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The Second Coming.

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((Oh good idea, but please do it tomorrow for now... walk around in Celadon for a while xD Okay? x3)
 
"Krystal, Bite again!" Krystal began to head for the Gastly.

"Use Protect!" The Gastly was then covered in a barrier.

"Perfect! Krystal, stop right now!" But it was too late. Krystals fangs hit the barrier, knocking her back. Her fangs seemed a bit chipped.

"Dang... If you were a Croconaw, you might've done better... Not your fault though..."
 
"Gastly! Finish her off with Shadow Ball!" Seeing how Krystal couldn't move, Kit stared in horror s Gastly powered up its Shadow Ball. Once released, it headed straight for Krystal.

"Krystal! NO!!!" The ball hit Krystal hard knocking her back into the egg. The egg then cracked.

"Uh-oh... Poor egg..." Kit sighed.

Suddenly, the egg cracked some more. At last, it opened up. Inside it was...
 
Dom looked around at the TM's. He spotted 3 that he wanted: Dragon Pulse, Steel Wing, and Focus Punch. He bought the TM's whith the money he had leftover and called out his pokemon for their new moves. Dratini got Dragon Pulse, Farfetch'd got steel wing, and Machop got Focus Punch.
 
When the egg opened, what popped out but... Some sort of bunny thing with cream puffs on it.

"What the heck is THAT???" Kit asked, surprised. She went to her guide. "Hmm... Lesee... Oh, it's a... Buneary? Great, anohter foreign Pokemon..."

"Hey, I only know the first three generations! That must be a fourth gen. Pokemon!!!" Morty exclaimed.

"And from the way Krys is reacting towards it, it's a girl... Well, she'll be Naru, then!"
 
Dom headed to the top floor and bought himself a Lemonade and chilled up there for a while. He was mainly staregizing for his next few Gym battles.

Ok, Surge uses electric types, so Markowak will be used there. Erika uses Grass, so thats Farfetch'd's territory. And Sabrina uses Psychic so Haunter can hopefully hold his ground there.. Dom was already thinking ahead three gyms.
 
"OK... Buneary, Buneary, Buneary..." Kit went back to her guide to see what it knew.

"Wait a sec... This Buneary's has PINK on it. The one in the guide has YELLOW on it. It's... a SHINY Buneary??? Alright then... Use IcePunch!" The Buneary powered up its fists and lunged quickly at the Gastly. It hit the Gastly directly, causing it to faint.

"It seems I have one more Pokemon, now..." Morty said, a smirk spreading on his face.
 
((Sorry Mightrena, but i wanted to continue the RP, maybe we could meet up in another town.))

Dom finished strategizing and headed out of Celedon. When he reached Saffron, he headed south and through the crossing station to Vermillion.

"Wow, this place is beautiful!" Dom exclaimed. He, once again, brought out his guide to see what was around here. "Hmm, I think I'll check out the S.S. Anne" Dom said to himself.
 
((just to be the little nit-pick that i am, i sometimes cant tell whos saying what in your posts pika. maybe you could put like something like this: "I love pokemon" said Kit enthusiastically. just saying, dont hurt me! xD))

Dom walked aboard the luxury cruise ship and headed to the main deck. He noticed there were sign-ups for a mini- pokemon tourney. Dom walked over and signed up. 16 people, double battle. Winner recieves a rare item.

Dom was the third fighter. He waited patiently for his turn to come. The first battle was between a kid with a Wartortle and a Raticate versus a woman with a Butterfree and a Gligar. Raticate KO'ed the Butterfree easily, but both Wartortle and Raticate were taken out by the Gligar.

"Up next, Dom Santino versus Amy Richburg!" The announcer called. Dom headed to the middle of the deck, waiting for his opponent.
 
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As Haruka went in the building she was clueless about where to go. She asked a newby clerk who told her about the various floors but she was clueless about them all so she deicded to travel up each one.
As she descended to the first floor she checked out the items for sale.
"Hmmm... these are quite goo-" she was stopped as.
"Hello!" said a shopkeeper, at the check-out.
"Uh-umm hello?" said Haruka, startled as the shopkeeper smiled into her face.
"We have some great items for sale, please do look around for something that suits your interest" she said as she showed Haruka to one shelf.
"Yes well I don't have a lot of Poke(money?) so I think I'll just-" but stopped as she saw some new items for sale!. "Wow!" she exclaimed, "I-i-is this pokeball?" she said as she picked up a blue pokeball with red slashes (stripes?)
 
