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The Star in the Sky

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    This is an open RP; anyone can join, if their sign-up meets expectations. If we are far into the RP, you can ask me to explain what has happened so far so you know what to do when you sign up.

    The Star in the Sky

    Rated PG

    It can only be said that stars are actually sun. There are many above us, and some of us admire them. Some of us make a living looking at the stars in the skies. They show a light to us that we love. They are symbols that we love. It can only be said that only a few can really take in star gazing for what it really is, and that would be a reminder of how small we are.

    To many, it's been a long while since they seen a star. Or at least took the time to look up and admire. In life, in this world, we pass these and go on about ourselves, getting ready for what is really important to us. To some would be our loved ones and to others would be to bring food to the table. We do this all the time.

    So when a star is brighter than it should, and stays that way for several days, why doesn't anyone notice? Why does it take a month for scientists, some who look into the sky every day, to see this star in the sky? See it growing, larger than other stars? Why must it take a priest to say it's the Star of Bethlehem warning us for some, and very few at that, to actually look into the sky?

    One month, the star went unnoticed. After the end of that December it was, coming to January, three days before the first of January, it went all over the world. There was news everywhere of the star. All they had for it was that it was an incredibly huge star, and nothing more.

    The day before the first of January, right as we all would count down for the New Year, the star seemed to just turn off from the sky. Then in the next moment, it burst with light.

    The Pokémon world has been peaceful and dangerous at the same time. The star exploding really caused uproar, everywhere. They didn't need to find the news that every Pokémon, anywhere, had disappeared from both wild and captivity. That meant that the only living beings in the Pokémonless world were humans. Picture it as if all animals had disappeared from the face of the Earth. Wow. Way to start the New Year.

    What happens in the year that follows is all that this RP is about. You do what you want. Do you want to find the mystery of the star, or just walk around aimlessly? Either way, time is running out. The change is coming, the world is changing. It's time for a world without Pokémon. And then in just long months that follow, the remaking of Pokémon.

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    First of all, I'd like to say that no, this isn't about a bunch of people running around for an aimless goal without Pokémon. After the first three days without Pokémon, in RP time, things will change. You'll see. (or just look at the join sheet) >_>

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    Rules​

    Come on guys, you should know them by now. Don't screw this RP up with three word posts, flames, spamming, character controlling, and advertising. It's wrong and makes the RP and I look bad. Don't make me look back, I just returned from a long absence from this site. If you do something like this, then you're out of the RP.

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    Sign-up Sheet

    If you guys were wondering where this plot will go, all you have to do is look at one little detail here and you'll see. And I've even explained right next to that detail.

    Name: (This is crucial for the RP, and you know it. For all I care, pick Lala Girl as your name. No, I'm not serious about that, but come on, be serious about your name. ;) )

    Age: (You know what this is. Any age matters, but if you plan on something below nine years old, don't act older than you should.)

    Gender: (There is no way you're starting without this thing to tell you apart.)

    Location: (What region and city are you in? Be aware that if no one joins this RP but say only two, we need to stick in the same region, or else it could just get boring. I'm picking Kanto, though if a majority is somewhere else, then I'm making my character take that ferry to the most populated region.)

    Pokémon to Become: (DUN DUN DUN! See, I told you. Anyways, after the first 3 days in RP time, you'll notice your body features are slightly changing. By April in RP time, you'll be full Pokémon. As me being the RP Game Master, I need to know that you'll pick a Pokémon that is not a legendary. And don't go picking something like Charizard. If you want Charizard, you need to pick Charmander. Same goes for every other evolution Pokémon. If you are wondering if you can evolve, yes you can, but only after April 1 in RP time. Don't evolve the second April 1 hits unless you have a stone evolution Pokémon and have a stone with you.)

    Description: (Even though this will be changing as the RP goes, it's still needed. 3 or more sentences please.)

    Personality: (It'd be nice if your personality matched the Pokémon you become, but it isn't necessary. You can be the nicest person in the world and be in the most dangerous, mean looking Pokémon body. 3 or more sentences please.)

    History: (This, I'll let you do without. It's your choice if you want to add this, we're not going to be looking at your history much. However, if you put a history, there's a chance you can use it at dramatic moments in the RP. That way, you won't have to be thinking about a twist you'd like to add all the time and just look here. More than just one sentence. I know you can do that.)

    Love: (This RP isn't action, but there will be if you want. As in you battling other people. I'm making this RP for dramatic reasons though. Here, I want you to put if you are single and interested or not interested, or if you are just plain in love already. However, only pick in love if you plan to RP with someone else and be in love with them in the RP. That means that yes, you can invite your friends to RP and ask to be each others lover. If you want lover, but don't have anyone to RP with, then you can simply ask someone that signed with single and interested if you want to have an already established relationship. I'm having mine as single and interested, but if you want, PM me to be having an already established relationship. This works for me only if you're the opposite gender. If you want some female/female and male/male, well, that's your deal. Ask someone else, not me. >_>)

    Other: (Whatever it is you want on here. 3 or more sentences)

    RP Sample: (I almost forgot about this. Show me you're writing. If it's good, then your accepted. Show me a paragraph or two. Possibly more if you want.)

