The Vaati Dex

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    Some of you may remember my old comic, pokemon Egon. Well anyways, what some of you won't know is that I planned to make a pokedex to go with it. So far I have four pokemon, all from scratch. I have 3 out of 4 shineys done. Comments are more than appreciated.

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    And for all those who aprove and enjoy this project, please, spread the word.

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    Nice work, Vaati. The gorrilla is very nice, my favorite, but, it's head is odd. If you take off a little bit on the right side of it's head. it'll be good, but, if you add an ear, it would be better with an ear shape.

    1st: 8/10
    2nd: 9/10
    3rd: 7/10 It looks too 2-D.
    4th: 9.4/10
     
    I personally dislike the 3rd one myself, it was pretty rushed. And the first one was my first ever fake. But I agree with everything you're saying.
     
    Ahh...another FakeDex project. I always enjoy checking out new FakeDexes. I love the style you used on them. They could definately use some work in a number of areas, mainly shading. Although the shading on the Cosape is really good. Overall, I like these a lot!! As always, good work man. Keep it up. XD
     
    I'm only really satisfied with the shading on Karshorn and Cosape, I don't mind the shading on Whyorn, as he's my favorite (due to being my first)
     
    Those two were the ones I thought were done the best as well. That's funny though. Corcyro was my first scratch and he's still my favorite. XD It's like a sentimental thing, I guess.
     
    Vaati, you had done a nice work, some of the best scratches i've seen.

    Still, in some parts the shading is kind of... "annoying", if you do get my point.

    Now i just want to know the types...
     
    That was total spam Valdorath
    Also, Vaati. I love your scratches, the shading is done well( or atleast to what I can do)
     
    wow. i like the ape thing, Cosape. just like king-kong, except littler. nice work on all of them, better than anything i could do, lol. keep up the good work, and make up other neat pokemon too-;)
     
    Thank you all =D

    By the way, I updated Ornimar a little, he now has unfolding wings/fins.

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    Vaati-san said:
    I personally dislike the 3rd one myself, it was pretty rushed. And the first one was my first ever fake. But I agree with everything you're saying.
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    Agreed.
    I think that that's some nice shading there Vaati!
    I only think your lineart could be somewhat smoother.
     
    Alas, lineart has always being my weakest point -_-

    Thank you for the comment though ^^
     
    Really good... The shading is a bit annoying... But that's all I see that could get in the way. Keep up the good work!
     
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