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Through Umbreon Eyes

Amy-chan

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    Rin-Rin said:
    You people...are yelling "Sunlight" in public? o.O Okay, how about you end each sentence with "in accordance with the prophecy" for a while? xD

    I'm not posting the story right now, but I uh...think those things in your sig are the pwnage XDXDXDXDXDXDXD
    I agree with Rin-Rin. In accordance to the prophecy. XD
     

    Rin-Rin

    RUG HEADS! :3
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    Would you like some ice cream *cough*inaccordancewiththepropechy*cough*?

    A metal can had glided through the air towards me. I skillfully dodged it, it striking BoughLeaf squarely on the back of the head. He flinched and rubbed the bump on the spot and merely said nothing as he threw the heavy can to Phlow.

    ?What?s that?? I interrogated. Phlow unsheathed a single claw and used it to open the can. ?Food.? He replied. ?We are served one can a day, so take in your nourishment gratefully.?

    He poured the contents of the food on the ground and I wrinkled my nose at the stench. ?That?s food?? I whined. ?Nourishment??

    ?S?better than nothin??? BoughLeaf grumbled. ?Quit complaining??

    WaterWing took her share of the colorless goo and tucked in on it appreciatively. I noticed how little we each were given and how evenly these creatures split it. They were the fairest pokemon I had ever met.

    ?Is it safe?? I asked under my breath to Phlow. He was the one I felt most comfortable with?BoughLeaf was far too unsociable and WaterWing was too old. Phlow nodded. ?Isn?t poisoned?mine as well take a taste. Remember, one serving a day??

    ?I know?I know?? I said, believing only partly. I licked the edge of the goop and gagged.

    ?Nasty, isn?t it.? BoughLeaf laughed. ?It takes some getting used to.?

    After the small and disgusting meal (if you could call it a meal, or even a snack), they all enjoyed sharing their stories with each other.

    ?Believe it or not, I was part of the Squirtle Gang once.? WaterWing laughed. I looked at her in disbelief. She nodded. ?Yes?after I lost my trainer as a young Squirtle, they found me trying to drown myself in a mud puddle. I was miserable back then?I wanted to die of all the pain my heart suffered. They took me in and nursed my cold and such. I was very thankful for their affection and nurturing.?

    ?But, as the years went by, they began to treat me as their pet. I was the only female of the gang and wasn?t considered ?cool enough.? They began to abuse me?sexually abuse me, actually. I had far too many kids at that time??

    ?That?s heartless!? I cried. I couldn?t control myself?she had gone through so much pain. ?Who would do such a thing??

    ?The Squirtle Gang, apparently. So, I ran away from them and never saw them again. Afterwards, I was mourning over my trainer. I decided, ?well, better pick up from where I left off?? so I did. I began battling with wild bugs and such in Viridian Forest. Eventually, I evolved into what I am now?? She heaved a great sigh. ?Ah?but then I became popular among the humans. Viridian Forest became my home and that was a famous trail for young trainers. People tried to catch me and such, but it never happened?until the news of me slipped out to Giovanni??

    ?She?s been here ever since.? Phlow sighed. ?Six years??

    ?Six?? I looked up to the ceiling. ?Wow??

    ?There?s nothing you should know much about me.? Phlow said, closing his eyes. ?I was stolen.?

    ?You mean you also had a trainer?? I asked, fascinated. Phlow nodded gruffly. ?Indeed. She was quite the good one, too. Strong and very strategetic. Her team was quite robust, despite the fact that she was a girl. She didn?t have small puffs of pink fluff as her pokemon??

    ?Anyways, I was stolen by Team Rocket because I was Tori?s favorite. I was also known to be one of the strongest pokemon of Johto. I was stolen in the middle of the night, making it impossible for Tori or the police to know that it was Team Rocket. They left no sign that they were there. No finger prints, no foot steps, only the absence of me. They were brilliant.?

    ?Did you put up a fight?? I asked. He shook his head in disappointment. ?They had a strange poke ball?I couldn?t escape it. I?m surprised they don?t just confine me in it itself. I?ve been here for three years.?

    ?BoughLeaf?what about you?? WaterWing asked the Treeko. Throughout the day, the little green lizard was crouched over, averting everyone?s gaze by looking sadly at the floor. Although he acted sorrowful, he told his story without hesitation.