    My Sheet

    Name: Tom Rivor (Some might remember Rivor from an old RP. Not the same person, or related, if those that were there when I used to RP a lot.)

    Age: Fifteen

    Gender Male

    Location: Kanto, Viridian City

    Pokémon to Become: Psyduck (PMD says I was like a Psyduck, so I'm going with that.)

    Discription Tom has Black hair, somewhat at a long length. Many would say from behind, he looks like an old rock band members, from when there were what they would call "hair bands." His face is young, and you can almost never tell when he is reluctant, sorry, or thinking. His eyes are a dark green color. He believes he needs a shave, and a few would agree with the little shag he has going on. He's a little taller than his dad, at 5'9.

    Personality: Tom likes to be the one that makes a joke or two, but he's no joker. In fact, at any moment, he can become very serious. Usually, he'll hear something loud and clear as an order, but still be unable to follow through either because he forgot or just couldn't be helped to do so. Everything he does is usually at the last minute. At the same time, he tries to do everything that is a given opportunity. He grabs onto any opportunity, even if he doesn't follow through with it. Overall, Tom's a really nice guy.

    History Some of Tom's friends would usually make friendly fun of him by his eyes. Tom's eyes are different than that of the rest of his family. No one else in his family has green eyes, it's only him. He feels special because of that. He also had tried to sustain a relationship with a girl before, but it ended up falling in his face. He couldn't offer much but what a friend could, and though that may have been enough, Tom agreed that a friend is someone you trust and can cry on. None of that was happening in the relationship. He moved and never saw his girlfriend again. Partly because she had gone on a Pokémon journey. He has also experienced tragedy in his family, with the death of his younger brother when he was nine. Like any other person, he doesn't like to talk about the day. He also hates to be reminded that his brother isn't with him anymore, with everyone saying sorry and whatnot.

    Love: Single and Interested

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    RPer Status:

    Random_Fan: Tom Rivor, Psyduck, 15 (Active)

    Zaiku: Zaiku Garde, Ralts, 12 (Active)

    Alana: Ruya Ehiro, Sneasel, 15 (Active)

    JBCPeace: Cain Ritham, Torchic, 14 (Needs More Activity)

    Art Critic Cubone: Travis Wright, Zangoose, 15 (Active)

    Kassedilla: Isabel "Izzy" Mehler, Snorunt, 17 (Needs More Activity)

    *~Hazel~*: Kaki Tenpi, Vulpix, 14 (Needs More Activity)

    Fallen Angel_Messiah of Black Roses: AJ, Riolu, 7 (Active)

    Arach: Jennifer, Mareep, 14 (Needs More Activity)

    Omega Envoy of Darkness: Davis Kido, Cyndaquil, 14 (Active)

    Zelda theralts: Shi Kimomora, Chikorita, 14 (Needs More Activity)

    FullmetalxFangirl: Theresa Quinn, Meowth, 14 (Active)

    Raichuchika: Abby MacElree, Buizel, 12 (Active)

    Punch Bag: Shaun Markson, Mankey, 13 (No Activity Yet)

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    RPer Notes

    Well, seems that there are no notes for me to say. Well, just a reminder for those of you that want to join; you are allowed to join. Don't be afraid and go ahead and sign-up. If your sign-up meets expectations, then you are accepted, and I will make a summary just for you on exactly what has been going on.


    Final Notes

    Guys, in the past of me making RPs, I used to be very picky. If something in my RP was not going my way, I would politely ask for the poster to change their post. However, I'm just gonna push play on this one and let it rip.

    Here, do whatever you want, as long as it doesn't involve getting another RPer killed. Unless that RPer said it was okay. I'm not going to hold anything against you. If you want to get Ash and co. involved, fine, whatever. I'm not very fond of the anime, but I'm just going to let it go.

    I'll also like to say that even though you may only have one character, you can have sub-characters. These characters can range from your RP Mom or Dad to the guy down the street that always says high to you. I'll let you do that without sign-up forms as long as you keep your sign-up character as the main character to your story. I don't want to see that guy down the street doing every minute he spends in a day in your post when you're nowhere around. If you want that, make a character sheet. There's a way around that, and that is that if your character is somewhere else, and you believe it's needed to show what this character down the street is doing for a later twist, then fine. But don't show too much of this character and not your sign-up character.

    Now, lastly, don't wait for me. Guys, if I'm not here for an entire week of the RP, trust me, I'm not coming back. Just go on without me. Remember, this RP is currently directionless. As you go on, you can give a direction yourselves. I want this to be entirely told by you guys and me, not just me.

