World of Ruin [PG-13]

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(((OOC: Um. . .you had professor oak talk about that no one's names were next to the red and blue orb. and you mentioned something about the chooser falls under the Emerald Jewel. I wasn't so sure what that mean so I had her ask about it. It's post Number 63)))
 
OOC: Oh. Blonde Moment there. Darn I meant something else. As in, when the Red/Blue orb fuses with the chosen, the Emerald Jewel is the only thing that can get it out of the chosen. _ _; sorry I wasn't very clear on that. I'd post an IC but my mom's being st00pid again. *rolls eyes* stupid bedtime.
 
(((OOC: ahh okay. Now I get it. Anyways, I have my character's picture, but I wasn't so sure if it was allowed. She's clotheless, but she is in a sitting possition with her arms around her chest and her legs up to her chest. It covers her. . . um. . .you knows and only shows just her skin and hair and face and what not. Other than the eye color, she looks like her. This is going to be fun. If Hikari can take the orbs with her emerald jewel??? . . . *nickers* just kidding.)))
 
Mayuko just realized that her Alternate would most likely have an Umbreon, and her Alternate may not be Psychic, which means she might be a real hard headed brat who wants to beat the money out of anyone, which would make Mayuko in a hot spot, with a type dis-advanage. It'd probably be best if Mayuko avoided her Alternate as much as possible, which shouldn't be too hard, Mayuko usually goes to Temples in search for spirits who know 'information' about a certain case that has been going on in the urbans of Goldenrod. If her Alternate was basically opposite from Mayuko, then the alternate would have probably dyed her hair black and gotton a nose ring, and go to night clubs and join gangs. Going AGAINST the law, instead of helping the law.

Mayuko then saw some girl enter the lab and seem to complain about her name being on a peice of paper, when the girl asked the question and looked at everyone, even Mayuko, Mayuko couldn't help but shrug and point at Prof. Oak.
 
Charon looked in surprise at one of the girls' face. Mayuko Charon thought. She's got to be something related to my alternative, and vice versa. Charon turned to Shadow and the same thing happened with Shadow. Charon returned Mystic back into the PokeBall.

"Shadow, I wonder, do you think this will be what we'll really expect?" Charon asked.

"[Trust me, if it's truly at fault, then me and the other Pokemon will handle it.]" The Umbreon replied with a sly look on her face. From what Charon knew, she thought that she could trust Shadow, but then again, she couldn't.
 
OOC: YAR! I hate being gone for too long.

BIC: Clyde snapped out of his daze. This whole thing was way too much for him. Gone was the world where everyone could feel sorry for themselves, and here before him was the world where everyone had given up hope. He paid little attention to the angry girl stomping back and forth between outside and in. Who knows? She seemed dark and angry enough to be a citizen of this dingy region. He yawned, and shook his head. He was swamped.
"Maybe some fresh air would do the trick." He mumbled to himself. He announced his departure, and headed outside, past the angry girl with an Eevee.

Whatever. If she wants to be a solo girl and be a jerk, let her. Just leave me out of it.

Clyde thought bitterly to himself as he exited the building. Unfortunately, the "fresh air" was not as fresh as he could have wished. It was ashy, and made him cough. He looked to the east, and saw the sun begin to rise.. How long had he been in this strange world? Only a day? A brisk wind chilled him, so he began to move. As he walked down the hill towards the main part of Pallet, he came across a boy, maybe a little younger than he was. Clyde stopped. If what the Professor said was true, and all rare pokemon are practically non-existant, I doubt this kid would have a Quilava.. especially at his age.Either he's one hell of a trainer, or.. he's probably one of the chosen ones. He thought of the safest thing he could say..

"Excuse me, are you from around here, guy?"
 
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As Flash stared up at the house from distance, a young girl has come into appearence and was just standing there nea the door, Flash looked at her and knew that she was returning the gaze.....

Take a picture, it'll last longer...
He thought to himself irratbly, finnily enough, it was at this point she turned about and opened the door to the professors lab, disapearing inside it followed by her little fluffy pokemon, which he couldnt tell from distance what it was, but resembles that of an Evee...not that he cared.

''Why is it wherever we go we seem to stand out?''
Flash said angirly, turning around completely to face his Quilava who turned it's attention from the lab onto that of it's masters
{Perhaps they are intimidated by what is so clearly better?.....Michael}
Flash smiled
''I know your just trying that to make me feel better, and I know you dont feel that way.......and you would even think that i wouldnt feel good to hear something like that...but i do'' he finished with a slight smirk, but this was quickly turned into a frown as an elderly woman was watering her plants, whilst staring straight at him, Flash stood up straight and scratchd his nose, returning the stare with an innocent smile on his face, she seemed slightly taken back with this and quickly turned and walked bac into the confinements of her house, Flash smiled again
''Something as innocent as a smile can scare so many people if delievered by the righty person'' he said to Quilava.