Dusty
Route 42/MT. Mprtar

Dusty was enjoying a walk through the mountains. He and his Pupitar were observing a waterfall just outside of the entrance of a cave. Then they heard a noise. It was close, and sounded like footsteps, but not just one pair. Many, many steps. Dusty turned around, only to find men, staring at him, with evil grins.

"One, two, three....57 men...I suppose this isnt a greeting?" he asked the men sarcasticly. He saw that they were in a similar uniform to that of Flade. Then Dusty knew, they were there, to take him out. They sent out all of their pokemon. Each had six, and greatly outnumbered Dusty. Though, they shall soon find, they cannot overpower him.

Two hours later~~~

"Scizor, use Steel Wing! Dustox, Silver Wind! Parasect, Venomoth, Vespiquen, Hyper Beam! Heracross, use Stone Edge!" he said as he finished the rest of the enemy pokemon. Each used seemingly powerful pokemon, but all fell fast to Dusty's own miniature army. Dusty turned and began to leave. As he began to take a step, a grunt attacked him. He launched in the air towards Dusty, only to be knocked back down, ny Pupitar's Double-Edge. Pupitar began to glow, grow, and form a new shape.

"Well then, let's be on our way." he said to his pokemon. Though, he sensed someone else there.
 
Dom
S.S. Anne Deck ~ Vermillion Poke'-Tourney

Dom waited in the middle of the deck for a few moments, untill a snobby looking girl approached the middle of the deck with him. "Hmph," She snorted "This will be no competition to beat a lower-class civilian like you.."

"What?!" Dom yelled, pretty outraged from the comment "I'll show you, you stuck up brat!!". "Children, children. Calm down and lets start this battle!" The announcer commanded.

"Hmph, fine" Amy said, with her nose in the air. "Go Meowth and Growlithe!". Two pokemon appeared on the feild, one standing on two legs with a shiny gold emblem on his forehead. The other, a red and black pup, on all fours, ready to fight.

"Ok, go Teddiursa and Dratini!" Dom shouted. His two pokemon appeared on the feild in front of him.

"Dom Santino has the first move!" The announcer called. "Sa-weet!" Dom said triumphantly. "Ok, Teddiursa! Lead it up with a Fury Swipes on Meowth!" Teddiursa ran over to Meowth and began to scratch him like mad.

"Growlithe! Don't let your companion be defeated by that low-life scum!" Amy shouted in disgust "Use Flamethrower!!" Glowlithe jumped over to Meowths side and charged up a Flamethrower but before he could let it loose Dom called out to Dratini "Dragon Pulse!!" Dratini headed over, making sure not to hit Teddiursa with the attack, and let loose a massive attack on Growlithe, Sending him towards Meowth.

When Growlithe hit Meowth he accidently lets loose the Flamethrower he was charging and hit his teamate with it at point-blank range. Meowth was KO'ed on the spot and Growlithe was severly injured from the Dragon Pulse.

"AHH! My sweet Meowth!!" Amy called. "You twit!! You will pay for what you did to me sweet pokemon!!". Dom simply smirked and said "One down, one to go."

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Aaron
Base of Mt. Mortar


"Hmph, looks like we've may have some competition from this old man after all.." Aaron said coldly. "As for you SORRY BUNCH OF LOSERS!" He sudenly turned into the vicious man he was when he was angry. "YOU PATHETIC EXCUSES FOR GRUNTS! I'VE SEEN RATTATAS FIGHT BETTER THAN THAT!!!" He yelled to the Grunts.

"Wait till Flade hears that you couldnt even beat ONE of his pokemon! I wouldn't be suprised if he sicked his Magmortar on EVERY LAST ONE OF YA!" He screamed at the Grunts. One Grunt decided to stand up for himself and his co-horts "Ey! I di'nt see YOU out there risking your life on your Pokamon!!"