    Alright, as to end this, I'll say that I'll be saying when the days change, so if something is up with you and another RPer, I'll post saying something like, "It's time to wrap it up guys," telling you that the next day or week in RP time is near. Yes, I'll switch it from weeks too. Like many, I'm anxious to become full Pokémon too, so this is going to be a speedy for April.

    Okay, I don't believe I have anything left to say. With that, let us begin.

    EDIT: Okay, before confusion ensues, the plot. Basically, after the star, no Pokémon exists. However, what happens is that we find the star has taken away more than just
    Pokémon, but is slowly transforming humans into Pokémon. By April 1, there will be no such thing as a human. Hope this clears it up a bit. >_>;
     
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    Name: Zaiku Garde (Pronounced Garday)

    Age:12

    Gender: Male

    Location: Kanto, Cerulean ciry

    Pokémon to Become: Ralts

    Description:Zaiku is rather tall for his age, he wears a Red Head Sweatband, which has nothing on it, His hair is dark brown, and it has spikes sticking everywhere and is extremely messy. His skin is rather fair, and his eys are a pale and dry shade of blue. He wears comfortable trousers, and a longsleeve Black shirt. On top of this he wears a green Basketball singlet, with in white letters the number 7 on the front and back, which didn't have any players name. He wears white sneakers, which are marked with a slight hint of dark blue. He is 5 foot 7, so he looks much older than he actually is.

    Personality: Zaiku is immature, and a tad childish, and is always joking around, he is focused when he needs to be, but at other times, he is always kidding around. He is actually perceptive though, as many wouldn't suspect. When he is serious, he usually becomes rather quiet, and stares deeply when he is being talked to as if he is trying to sense the emotion of others through their eyes. He is strong-willed , and would do anything to protect friends and family.

    Love: Single, and completely unintrested

    RP Sample:"It's too cold!" complained Goy who was rubbing herself in an attempt to warm up.
    Shrapnel stared at her.
    "Yeah it's no walk in the sun for me either but could you please just shut up!" Shrapnel replied with a fiery tone in her voice.
    Goy obeyed and closed her mouth, yet still slightly mumbling.

    Zaiku had seemed to be in his usual state and had all of his energy, as he apparently didn't mind cold temperatures. However Skyru was the worst of the all of them. He was completely shivering and couldn't talk and covered in goosebumps, his skin had gone slightly blueish.
    And his hair was frozen into that position. The other three turned back at him gaping at his teribble state.

    Zaiku was the first to speak " SKyru is weak against the cold, yet he can resist all levels of heat."

    Shrapnel began " Well dosen't he have some sort of fire attack, he is a dragon."
    SKyru tried breathing fire, but he couldn't make not even an ember.
    Zaiku asked then" Does any of you know how to use a bow, you can use one of his Blaze arrows."

    "Umm... I can try." Shrapnel added. Skyru transformed his wing into a bow and Shrapnel picked it up off the snow it fell on, as Skyru couldn't move at all. She pulled back the string, slightly surprised by the way the arrow burst into flames, and fired it as it hit Skyru straight in the wing, which is actually his shield. and Skyru had seemed as energetic and warm as ever. Goy's face lit up.

    "Can you do me next?!" She began " I'm FREEZING over here."
    "Goy, if I were to shoot you with a fire arrow it would probably kill you." SKyru replied.
    "Fine!" She answered "But don't you have some other fire attack you could use to heat this place up a little?" Shrapnel turned around hoping for the same thing.

    "You bet!" he replied " That's genious."
    "She probably dosen't get that a lot mumbled SHrapnel who was slightly cranky due to the cold weather. Skyru stuck his arms in the air. "BLAZIRIA!" and a huge ray of fire ascended towards the sky, a few minutes later, the ray stopped, and half the snow had melted and the climate was warm enough so that all four were completely unaffected by it.

    "The snow will reform so we better hurry."implied Zaiku, and the continued walking towards the workshop.
     
    Name: Ruya Ehiro

    Age: 15

    Gender: Female

    Location: Johto, Ecruteak City

    Pokémon to Become:
    Sneasel

    Description: Ruya is tall and slim with a slightly muscular build and fair toned skin. Her dirty-blond hair is short, straight, and parted over to one side and her eyes are deep stormy blue. Her most common outfit consists of a black v-neck tank-top, faded, baggy jeans, and worn grey and black shoes. Around her waste is a plain brown belt with a brown bag attached on the left side. She wears a black wristband on each wrist and a simple dark blue choker around her neck.

    Personality: Being a very mischievous and, particularly when angered, rather sharp tongued girl, Ruya has earned herself many enemies over the years. She's almost annoyingly cheerful and very energetic most of the time. If the situation calls for it, she will become more serious and stop messing about. She has a tendency to act recklessly but some how manages to pull herself out of all sticky situations. This is mainly do to a cleverness she doesn't usually boast about and keen instincts. Despite her faults, Ruya is a perfectly nice and likable person, usually, and has a good heart as well as a soft spot for all things small and fluffy, though she positively refuses to admit it.