    ?My mother, Fronalas, was the most powerful wild pokemon of Western Forest. She was swift powerful?a complete master of stealth?it was soon that Team Rocket heard of this incredible pokemon??

    ?They attempted for years to capture her, but failed drastically every single time. Amazing how the human mind works, though?they decided to capture me to try and get to mother?s head?but I haven?t seen her in a year?she?she forgot about me?she?s not coming to get me??

    He said all this with his head bowed. I saw the tears shed from his eyes as they dripped onto the concrete floor. I padded over to him and licked him comfortingly on the back. ?It?s alright?? I told him. ?Your mother has sent me.?

    ?I figured that?? He sobbed under his breath so no one would hear. ?How else would you have the Jewel??
     

    Amy-chan

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    ^^ Oooh, cliffhangy! What's going to happen next?

    For making such a great fanfic, I shall obey you and say, 'in accordance to the prophecy' at the end of my next few posts. XD

    In accordance to the prophecy.
     

    Rin-Rin

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    Phlow and WaterWing had understood after a few moments that the discussion between BoughLeaf and I wasn?t to be shared among the four of us together. By the undertone in which we spoke in, they knew that it was a secret between the two of us. The Quilava and the Wartortle exchanged glances and nodded in unison, both indicating that they should get some rest. At that, they curled up into opposite corners and shut their eyes, both straining their ears to listen in on what we were speaking of.

    ?I met your mother only few days ago.? I had said to the small Treeko. ?It was when I couldn?t help but spy on the Espeon, Sunlight. I thought of her constantly?the thoughts were so compulsive?I couldn?t help but live off of them. Because of all these dangerous thoughts, I thought I should give the Espeon up?I thought maybe I was in love with her, and that?s when I ran into your mother?well, she ran into me.?

    ?She told me that love was the way and that I shouldn?t give her up. It wasn?t the most colorful conversation, but it was useful. She gave me the Jewel, telling me that it would help in my life of love?and then she went away.?

    ?She was meaning for you to find me.? BoughLeaf sobbed. ?She was wise. Giovanni wanted her for what she had; the Jewel! If she gave up the Jewel and made someone eat it?then she would be lifted of the burden forever??

    ?Yes?she also wanted me to find you.? I had said to comfort him. BoughLeaf looked up from his folded arms. ?Did she tell you that?? He sobbed. I hesitated. ?Yes.? I lied. ?She dearly misses you. She wanted me to??

    ?You?re lying?? He croaked. ?Mother told me how to tell if someone was lieing?it?s all in how their breath acts?and your breath was thin.? He curled up into his corner, the corner where the crack leaked the rays of the full moon onto him. ?Leave me be. I need to rest.?

    I backed away and looked to WaterWing who pretended to sleep. I heard the Treeko quickly revert to deep, warm breaths, signifying that he was in comfortable sleep. WaterWing opened one eye and told me, ?Don?t worry, Moonlight. He is always this way. Come, sleep with me. I shall tell you ways of our cell.?

    ?More like ?the ways of our hell.?? Phlow grumbled as he shifted in his lying sleep. I frowned at his defiant words and looked to WaterWing who was also frowning sadly.

    ~*~​

    We were awoken by the sound of the sliding cell door opening. We all hopped back and backed against the wall as the Team Rocket administrator?s form was framed in the window. I arched my back and hissed ferociously but WaterWing touched my shoulder. ?Learn not to fight. You?ll get the consequence of punishment.?

    My back straightened and I bowed my head resignedly as the admin hoisted me up gently. I was surprised at how tender he was with me. I was expecting him to yank me up by the scruff, but held me much like the human mother hold an infant. I instantly considered him fondly of me.

    ?Alright?? He told me gruffly. ?Let?s head out.?

    ?Where?s he taking him?? Phlow asked WaterWing. ?Is he free to go??

    ?I don?t know...? WaterWing whispered.

    The last I saw before the metal door clanged shut was BoughLeaf squatting in the corner with his face in his hands. I truly felt sorry for him?he was only a kid?

    ?You?re quite docile.? The human told me. I looked up to him curiously. He was smiling boldly. ?We?ve never had a pokemon here that never put up a true fight.?

    I purred reassuringly. I liked the human. He may have been a Team Rocket member, but he complimented me and that?s all that mattered. I was cared for?


    La-dee-dah...I'm bored...
     