At this point, he turned back round to face the lab and was harshly startled by the face of a boy, about his age standing right next to him, Flash jumped and put his hand to his heart as he heard the boy ask him if he was from anywhere around here.

''Whats it to you?'' he snapped with an angry face ''you nearly gave me a heart attack there, dont you know your not supposed to sneak up on people like that?! are you stupid? are are you just doing an impression?''

he stopped his rant abd breathed in and out a couple of times deeply before turning back to the boy and speaking in a much calmer voice
''No...I'm not, why do you ask?'' he raised an eyebrow as Quilava bared it's teeth and assumed an attacking stance, Flash put his leg in front of the fire type as a way of telling it to calm down, which it instantly did, sitting down and staring up at the boy.
 
OOC:...huh? Did I make Avis say something mean to you? I know is made one of my characters annoy your in your RP, but not here...I hope...
 
((OOC: Yo, ACM - what gave you the impression that I hated you? The comment was aimed at Netta, who's character had been a general stuck up girl, just walking in and demanding all this stuff. I don't mind your character at all. ^_^ Sorry if you got that impression from me.))

The boy's rough answer took Clyde by surprise. He defensively backed up and put his hands up.
"Whoah, bro. Hang on. Relax. I didn't mean to scare you."
Instinctively, he had reached for the Pokeball that contained his primary battle pokemon, Sandslash, but when he saw that the boy had relaxed, his grasp on the sphere lightened as well. He took a step forward, and took a deep breath.
"So, you're not from this area..?" Clyde raised a cautious eyebrow, and looked him up and down.

He was a little bit shorter than him, maybe by an inch or two. Judging from his clothing, he decided, he was definetely not from around here. Added to his previous thinking, he was definetly one of the kids from the World of Balance.

"Well, neither am I. Suppose I told you that you were here for a reason. Would you believe me?" Without waiting for a response, he went on.
"Come with me - if you're who I think you are, we've got some stuff to talk about. C'mon."
 
((OOC: Er, no, I don't hate you ACM! I'm actually glad you made me more aware about my rp posts, to not make them too short. I was, too, aiming at Netta's charactor, Hime. Not that I hate Netta! But what is a person supposed to think when all they see is another person demanding awnsers? Especially since I don't know the person so... =P

How did you think we were talking about your charactor o.o? (referring to ACM)

Also, do I make an RP post? Naoko didn't post an RP post so... I didn't want to mess up the certain order we're supposed to RP in. ))
 
OOC: We don't have an order, I'm just pissed right now, and would rather keep my posts to the minimal so as I don't get ticked off and rant. I will delete these posts eventually, and as for characters disliking characters, it's the way people choose to react to the actions you've made your character do, so you really have no excuses as you can't expect every character to like yours, even in the least.

Also, as I said before, please don't double post. I shouldn't even have to say that. You've just repeated yourself Icy Soul.
 
OOC - uuum, no i dont hate you, i dont even know how you came to that conclusion, my post on giving everyone some advice with their RP'ing was directed as just a way of helping out people who i thought were a bit weaker then others, not as a way to rub it in, just to help them out.
I don't believe i mentioned ur name once my dear, I have just met you, why would I hate you? XD

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''Excuse me?!'' Flash uttered, his mind racing, this guy had to be crazy....what did he mean, he's not from aeround here either.....and....here for a reason....what the heck was that supposed to mean.
Flash exchanged a slightly amused look with Quilava before turning back to this guy.

''I'm sorry, but, we havent really got time to play around at the moment....we have to locate Professor Oak to discuss something''
Flash looked him up and down, and noticed he was holding a pokeball in one hand which he had not been holding about a minute ago.
Flash snorted

''Oh I dont think you will be needing that'' he saoid indicating the pokeball
''Theres no need to be afraid...i'm not going to attack you, besides.....you wouldn't stand a chance against me i'm afraid'' he forced an innocent smiled and stared at him for a moment without blinking

''Now, if you'll be so kind as to excuse me'' He said in a childish mock voice
''I have to be off''
At this Flash sidestepped the boy and began walking straight past him toward the lab. I think that guy took one too many hits from a hitmonchan he thought to himself.
 
OOC - I would appreciate it if you didn't bunny my character. I may not have gone straight into the lab, I may have wanted to do something before that, also your follwing me in and bolting the door just makes my guy look stupid, carelessly walking up to it without seeing what your character was doing, and then being suprised to find im in the lab with the door locked, and perhaps i wouldnt have just yaken the list straight away, i do believe i would have been in some shock first. besides, i wouldnt just walk in, ide have at least knocked first.
please dont do that again, and i would appreciate it if you edited your post.
Im not having a go at you, so dont snap back at me.
 