    History: Ruya was born and raised in Ecruteak City, Johto until she was ten. At that age she headed to the local Pokemon Center to get her first Pokemon. She traveled for five years, taking breaks every now and then to relax in towns she liked, often in Ecruteak. At fifteen she planned to head to Kanto. She had visited the region previously but had never traveled it properly. She had, however, made a few friends and heard of many interesting places. When she finished exploring a region across the sea, she decided to go back to Kanto, something she was looking forward to very much. She stopped in Ecruteak for supplies and to visit her parents. Because her plane left very early, Ruya chose to stay the Pokemon Center the night before she was to leave. This way she could have her Pokemon healed before leaving and not risk missing her flight by either oversleeping or being delayed in getting to the Center.

    Love: Single, mildly interested

    RP Sample: Rataki let out a squeal of delight as she darted from shop window to shop window, examining the merchandise within. All of her money was back at the Pokemon Center but she had already picked out at least ten items she was going to buy. "This, and that, that, oh! I've never seen that before!" She skidded to a halt in front of a window that displayed the latest capture device. A green and grey box only a little larger than a Pokeball. The sign next to it read "PokeBox, soon to replace the PokeBall. Can hold more than one Pokemon at a time and has almost a 99% capture rate!"

    "What a waste. No real trainer would bother with such a thing. What's the fun in catching Pokemon if you're guaranteed a capture? You wouldn't even have to battle it!" She glared at the box for a while longer then flicked her light green hair out of her crimson eyes and marched onward. Soon she completely forgot about the PokeBox and became enthralled with many other items.

    A beeping from the device in her ear told her that her Pokemon had been fully healed. She turned right around and sprinted past the shop windows, heading for the Pokemon Center. The sliding doors opened instantly as she approached them and she smiled. Though it happened for everyone she was sure it was quicker for her. After all, she was an interregional champion, was she not? "Nurse, I'm here for my...my Pokemon," she paused, placing a hand to her head. I must have run a bit too fast on the way here, she thought to herself.

    "Are you all right, Rataki?" The kind red haired nurse looked at Rataki in concern as she staggered slightly, taking hold of the counter to steady herself.

    "I'm fine. Got a bit dizzy there for a moment."

    "Do you need to sit down?"

    "No thank you. I'm fine now." This was not the truth but Rataki wasn't going to let anyone know that she was feeling ill. She would go to her room, pretending to get her money, and lie down for a bit. No one would notice. She accepted her Pokemon from the nurse and turned to head for her room. Another dizzy spell hit her and her head pounded terribly. She leaned against the counter on the pretext of reading a pamphlet laying on it. What's wrong with me? I must be allergic to something in here. I was fine outside.

    Deciding that her shopping could wait, she headed quickly for the door. "Are you sure you're all right, dear?" the nurse called after her, "You look pale. Come over here and sit down for a mo...oh!" She hurried from behind the counter and knelt beside the fallen girl. "Are you all right? Rataki? Rataki, can you hear me?"

    She couldn't. She had been unconscious before she hit the floor.
     
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    EDIT: yeah I was in a hurry. But after about an hour I just finnished editing all this.

    Name: Cain Ritham

    Age: 14

    Gender:Male

    Location: Pallet Town, Kanto

    Pokémon to Become: Torchic

    Description: Cain's current wieght is 150 punds. He does have facial hair. It is in the shape of a Goatee'. His iris color is blue. Cain swears that his iris changes dramaticly. His voice is deep but it usualy becomes lighter after a few weeks.

    Cain's hair is black and its hairstyle is slicked. It is currently growing longer then normal. He wears a black bandana which he tied around his neck. Cain wears a brown jacket with a hood. The inside of the hood is green with mesh. He has black gloves that are fingerless to the knuckles. His jacket has an inside pocket which he occasionaly keeps small items inside. The inside of the jacket he wears a white t-shirt with the word "SOL". He wears grey jeans with a brown belt and a silver buckle. The knee of his jeans are torn. He wears white sneakers with black laces and black socks. The soles of the shoes are peeling and Cain is still deciding whether he should buy new ones.

    Personality: Cain is pretty talkative. He can take control of any conversation and end it just as easely. However when you try his patience he will get very angry and it is impossible to calm him down. When talking to him he occasionaly mumbles his words or he forgets what words he should use. (EX: Like using Im feeling not good insted of using im feeling bad.) When given a question it takes Cain a few seconds to respond which annoys people greatly.


    Love: He is single. But doesnt have any plans to be interested. He is yet to find someone that is for him.

