm kinnda confused on the adoption thing!!!iand i don't know what to do right now?
 
Aww, thanks, Plushieness. X3 +smushes+ I am rather proud of how it turned out. Best character sheets I've done in way too long. XP

Hmm... That sounds like a good idea, but on my time, I can't get on Saturday morning. o.o; I don't know Ego's time @@ But, if it's what I think it is, for me, it'd be... About 4 AM, right? o.o I'm in the West Coast, USA XD
 
Species: Zigzagoon (What's the pok?mon in question? No Legendaries)
Name: Zigzagoon; Spike (Including nicknames)
Gender: Male
Appearance:
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Personality: Spike is usually adventurous, loyal and protective of his younger siblings; ie brother and/or sister. He also looks out for the younger Zigzagoon in the family's group. He also likes to play with them also.
Attacks: Tackle, Tail Whip, Tickle and Trick

RP Sample: Space swept past the shuttlepod, and before them the curve of the planet began to take form. Sharla bought the small ship into a precise entry angle, and guided the ship smoothly through the layers of gass and energy that made up the various levels of atmosphere of the planet.

"Commence scanning for the viral contaminant, Doctor," Gillian said. Turning to regard the rest of the Landing Party she grabbed the helmet of her environment suit. "Everyone, double check your seals and make sure the suits are functioning properly before we land."

"Yes Captain." as Sam swivelled his chair around to face the small console to his right, where he started to scan for the contaminant as he began to speak. "Got it, captain, it seemed to have originated from a impact crater a little more than 500 metres east from here, probably from a weapon or something, also it spread the contaminant into the atmosphere." Standing up from his chair, Sam proceeded to put on his environment suit followed by the helmet, the seals being double checked and the suit functioned normally, he then returned to his chair as the shuttlepod's occupants prepared for landing.

"Two minutes to the specified co-ordinates, Captain," Sharla said from the pilots seat. Minutes pass as the shuttle approaches the co-ordinates, the city coming into view.

Sharla bought the small shuttlepod down on the Caradan Parliament helipad. As promised, First Minister Garvos was waiting for them. As the Captain disembarked, leading her Away Team to the surface of the planet in their environmental suits, the First Minister rushed forward. He bowed low to the Captain. "Welcome to Caradan."

The others in the Minister's party also moved forward and repeated the bow he had given.

Gillian looked to her officers and bowed in return, watching them mimick her.

"Thank you, First Minister. I wish it were under more pleasant circumstances." The Captain then turned to her Away Team. "Let me introduce my team, this is my First Officer, Lieutenant Commander Sharla Kovalski. My Chief Medical Officer, Lieutenant Sam Murphy. My Chief Engineer, Lieutenant David Whitworth. My Chief Armoury Officer, Sub-Lieutenant Slovaak."

The First Minister smiled at each of them in turn, pausing for a moment longer with the Vulcan, examining through the glass of the environment suit's face mask the Vulcan's green complexion and pointed ears. "We are most pleased to meet you, and we are deeply grateful for your offer of assistance. Whether you are able to help us or not is immaterial. The fact that the Earth and her allies have given us their word they will try and help is more than enough. You and your peoples will always be welcome on Caradan." (https://groups.msn.com/StarTrekLegacy/ussvoyager1.msnw)

*ok here it is Alter Ego*

'PH33R Cradily'
 
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Satoshi-san: Okay, I see one rule broken for starters. *Sigh* Why do people stumble on such trivial matters? -_- Check the rules of this RP and you'll see what I mean. (Hint, the number of the rule is something between 3 and 5) Also, you haven't added any personality to your pok?mon and have left the comments in many of the fields, very annoying when reading. <_<

Then there's the small thing about your character's name, I doubt that in the pok?mon world they would ever refer to each other by the name of their species. Also, is that RP sample from another RP? If so, then give me a link to it.

Rioku: your RP sample is still only three lines long. >.< Also, you're writing in present tense (Didn't I mention that before? I should have...) while everyone else has done theirs in past, so please change that.

As for the starting date, I hereby declare it to be some time next Saturday, those of you incapable of getting your act together in that time can blame yourselves.
 
Gokushowron:

1. You triple posted. Delete two of those immediately.

2. This club is only for those who already have at least one adoptive pok?mon. The adoption thread is also closed at the moment so there's no way you can enter any time soon. Honestly, read before you post. -_-

But on a more positive note, I just got my adorable chimecho. ^^

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Chimecho

Level: 5
Gender: Male
Nature: Mild
Ability: Levitate
Attacks:
Wrap
Hypnosis
Calm Mind
Hidden Power
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*gives Alter Ego a cup of tea* You must be getting fed up this by now ^^'
 
> < omggg The new Pok?mon are so adorable! +squishes Boudicca and Chimecho+
I love them. <3

Have you thought of a name, Ego? Or are you waiting for Plushie? XD
 
Well, I haven't thought up a new name yet. *Beams at Chimecho while taking a sip of tea (Gawd, I needed that.)* Was thinking of Melody if it would be female, which it obviously isn't. XD But I think I'd still like to name this one on my own. It won't do to always go whining to the nickname guru. ^^
 
I have a Chimecho called 'Chime' on my game. Unorigional, but I kinda like it.
 
sorry AE here is the link (just scroll down to any of my posts)
https://groups.msn.com/StarTrekLega..._Message=626&LastModified=4675540648323186952

and sorry Alter Ego I'm not used to writing up character profiles for roleplaying anything other than human characters and I've added 'PH33R Cradily' into the sign in post. how's Spike for a nickname; if not maybe you could suggest something and as for the pokemon's personality i'll say adventurous and loyal. is this alright? :D
 
Agent9, your RP sample is still too short. Come on, deal with it already, okay? Oh, but I do agree that the Chimecho is cute. *Huggles currently nameless Chimecho*

Satoshi-san, you still haven't added a personality to your character, could you maybe do something about that? It's a two-line minimum. Two words isn't a personality. -_-

As nicknames go, I'll try to think up something, I'm going to be especially picky with this one since it is, as previously noted, so cute. ^^ Oh, and I do think that even unoriginal names can be good at times, just as long as you don't overuse them. ^^
 
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