    ~Mars~

    Kurama obsessed as usuall
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    Ahhhhhh why are you bored the butter wars are raging. Your welcome to join you are the great creator! *Bows*
    Oh great creator spare me you cliff hanger will on day kill me, but i would die for you great creator! your story is the best better than the rest!
    By the by we should stick to the opriginal butter wars with ice cream things would become too confusing. Here have some carrots vegitairian.
    Gohan patrol the area and ill pay your wage in butter. Now go!
    CharMZ join in the wars!
    XD long post!
    ~In accordance to the prophecy
     

    Amy-chan

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    From now on, we all must say 'in accordance to the prophecy' at the end of our posts, for the great cliffhangy creator wishes it. *bows* In accordance to the prophecy.

    EDIT: Omg! *slaps head* It's 'in accordance with the prophecy'! :dead: I'm sorry, Rinspoon. I have failed you.

    In accordance WITH the prophecy.
     
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    Kurono

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    Wars? What wars? XD Well I'm getting hungry with all this butter talk...XD

    In accordance with the prophecy..XD
     

    Rin-Rin

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    Sorry I'm being such a lazy butt >.< I like to slack off a lot.

    The administrator held me in one arm as he reached out his other arm to enter some type of code on an allignment of buttons on the wall. After a few seconds, an opening appeared and we entered. The room had the vile stench of pollution about it--possibly the scent of ciggarette smoke. I sneezed and the admin patted my head.

    "Do you have the cargo, Cornelius?" A gruff voice came from behind a chair. The back of the chair was facing towards us, but upon closer observation, I discovered the top of a human head poking from behind. Also, a line a smoke reached up to the ceiling. That must be the source of this stench...I thought.

    "Yes, sir." The admin nodded and placed me on the desk in front of the chair. I shivered as soon as I was placed. I felt the Jewel glow inside me. Evil...It whispered in my thoughts. There's something evil here...

    I gasped as the chair slowly swiveled around and a human was distinguised in the chair. He placed his elbows on the desk and smiled at me maliciously. A thick stick dangled from his mouth, glowing at the end and emitting smoke. He wore a pin-striped suit...I realized immediately by his uncanny presense that he must be...Giovanni...

    "Very nice..." I chuckled as he put his thick fingers upon my tender head. I recoiled and stumbled back. Get off of me... I growled lowly in my throat, and remembered what WaterWing had said..."Don't fight back..."

    "Are you sure it's the one?" The admin had asked. "It's just a normal Umbreon..."

    "That's where yer wrong, Corn." Giovanni laughed as he pulled the stick out of his mouth and waved it about. He crossed his feet across the table, totally disregarding me. "You see, this little fellow acts different than any other Umbreon I have seen. I saw him from my copter one day running to the forest for no apparent reason. Minutes later I spotted a large herd of Pinser stampeding across the ground. These Pinser were miles behind him before this happened. And besides, an Umbreon doesn't have that good of hearing. He wouldn't be able to hear them before they came.

    "How can we be so sure with such a small observation, sir?" The admin asked.

    Giovanni put his feet down and grabbed my chin and looked at me closely. "Hook him up."
     
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    ~Mars~

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    Hook him up? Whats he gonna do? WHATS HE GONNA DO???

    Ok well Marsy thinks she'll let the prisinors go now but if you try to steal my butter then your in big fatty fat trouble! She'll use this borrowed mallet Marsy promises!

    Sorry for spammy sort of post but Marsy's sure that is what is going through everyones head right now so please excuse it.

    Awsome,Rinny-Spoon-Chan! Rock on!
     

    Kurono

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    Awesome Rin...I think I know what's gonna happen...but no spoilers..XD

    EDIT::
    I forgot to say..
    In accordance with the prophecy.
     
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    ~Mars~

    Kurama obsessed as usuall
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    You know somthing that would be even better than saying in accordance with the prophecy? Talking in third person! Marsy is doing it alredy for awhile. Besides I say it a lot at home and it's driving my family crazy.
    ~Cheesecake llama
     

    Rin-Rin

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    I am really sorry everyone, but I can't post another chapter until either Saturday or Sunday. My computer is unhooked because I am moving Friday >.< Sooooo sorry.

    {Edit:}

    Don't mind me. I lied. The computer's hooked up again :D But I'm not posting more until someone else replies >)
     
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    Rin-Rin

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    Annnyways, forget the reply thing-a-ma-bob; I'm gonna post it right now...