    Other:

    RP Sample: The clock's red numbers changed from 2:40 to 2:41. It was AM and Cain was tired. His mom had told him to study as much as he could. But he didnt think he should study this late. It was 2:41 AM and he was searching up infomation on rock pokemon. Let me see Geodude evolves into Graveler. Graveler can evolve into Golem. The picture on the next page had a picture of a Golem in a battle ready stance. He yawned for a very long time and continued to read. Golem one of the strongest rock pokemon has a very good fire resistance. It can resist even a Charizard's strongest breath and still continue to fight. Cain then closed the book that had the title "Encyclopedia of rock pokemon". He put it down and took the book "Encyclopedia of Fire pokemon." He looked at the heading Torchic. Torchic is chick pokemon. Because of its size it stays close to its trainer and fears most pokemon. However upon command Torchic can and will fight bravely. Once its relationship grows Torchic creates a bond between its trainer and may evolve. Then the page said See next page Combusken. Cain closed the Encyclopedia and started to think. Torchic, the pokemon I asked Professer Oak for. He said that Professer Birch may have one and would ask for one. That was one week ago and maybe he will have it today. I hope that I can be a good trainer for it.

    The next day however Cain walked over to Professer Oak's house. He went to the professer and asked "I would like a pokemon Professer". He turned around with a grim look on his face. "Im sorry Cain but something has happened. For absolutly no reason all the pokemon in the world have... passed on." Cain looked very dumbfounded. "WHAT???" Professer Oak went over to his computer. "look i got an email from professers all over the world. Their pokemon have vanished from the face of the world." Cain was still looking dumbfounded. But he knew this would not stop him. "Wait you mean the Torchic I requested is... gone?" Professer Oak answered "Yes im sorry". Cain then ran back to his house. His dream was shattered into a million pecies. But this would not stop him from traveling through Kanto. He went up to his room and put on his brown jacket. He zipped it up with the hood down. Then he went towards the Jeans he had placed on his chair the night before. He took off his sweat pants and put the Jeans on. With the belt all ready he went to his backpack. He placed a spare change of clothes and a few other possesions. Then he went to his dresser and took a bandana off it. It was a black bandana that he occasionaly wore on his head. But now he decided it was time for a change. He put the Bandana on his neck and tied it on the back of his neck. Okay, I do not have any pokemon. But I wonder if there are pokemon still alive out there.. Then he took off his white socks and placed his black ones on. Then he took off the boots he put on and placed on his old sneakers. He had these sneakers for a month now and they were worn and broken in. After putting this all on he went to the 2nd floor stairs and started to walk down them.



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    People who become Pokemon ninjas are better then people who become Pokemon pirates.

    Name: Travis Wright

    Age: Fifteen

    Gender: Male

    Location: Johto, Ecruteak City

    Pokemon to become: Zangoose

    Description: Travis is about 5"4, and has a body that seems tuned to long-distance athletics. His eyes are a deep, searching blue, and his hair is shoulder-length and brownish-blonde. He sports a purple sweatshirt and a pair of blue jeans, as well as a green scarf. His canines are a bit longer then average, but only by maybe a centimeter or so.

    Personality: A melancholy individual, Travis spends a lot of time thinking and brooding over the disappearance of his "brother", Ryota the Zangoose. He has a bizarre sense of humour, which isn't obvious at first glance, and is prone to punching objects at odd intervals. He has begun displaying some of Ryota's old traits as well, including a fondness for eggs, a significant attraction towards females, and a taste for head-on battles. He also refers to his friends as "Aniki", which was his pet name for Ryota. He is a little puzzled at his picking up of some of Ryota's traits, but he's too busy trying to get over the loss of his friend to worry about that. Since meeting up with Tom-tachi, however, Travis has begun to fit into the group, and his new friends have taken a weight off his mind, along with his recent discovery that what appears to be Ryota's spirit is residing within his subconscious mind, and has been influencing him the entire time.

    History: Travis was only five when his mother died of a previously unknown heart condition. He was able to get over it with the help of Ryota, who became his surrogate "big brother" in order to help him deal with the loss. Predictably, when Travis reached travelling age the only Pokemon he even considered starting out with was his Zangoose. They travelled throughout the world, searching for every possible way to have fun and be adventurous. Unfortunately, Travis was completely unable to deal with Ryota's disappearance, and returned to Ecruteak, the first town he and Ryota visited on their journey together, in order to mourn for Ryota's dissapearance. After discovering a leftover Rainbow Wing, however, Travis joined with Tom and the gang on a journey to rediscover the lost Pokemon, and cope with their changing bodies. After becoming smitten for the beautiful Vulpix morph Kaki, Travis has begun battling to protect her. Recently, he discovered the spirit of Ryota hiding in his subconscious mind, where the older Zangoose helped him out. Presumably, this is the reason for Travis's unnaturally quick mastery of Zangoose fighting-style and Pokemon techniques, as well as his tendency to flash back to his past memories of Ryota.