Aaron turned around and glared at the lone Grunt "What...did you say?" He grabbed the Grunt by his throat and lifted him up "You dont talk to your superiors like that, you insignificant WASTE!!" He flung the Grunt to the ground and walked off back to headquarters.
 
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Flade
Team Talisman HQ

Flade switched off the survaliance cameras around Mt.Mortar. He clicked a button on his desk, and connected to Aaron's ear piece.

"Aaron report to my office. I want to talk to you about you failing the mission I assigned you to." he said bluntly. He walked into the training arena and sent out his pokemon. He began his training immediately as well as the grunts around him.

After five hours of training he went back into his office and waited for his admin to return.

Well Dusty, it seems that it's going to be a lot harder than I expected to get you out of the picture. I'm going to have to try a lot harder next time. he thought to himself.
 
Dom
S.S. Anne ~ Vermillion Poke-Tourney , Round 1

Dom was ready for whatever that Growlithe was gonna through at him. "Bring it on baby!!" He tautned to Amy. "Ugh!!" She replied in disgust. "Growlithe! Another Flamethrower!!"
"Dodge it!" Dom yelled. The attack was easily dodged by Dom's nimble pokemon."Now! Lets finish this off! Teddiursa, Slash! Dratini, Hyper Beam!!" Dom comanded.

Teddiursa ran up and hacked at Growlithe like mad. Even though he was doing great damage, Teddiursa was just buying time for Dratini. And when that time came, Teddiursa jumped out of the way, allowing Growlithe to get hit full-on with Hyper Beam. Growlithe flew back and hit the wall of the ship, fainting in the process.

"Noooo!!!!" Amy screamed, recalling her pokemon and running of the deck crying.

"This rounds winner is, Dom Santino!!" The announcer called.
dom bent down to congratulate his pokemon. Teddiursa gave him a high-five with a sloberry hand and Dom went to go pet Dratini. As he did, Dratini started to glow, just as Cubone and Haunter did. Dratini grew much longer and much more slender in it's evolution. "Awesome! You're a Dragonair now!!" Dom said to the newly evolved pokemon.

He walked off to the side of the deck, awating his next battle.

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Aaron
Mt.Mortar/Team Talisman HQ

"Aaron, report to me in my office i ne-" Aaron cut the transmission short, he knew Flade wanted to see him about the failure. He headed towards the HQ, pondering about what punishment awaited him

~At HQ~

Aaron slowly walked into Flades office and sighed. "*sigh* You.. wanted to see me, sir?" He asked to his master.
 
Flade
Team Talisman HQ

"Oh! Come in, come in dear Aaron. Please, have a seat." he said calmly as his Magmortar closed the door behind Aaron. "I'm sure you are aquainted with Magmortar here? Anyway, that isn't why you are here now is it? Tell me Aaron, do you know WHY you're here?" he asked a little annoyed.

Dusty
Mt. Mortar

Dusty walked into the cave after his long battle. He and his newly evolved Tyranitar walked through the darkness, unaware of anything that may scurry towards them. After a good distance from the entrance, the ligh faded, but only momentarily. They came across a lake, right in the heart of the cave. There they saw many water pokemon in the middle of the lake, in the center, was some sort of light sorce. It was a stone key. The one Dusty protects to ensure that the temple of the two legendary pokemon he kept sealed.
 
((Dom is gonna take a little break while we focus on Aaron))

Aaron looked at his master nervously, he could tell Flade was annoyed by his failure "I..I am here because I failed, i could not eliminate Dusty or get the key to the stone temple.." He admitted.

"But in my own defense master, that guy can take out all of the Elite 4 combined if needed. It's outrageous how powerfull he is." Aaron said, trying to make his failure seem less terrible.

Aaron could feel his neck heating up from the Magmortar that was uncorforatbly close to him. He began to sweat, not only from the pokemons body heat, but from personal fear of what Flade was going to do to him.

"Master, if you'll give me just one more chance, i can get something that will lure Dusty in. There was a boy he was traveling with ealier, the two of them seemed pretty close friends. As you know, the Sages are looking for succesors, and i think Dusty might be thinking about this kid as his. If we could get our hands on him, then we could hold him for ransom" Aaron proposed a new offer to his master.
 
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