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    I felt something swiftly collide with the back of my cranium, sending me crashing down onto the table. A high-pitched ringing sang annoyingly in my ears and my eyes slowly drooped down...my head swam continuously and it felt as if needles were piercing into my brain twenty at a time. The ringing screamed and screamed...my thoughts flashed blindingly in my mind as my thoughts slowly depleted...and I was falling into darkness...the deepest, darkest chasms of my nightmares.

    ~*~​

    "Out." Cornelius told his leader with a nod. "Completely out, sir." He moved his hand towards the dark creature unsurely. "Would you like me to escort him to Vialle?"

    Giovanni pierced through the administater's eyes and blew cigar smoke out of his nostrils. Cornelius forced a cough back into his lungs, knowing it impolite to show weakness in front of the boss.

    "Take it." Giovanni said, crossing his fingers and turning the back of the chair on the admin. Cornelius picked the unconscious Umbreon up as gently as he could, stroking him admirably. "Yes, sir..." He hesitated and headed towards the exit.

    "Oh, and Corn..." Giovanni gruffly added. The admin turned around, his legs tremoring. "Don't call it 'he', alright? I get the impression that your a little attached to that mutt."

    Cornelius nodded and scurried out the office without a word.

    ~*~​

    The soothing noise of crashing waves were heard...they were somewhat soothing. The waves did not exactly "crash," but they more...kissed the rocks that I heard them crash upon...My vision became clearer and I began to sea a great ocean open beneath me, the waves moving in and out, curving and roaring heroicly. The rocks stood high up, pointing to the heavens towards me. I breathed in the ocean air, for I never smelled the scent before. It was salty and smelled of fish. I looked around and realized...I was floating in mid-air! I felt a giddy glow fill inside of me. I zoomed down and got closer to the splashing waters.

    Up close, the scent of salt intensified. It filled my lungs and made me...well, happy. I splashed my paws in the water as I still dangled in the air. I then arched my back and speed down into the deeps, savoring the wonderous world around me.

    As the water rippled through my fur, I felt delightment consume me. I watched in amazement as schools of goldeen floated around lazily...billions of them! They looked at me without a care...then there I saw anemones swaying the waters current, sitting upon vibrantly-colored rocks. Purple, orange, green, blue, pink...all the colors of the rainbow and Earth around me.

    But, my solace was broken by a thunderous roar which sent bubble lodged beneath the rocks speeding towards the surface. I felt my chest shrivel and I gasped for air but instead received a lungful of water. I floundered to the surface and coughed up the salty-tasting liquid and took gasps of air. I attempted bounding from the water, but couldn't. I couldn't fly anymore! I was normal once again!

    A shadow passed over the sun and I spotted a sleek green figure far off above my head. It stirred and flew faster than ligtening, turning all the clouds blood-red and the sky pitch black. I felt my heart hammer. The paddled over any land I could find and found an island of loose sand. I clammbered on. I looked up, realizing the shadow cast upon me. There, descending forever to the heavens, was a golden-brown tower.

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    That shows how sinister and evil I am
     
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    Rin-Rin

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    Utter Disaster said:
    Wow. A good story. Makes ya wonder what's gonna happen next.
    Thanks! I need compliments to keep me going.

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    "Incredible." Giovanni smirked as he said the remark, holding his thick cigar between his yellowing fingertips. He was observing a monitor hanging from the ceiling. "Vialle, this machine of yours is handy." He sucked on his cigar and puffed out a cloud of grey smoke. "I give you my word. It's magnificent."

    "Thank you, Sir." Vialle said as he adjusted some cords at the back of the main generator. "It took me ages to make it up." The doctor's scrawny face appeared from behind the large metal hunk with his thick glasses nearly to the tip of his nose and slightly askew. "Is image coming in clear?"

    "Quite." Giovanni growled through his breath. He kept his back stiff as he watched the images on the screen. It was like watching a cataclysmic movie through the eyes of a small animal. Dr. Vialle, knowing that his work had been approved, nodded and pushed up his glasses, continuing his tedious work.

    The miniscule laboratory in which they both were present in was one scarcely spoken of throughout the Viridian Gym. It was a dank room that was dimly lit only by green glowing liquids in bottles and tubes. Glass cases lined the wall about the height and width of the average man. These large, tubular cases contained with them not only mysterious neon liquids, but pokemon floating nearly lifelessly within them. Tubes were connected to their muzzles, leading out to the air-filled room, allowing them to breathe. Cord were strapped down to their heads and wriggled slightly at the little movement of the pokemon they were attached to.