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((OOC: I'm not sure if I missed something, but wasn't Prof. Oak supposed to awnser Hime's questions? Or Mayuko's? Unless you didn't want him to.

Also, to Naoko, thanks, I was already aware I double posted though, apparently my Internet told me that it couldn't find the server, which meant I had to restart my internet and press the back button. Which erased the post. I didn't know my first post actually got through, till I posted the second post. Wireless, it sucks like that =P))
 
OOC: My bad, bro, chill. But give me a lesson. How exactly do you go about having a conversation in board RP? Unless I post my actions one by one, which is apparantly not allowed in sophisticated RP, how do I get anything done without a certain amount of bunnying? To me, it seems impossible to have a conversation, and not either use one liners, or to do some bunnying, both of which aren't allowed. What if, perhaps, you said something, and I wanted to just slug you in the face at that moment? It's impossible, is it not, without completely ignoring the rest of your post. Educate me, please. How would you do it?
Via PM, if you'd like.
 
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OOC: I think I missed a few things. XD Ok...let's seee..I'm gonna go with my usual plan. Daydreaming. Useful and tends to happen a lot in real life too. :P

IC: Kanira remained seated as a few of the others began to move around and talk. She did listen to what Prof. Oak said about their Alternates, but more than personality, appearance, or Pokemon, she wondered what her Alternate's past would be like.

After a while of staring into space and allowing her thoughts to consume her, Kanira stood. She stretched and smiled at anyone she passed as she headed for the door. Too much had happened too fast and she needed some fresh air. By the sounds of things there wouldn't be much time to think before they left. "Raikou..." Her voice drifted quietly through the air as she surveyed the landscape. "The World of Ruin is such an odd place. I don't think I've ever seen any town like this before. And yet I visited Pallet not long ago. But that was in my world. It all seems more like a dream than anything else."

With a sigh, Kanira took a Pokeball from her waste and stared at it. She twirled it on her finger for a second then tossed it into the air. A small green Pokemon with a leaf on it's head appeared. It yawned and stretched then looked curiously around.

'So this is the World of Ruin eh? I expected something a little more cheerful at least. But I guess I expected too much as usual. Are you going to let everyone else out to see what a mess we're in?'

"Not now. Doubtless they are very curious to have a look around but I don't think I should force them all to see what's happened to this place. I hate to think what NewBark looks like in this world."

'Probably no better. Perhaps worse. But then again it might be better. You never know. But I can tell you're going to go there. You have to go to Johto anyway. Just promise me you won't cry when you see it.' The little grass type grinned and stretched again hen began to trot around.

"And I thought you knew me better than that. I guess not." Kanira grinned too and looked back towards the lab. "Maybe we should go back in. I'm not even paying attention to where I'm going and with the different landscape...well we might get lost. I'm amazed I found myself here as easily as I did. Then again I did kinda land inside the town. The only recognizable building was the lab." She gave a shrug and turned. She took a bit more of her surroundings but she wasn't really paying attention to anything besides what was left of the town. Then allowed Chikorita to jump onto her head and walked back inside the lab.
 
OOC - I'm calm my friend, im chilled, im cool XD

Ok, now I can understand why you would think what you think, and in a way you are right that a little bit of bunnying is neccecary, for example if your character was having a pokemon battle with another character, and you wanted to declare an attack such as a seismic toss, then the small bit of bunnying that would be allowed would be for example to do something like this

'' ''Nidoking!'' Flash cried with all his might ''Use seismic Toss!''
The ground pokemon let out a mighty roar and immediately charged at the seemingly helpless Golem, and took hold of him with his two huge arms. With total elegance, yet demmanding power The Nidoking leapt high into the air, the rock type held firmly in his grasp.
This is it! Flash thought, unable to keep a smile off of his face I'm going to win!

he watched on as his prized pokemon reached as high as it could, Flash was filled with a mighty adrenaline rush
''NOW!!'' ''

You see what I done there, i done a slight bit of bunnying like you mentioned, in the sense of taking another characters pokemon and bringing it into the air without the permission of the opposing characters owner, however i stopped the RP at the point where the Nidoking was just about to throw the Golem down to the floor. Therefore giving the creative control of wether or not the attack worked or not, TO the other RP'er. You will find that it will be the better RP'ers among people that would actually allow the attack to continue, or they will make a good RP post about how the Golem was to evade the situation. A bad RP'er would be someone who done something like this.