    Love: Single, technically, but after sharing a kiss with Kaki... well... you be the judge. XD

    RP Sample (Taken from Toomi's "The Pokemon League"):

    As Travis and his Pokemon exited the locker room and entered the arena, the first thing that hit them was the light- not surprising, since they had been sitting in a dimly-lit locker room for the past hour, and the sudden sunshine was a bit of a shock. The bigger surprise was the number of people packed into the stands. Travis couldn't help but stare. He had never seen this many people at one tournament in his entire career as a trainer. "I had forgotten how big of a deal this tournament is," he whispered to Ryota under his breath.

    Ryota nodded. <I hope you aren't too nervous, Travis-nii-san. It's gonna be hard to battle if you choke up on us.> he replied, giving his trainer a playful cuff on the arm.

    "Well, with people as crazy as you behind me, how can I lose?" Travis asked, allowing himself to dissolve into quiet laughter as he and his Pokemon ascended the stage, and stared across the battlefield at their opponent. Travis was a bit surprised that he had been matched with a girl in his first fight, and one that Ryota had molested the Pokemon of to boot. He sometimes wondered if God was playinng games with him, setting him up with people like this. Ah, well, it was time to get started. And what better way to begin then a little friendly banter? "Ay, hello! My name is Travis, and I am honored to be fighting a trainer of your caliber today!" he shouted, "I'm sorry for whatever Ryota-nii-san did but if I win I promise to help pay for any therapy your Pokemon may or may not need to go through!"

    <Travis, shut the heck up! She might take you up on it!> Ryota hissed.

    "It's the only gentlemanly thing to do! If you hadn't molested her Pokemon, we wouldn't have this problem!" Travis growled in return, flashing a glare at his Pokemon. Ah, well, the announcer was droning on- it appeared to be time to let out Pokemon number one. "Alright, Hikari, you're up!" he commanded. The pearl-white Absol nodded, and jumped into the arena with a flying leap.
     
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    Okay, where to begin. Let's see:

    Zaiku: Alright, both description and personality are done pretty good. You've hinted in your personality why the being you are becoming is a Ralts, and may end up being a really good addition in this RP, considering Ralts show the image of females, and you are playing as a guy. Your RP sample is a bit choppy, but you seem to be an average writer. Your RP sample's writing sort of reminds me of Piers Anthony's. Okay, *Accepted*

    Alana: A very well thought out sign-up. Your description and personality completely remind that of a Sneasel. It's a very good plus, and when your RP sample lives up to your writing style, it's even better. It's all very good, so you are very, *Accepted*

    Grim: Well, you've met the minimum on description and personality. But, if you ask me, they sounded pretty bland. Like, maybe you just tossed whatever it was in your mind there. That's the usual case; everyone's always in a hurry, so don't worry about that, but if you could make it better, that'd be great. As for the sample…well, it's kind of a block of words. You have two paragraphs, one with you going to Oak's lab, and the other is just a conversation with you and Oak. It's not very professional. I'm going to have to ask you, if you will, to write a better RP sample. For now, *Pending*

    Art Critic Cubone: Description and personality are well done, though I'd like to remind you that the effects of transformation aren't happening until after the first three days. Reading from your personality, you talk about your Zangoose. That, together with the history, seems to add something very good, twist-wise and drama-wise. Now, just finish the RP sample, and you are accepted. *Pending*

    Now, I'll just wait for one more sign-up to begin, if Grim and ACC finish up thier sign-ups. Remember, in this RP, even you can take the reigns of where the direction goes. Don't be afraid to do something, like say, have a hunch that one of the legendaries is responsible and go on an adventure. And even if that adventure becomes true, that it is the fualt of a legendary, I'll let it pass. This RP is here because I want to see how a storyline can twist and turn with many ideas pitched in. It'll be fun. ;)
     
    Name: Isabel "Izzy" Mehler

    Age: 17

    Gender: Female

    Location: Johto, resides in Mahogany Town, but is currently in Viridian City

    Pokemon to Become: Snorunt

    Description: Isabel's appearance is quite gangly, her being awkwardly tall and lanky in build. That being said, however, she has a certain charm to her appearance, and is hardly what you'd call homely. Her hair is straight and cut in a long 'v-shaped' style, where the length is mainly in the back while the side and front pieces appear shorter and frame her face. It is also strawberry blonde in color, and is usually worn in a ponytail. Like the rest of her, her face isn't particularly special, but is far from ugly. The only really 'outstanding' feature of Isabel's face would be her dark, blue-grey eyes, and even then, they're fairly average, in her opinion.
    Isabel's attire is about as average as the rest of her: It merely consists of t-shirts and blue-jeans.

    Personality: Horribly pessimistic in nature, Isabel is a natural-born whiner. If she has something to complain about, well, she will. She is terribly self-centered at times, has little tolerance for stupidity, and always has something sarcastic to say, making it hard for people not to find her annoying. As a result of this, she has very few friends, which probably doesn't help her already inherently melancholy nature, and, if anything, makes her even more bitter than she could be. She also has a fiery temper when provoked, which, all in all, certainly doesn't help matters any.
    Of course, she has her good qualities, too: She is very level-headed(When she wants to be, anyway.), has a strong sense of justice and, although she'd never admit it, cares for her loved ones dearly and would do anything to help them if they were ever in serious danger.

