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now im not AS pissed as i was two seconds ago......
 
Character's name:Anthony
Age:9
Gender:Male
Appearance :Skinny,4'10 Wearing a cap with hair sticking out,pocket in his jacket,gold shorts
Bachkround Info. Anthony was born in New Bark town.As a baby,he had a ferouicus temper that his mother could not stand and was a stubborn baby.His Older Brother,James was already a pokemon trainer.Anthony usally would take off a Pokeball off his brothers belt,making James mad.When he was 2,he started walking and walked to the prof.'s lab!When he came,The Prof. Game him a Pokeball containing a Chickorita,Though;he never played with it so its still at lvl 5.When he was 4,He went to the Kanto region with James.Some how when he got there in Vermillion City, he went to a man that had a Machop stomping the ground flat. They seemed to have a special bond together and asked if he could keep the machop. The old man said fine and he kept the machop.Also when he was 9 he also recived a breeded TODODILE and CYNDAQUIL.
Personality If he is happy usally he will go on the route and ask trainers for a rematch.
If he is really bolling mad,he will start doing bad things and in result,he always vists the shiny magikaps at Cherrygrove City.He does not want you to see him cry.If he is feeling neutral,he will not talk regualr and mumur.
Other Information:He has gotten a charm that helps him do stuff
Starter Pokemon:Chickorita,Machop,Tododile,Cyndaquil
Region of Orgin:Johto
 
sinnohchapion said:
Character's name:Anthony
Age:9
Gender:Male
Appearance :Skinny,4'10 Wearing a cap with hair sticking out,pocket in his jacket,gold shorts
Bachkround Info. Anthony was born in New Bark town.As a baby,he had a ferouicus temper that his mother could not stand and was a stubborn baby.His Older Brother,James was already a pokemon trainer.Anthony usally would take off a Pokeball off his brothers belt,making James mad.When he was 2,he started walking and walked to the prof.'s lab!When he came,The Prof. Game him a Pokeball containing a Chickorita,Though;he never played with it so its still at lvl 5.When he was 4,He went to the Kanto region with James.Some how when he got there in Vermillion City, he went to a man that had a Machop stomping the ground flat. They seemed to have a special bond together and asked if he could keep the machop. The old man said fine and he kept the machop.Also when he was 9 he also recived a breeded TODODILE and CYNDAQUIL.
Personality If he is happy usally he will go on the route and ask trainers for a rematch.
If he is really bolling mad,he will start doing bad things and in result,he always vists the shiny magikaps at Cherrygrove City.He does not want you to see him cry.If he is feeling neutral,he will not talk regualr and mumur.
Other Information:He has gotten a charm that helps him do stuff
Starter Pokemon:Chickorita,Machop,Tododile,Cyndaquil
Region of Orgin:Johto
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WAY too many mess ups.
ONE: You can only have up to TWO starters! *Read the damn rules*
TWO: You're other info is NOT acceptable. "Has a charm that makes him do stuff"....wtf is that? Tell us VERY detailed what that charms does.
THREE: You have a LOT of speeling errors.
FOUR: Who was the Professor?
FIVE: Make it more realistic in his background. A two year old is NOT given a pokemon like that.
SIX: Do NOT, I repeat, do NOT use all capitals in an SU form. it just makes it look bad.
SEVEN: Not much of a personality. "Challenges people to rematches."....yeah....he seems exciting dont he? *sarcasm*
EIGHT: Provide me a sample of YOUR writing. From what you have shown me I will know how to tell if YOU wrote it or if someone else did.
 
Pikataro said:
What exactly do you mean by that?

If it has anything to do with the SU, I kinda helped Tora with his... Since it was his first time actually joining a forum...
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yeah its the fact that most of us are Uber powerful right now and he just joined PC
 
Ah. I get it.

Yeah, and starting with four Pokemon, especially all the Johto starters... No fair. I mean, Kit didn't just get most her Pokemon like *snap* that. OK, fine, pretty much every Pokemon that joined (except for the Treecko and Piplup; they have different stories), Kit ended up getting them without personally having to catch them, though two of them she did end up battling (Amber and Kara); the other two one was given to her and the other hatched from its egg. But still... She didn't start off with four Pokemon just like *snap* that >_< She didn't even get another Pokemon after Kara 'til she entered the next town...
 
Still dont get what you mean but......anyways

IMPORTANT!!: I know we are ALL palsy and everything.....but from now on TRY to keep most of the posts in here ABOUT THE ACTUAL RP! I know I never said it before but this thread WAS made for the actual RP. Ya'll are still welcome to talk about whatever on here, but please try to keep it at a minimum. This new rule will go into effect starting at midnight tonight.

Thanks.
Your very own Lorilei fanatic-

Pink <3
 
Nice title at the end XD Totally awesome >_<

Fine, I'll *try*. But it's fun talking about other things. Guess that's what the visitor comments are for XD I'd still like people on here to look at my Plat. album XD

~Ruby Lover Kit (yes, I'm referring to the character)
 
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