''Michael watchd as the opposing Nidoking took hold of his Golem, and launched himself into the air while holding it.
The young blonde smirked, this Flash trainer was a fool, this was no ordinary Golem, it's power was it's 2nd best feature only to it's lightning speed
''Golem!'' Michael called confidently ''Get out of there!''
The Golem smiled and with absolute ease, escaped the Nidokings grip and grabbed hold of it's horn,
''Use a REAL seismic Toss!'' ''

see what I mean, maming the pokemon and trainer perfect, never a sign indicating an enjoyable RP, the good part of RP'ing is giving yourself flaws aswell as good features, gives your character the ability to be more believeable, and entertaining to use. In this case, in response to my original example, a good RP'er would choose wether he was going to let the attack work or not, to let your character lose to another persons shows signs of dignity and respect, putting in the effort to make it seem more real, and to realistically lose. This is the sort of thing I would put if i was responding to my own 1st example

'' Michael raised his right forearm to his head and wiped it across his sweaty skin to sweat...this wasn't good. Tjis was one of the toughest battles he had fought in his life, not that he expected anything less from the pokemon leage itself. He turned his head to teh side, hundreds, thousands, millions perhaps, of people all in the barricades watching every move he made....but he had dealt with pressure before, and some minor set backs weren't going to make him give up....
He watched with a confident face, masking a lot of panic as the opposing Nidoking began to fall back down to earth at a great accelerating speed, holding the scared Golem below him....
Michael had to wait, wait for exactly the right moment......but he knew what had to be done....

''...........Golem! Switch Now!!''
he cried with all his might, instantly, the Rock pokemon soaked up every particle of energy left in it's tired body, and grabbed hold of the huge foot of the ground type, swinging it down to an equal level with itself.
Michael cringed as the two pokemon hit the hard groun at the same time with a huge crash.
''Golem!'' Michael cried with concern. Thick Sand from the field had risen and was shielding the two pokemon from view, which one had come off the worst?!..... ''

and there you go, that puts the original RP'er BACK in control, and it also manages to make a lengthy enough post for the battle to continue at a good enough speed.
You see what i mean? trust and respect are important attriutes in RP'ing, if you grant your fellow RP'ers and their characters those things, then they will show it back to you and grant you the same privelages, making your character looking good aswell. In your situation, I would have done something like, show your characters shock and anger at being totally disrespected by this arrogant young man, which you did, then RP as you did but only as far as to say that you watched him from out of view, perhaps hiding behind something nearby which you could decide on, being a telephone box, a post box, who knows, anything you like, and just say you watched the trainer walk up to the door.
What you did was go as far as to force my character into a lab, and without knocking. thet puts elements into my character such as ''breaking the law'' (Entering private property without permission) also you made him look like an ideot, from the profile alone you can see that he is a very suspicious guy and for 1: would have proberly looked behind him to see if you were still there (going in with what i said about granting other RP'ers privelages, say if you would have hid somewhere, i would have made my character not see you, it would be a bad RP'er that would have gone ''mwuhahahahar i can see him behind that post box! what a stupid hiding lace (lol) ) and 2: he may have wantd to look at something or witness something, slowly adding to his suspicions of the new place.

I hope you understand all this and that it has helped you, i really do, if theres any other questions you have just ask in an OOC or via PM.
now if you wouldn't mind either editing your previous IC, or deleting it and making a nw one, I would appreciate it XD *gives pie*
 
OOC: I completely understand. Thanks a ton, bro. I apologize for my earlier misunderstanding. May it never happen again.

IC: Clyde couldn't believe it. What a punk! He stood in shock as feelings of rage built up uncontrollably.

Sorry.. you're no match for me.. pfft. What a punk. I bet I could take him on, no sweat. You're lucky I can't whoop you right now, kid..

The boy shook the angry thoughts out of his head. It was his Rockethood messing with his mind. He was past that. He took a deep breath to calm himself completely, and slowly feigned walking the other direction until he felt he was out of sight from this arrogant new kid. He then quickly ducked behind one of the grimy old houses. As he did so, he looked at his hand, and grimaced. Wet paint. Just great. He took care to not touch the house anymore.

He watched the boy walk towards the lab, and thought of sending a pokemon to tail him. However, he sensed, even in the brief moment that they met, that that Quilava had nerves of steel, and to have a Pokemon follow it would just fire it up. An angry Quilava is not something to trifle with, especially if it's got a cocky trainer such as that one. It would rip his pokemon to peices - and he didn't want a fight. Perhaps the Rocket within him did, but Clyde himself was bigger than that now.

Clyde sat, and thought for a second. How could he keep tabs on this kid? It looks like he was heading for the Professor's lab.. Maybe...
Clyde snapped his fingers ferociously.
"That's it!"

OOC: I hope that's a bit better.
 
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