    History: Predictably, Isabel's past was fairly average and not particularly special. She grew up with her mother(Isabel was an illegitimate child and has never met her father, something she is obviously somewhat bitter about but refuses to bring up.) in Mahogany Town and has lived there her entire life, and, apart from the Lake Rage incident, it's been rather uneventful.
    For the past few weeks, she has been living in Viridian City with her cousins and uncle because her mother forced her to, claiming that Isabel needed to get out more. Of course, Isabel has been whining the entire time, driving her cousins so crazy, and it probably won't be long until they kick her out. For now, however, she is joining in on the search for her little cousin's Meowth, Nunu. Or at least, that's what she's supposed to be doing: She's really just been wandering around aimlessly with no particular destination.

    Love: Single and interested, though she claims not to be.

    Sample RP:

    Isabel sighed in relief as she embraced the silence of the room. She slowly felt herself relax in the bed, so much so that she even managed to let a rare smile of contentment appear on her face. Her blond bangs hanging over her eyes, she let herself reflect on the day. She sighed again, feeling the built-up tension slowly leaving her body.
    This had been the first time in days that she'd had a quiet moment to herself, without the constant mayhem of her relatives' household. The girl frowned at the thought. As much as loved them, she couldn't help but wonder how in the world her aunt and uncle put up with all the chaos. There was always something going on in the house between her five (Female.) cousins, from the constant arguments over who put the empty milk carton back in the fridge to the violent hair-pulling fights over who needed to use the bathroom first. It was a wonder that everyone hadn't gone insane by now: Isabel had been here a week now and she already felt like she was just two deathglares away from snapping.
    Finding herself annoyed by the mere thought of it, she tried to think of something else, to no avail. Luckily, however, Nunu, her youngest cousin's pet Meowth, came walking in and jumped on the bed with Isabel, wanting to be petted. Despite herself, the teen found herself smiling. Although she'd never admit it, she really liked Nunu: The Pokemon seemed to be the only thing that kept her sane while in the household. As she started to scratch behind the feline's ear, she finally felt herself start to relax again, and was soon as she had been earlier. She sighed another sigh of contentment before being interupted by the loud noise of someone running through the hallways, and then the bedroom door slamming. This, in turn, was followed by the sound of Nunu hissing, then scratching Isabel as the feline fleed in terror to seek refuge under the bed.

    "BOOM!"

    Isabel frowned and glared at her cousin. So much for the silence.

    "Izzzyyyyyyyyy! Have you seen Nunu?"

    Throwing a pillow at the little red-haired girl, Isabel replied dryly.

    "No."
     
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    Alana: A very well thought out sign-up. Your description and personality completely remind that of a Sneasel. It's a very good plus, and when your RP sample lives up to your writing style, it's even better. It's all very good, so you are very, *Accepted*

    Thanks much. ^_^ Now I wait for the RP to begin. I think I'll need to hope on a ferry to Kanto since that's where almost everyone seems to be.
     
    Name: Kaki Tenpi

    Age: 14

    Gender: Female

    Location: Lavender Town, Kanto

    Pokémon to Become: Vulpix

    Description: Fiery red hair cascades down to touch just past her shoulders, but is usually seen up and flaring out the top of her head with a handy hair clip. She is thin, but not unhealthly thin. She can be flexible and stands at a rather short 5' 2". Kaki knows how to defend herself and her body compliments that, although her personality doesn't. Kaki is very healthy and keeps herself very healthy with a well balanced diet and training with her Pokemon.

    Personality: Kaki is a quiet person, liking peace, quiet, and relaxation over battling, being nervous, or sudden action. Although, she has to admit, she has periods of time where its like she needs a little action. Especually after a sudden burst of action, once its over, there's extra adrenaline left in her veins. Dispite Kaki's first impression, Kaki loves to be sarcastic and loves to laugh and smile. She also is very loyal and defends everything she cares about. Also, it isn't the grestest idea to get on Kaki's bad side, for she can be one tough chick. Piss her off, you're guaranteed a good fight.

    History: Kaki was born in Lavender Town, and was back to visit for a few days. She likes Ghost and Fire Pokemon the best, and Kaki dislikes water a lot since she can't swim very well. Kaki's mother had a job of mantaining the Tower, cleaning the graves and the flower pedals from the ground. Since she followed her Mother to work often, not a lot of things scare Kaki.

    Love: Single, and more interested than she claims to be.

    Other: Kaki can't swim if her life depended on it. She's taken swimming lessons, and was taught how to float, but no matter what she does to stay on the surface, she ends up sinking.