    "I'm planning on making a machine like this for the other two over there." Vialle jerked his head over to a pair of nearly identical pokemon: one female and colored red and white, and one male and colored blue and white. They both bore wings upon their backs and a symbol upon their breast.

    "Superb." Giovanni smiled at this. He knew that these pokemon, Latias and Latios, were both great readers of minds and of the future. With both of them and the new addition, there was nothing stopping them from discovering when Mirage Island would appear...precisely!

    "This one's dreams seem to be quite useful." Dr. Vialle remarked as he came up to observe the monitor. "They are vivid and show us quite clearly what is happening."

    "I'm not concerned on how vivid they are, Vialle." Giovanni snarled. "I'm more interested in how they tell me where Rayquaza is and when Mirage Island will appear. Just showing me Sky Pillar doesn't tell me anything."

    "We can discover the date simply by looking at the sun in this dream." Dr. Vialle told his boss smartly. "I so that eventually the Umbreon will look up to the sun."

    Almost as if Vialle predicted it, the vision on the monitor directed towards the sky and a shining light shown in front of their eyes.

    "Ah..." Vialle sighed. "Equinox. That is when Mirage Island will appear."

    "You're certain?" Giovanni questioned. Vialle nodded and took a note on his clipboard. "Quite certain. Some creature with psychic powers would most undoubtedly have incredibly accurate dreams. I'm scheduling our departure on September the ninetenth."

    "I will send some grunts to the site immediately." Giovanni said. "They'll arrive by helicopter. They have a few gadgets of their own; they'll no what to do." He whipped a phone out of his pocket and dialled a number.

    ~*~​

    [Oh, joy...I bet this'll give you a laugh]

    "James, get your elbow out of the way!"
    "Hey! That's not my elbow!"
    "Ouch! Watch where you putcher fingers, wise guy!"

    A man with sleek purple hair poked his head from out of a bush and looked around stupidly. A voice from inside the bush asked, "Is the coast clear?"

    "Twerp heading up the trail and five o'clock!" He told the bush he was in as he shaded his eyes and looked out to a group of four kids coming up the trail. He ducked down back into the bush and chuckled to himself.

    "What's so funny?" A girl's voice snarled next to him inside the bush.

    "Oh, it's nothing Jesse. It's just the perfect plan! We dig a gigantic hole, cover is with twigs, leaves, and sand, and wait for them to fall into their doom! It's just so fantastic!"

    The form of a cat head poked out of the bush and looked ahead. He saw a boy, hanging his head and possibly crying and a girl wearing his bandana attempting to comfort him.

    "Heads up, you guys! I don't think the twerps have the Pikachu." The cat said. Jesse and James pulled the cat back into the bush furiously.

    "What?!" Growled Jesse. "No Pikachu? Then this plan is just pointless?"

    "Well, at least we get to steal any other goodies they have." James cackled.

    The boy and the girl came closer and closer into their direction. James was chuckling inside his chest and Jesse waited impatiently. Right before they came to the line of the trap, an annoying little tune of Row, Row, Row Your Boat broke the silence.

    "What the--?" Jesse exclaimed. She clonked James on the head. "Why didn't you put your phone of silent?!"

    James ignored her and answered the phone.

    "Hallo?"


    That...that's funny xD
     

    ~Mars~

    Kurama obsessed as usuall
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    ROFL!!! That was Funny. *brakes out into song* Row Row Row your boat gently down the stream! *Settles down*..... ok ok where was I?

    Great! Another bit to add to The Great Bits and Pieces of Novels By my Best Friend Spoony the Rinninator Book!

    Butter Wars you are dieing! *atempts to recunstruct obscure object with slimy butter you find at the movies in the dispensers labled:Extra Butter*
    It has to Be as repiulsive as before or else nobody will want to eat its brothers and sisters that lead(pronounced with the sound like the rocky mineral...Pheew) to war!!
    ~Marsy-Most random peron In the world!
     

    Psychotic_Demon

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    Kreeee! That was funnay!! Row, rwo, row, your boat, Gently down the stream. If you see a crocodile, don't forget to scream.... Sorry, I couldn't help it.

    Anyways, I saw a few mistakes, but nothing too big. So, great job!! Kree!!!
     
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