    RP Sample: Amber streched as she continued walking around the town, watching for anything unusual or against the law. Amber only really joined the Pokemon Police for some action, but so far there hadn't been any down her alley. She read about how the weird Mizumi had already stolen Mew and Kyogre. Kyogre was more recently stolen, but Amber couldn't do much since her team consisted of Fire Type Pokemon.

    Flare walked at her right while Tiger padded along behind Amber, and Toto at Amber's left. Her Pokemon were rather protective of her. "I'd rather be working with Sugar..." Amber mumbled to herself quietly, picking Sugar's Pokeball off her belt to look at it as she continued on her way. Soon, she placed the Pokeball where it belonged and sighed, looking up towards the sky.

    What kind of threat did the Mizumi pose? They already have two legendary Pokemon. Amber silently hoped that nothing horrible would happen to all of the other legendaries, already feeling bad for the Pokemon captured. She just wished they'd find the Muzumi Hide Out sooner. Amber wanted to be the first one in. Fearless and ruthless, the Muzumi deserved no mercy. Taking wild and free Pokemon from their natural habitats unwillingly was wrong. Besides, if they were as evil as they claimed, the condition of both legendaries may be critical. She could only pray for their safety.
     
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    Kasedilla: Well written sign-up. all three, discription, personality, and history show us all that this could be a problem for your character, and something she'll have to face. Now just finish up, and like ACC will be, you are accepted. *Pending*

    Gee, now if only there weren't three pending, then we could begin tonight. >_> Unfortunately, I'm gonna be fair and wait until they show me their finished product, or if they just quit.

    Well Alana, this gives you some time to think of a reason for coming to Kanto. Of course, the RP hasn't started yet, so you could just change your location to Kanto. ;)
     
    *~Hazel~*: This is another good sign-up. Yes, you can be a shiny. I won't have that restriction against anyone. There is nothing but perfect I can say for all discription, personality, and RP sample. You show a great writing ability and your character seems like a very likable one. So, you are, *Accepted*
     
    Well Alana, this gives you some time to think of a reason for coming to Kanto. Of course, the RP hasn't started yet, so you could just change your location to Kanto. ;)
    Aw, but that would ruin the perfect opportunity to make things more difficult than they have to be. :P If I can't think of a good way and reason to take Ruya from Johto to Kanto, I'll change her location to Kanto.
     
    Grim: Alright, your sign-up is better. Though, I'd have to say you missed the point when I said your RP sample was a block of words. However, I see from reading it again that you have indeed written it in a much more mature manner. So, you'd be, *Accepted*
     
    Ralts shown as a female? But in the games the gender is 50-50.....
    Meh, we'll see how this plays out then eh? Sorry about the chopiness of the sample, One day, I will edit that sample, and get rid of the minor spelling errors and what-not.

    Edit: What age rating is this rp? Just so I know...
     
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    Random Fan: PLEASE do not double post! It's against Pokecommunity Forum Rules!

    Grim: And it's against the Roleplaying Rules to ask when the RP is starting~
     
    Grim: Actually, I was going to say until we have five or more signed up and accepted, but with me, surprisingly, that'd make five. So, I can guess we start now, but I'd like to wait for ACC and Kasedilla to finish. Or if the demmand is too much, then we'll start now. >_>

    Zaiku: Yeah, there is a fifty fifty, but have you ever pictured an evolved male Gardevoir? There are feminine qualities are all over that. XD Oh, and as for age, I wouldn't say anything over PG. I'll add that to the first post.

    Bijou: My bad, I was just replying to Hazel's sign-up. Won't happen again. ;)
     
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    Zaiku: Yeah, there is a fifty fifty, but have you ever pictured an evolved male Gardevoir? There are feminine qualities are all over that. XD

    *cries* Okay you got me on that one, but hey, it's like seeing a female Machamp, its possible but just plain looks wrong...
    But don't expect me to change which pokemon I am.... I love Gardeviour, they are just so dang awesome! But yeah, they do look feminine. Oh and looks like you will see a fully evolved male Gardevior at some stage... Hehehe...
     
    *~Hazel~*: This is another good sign-up. Yes, you can be a shiny. I won't have that restriction against anyone. There is nothing but perfect I can say for all discription, personality, and RP sample. You show a great writing ability and your character seems like a very likable one. So, you are, *Accepted*

    (( Ooooh, squee!~ I was so nervous of not being accepted. xD;; Anyway, thanks a lot, this RP is gonna be fun. =3 ))
     


    *cries* Okay you got me on that one, but hey, it's like seeing a female Machamp, its possible but just plain looks wrong...
    But don't expect me to change which pokemon I am.... I love Gardeviour, they are just so dang awesome! But yeah, they do look feminine. Oh and looks like you will see a fully evolved male Gardevior at some stage... Hehehe...
    Hmm, well I don't think it'll be too much of a problem once you reach your final evolution. Male Ralts eventually evolve into Erureido and it is much more masculine.
     
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