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Recent content by Deathspector

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    Fanfiction Lounge

    As a reader/reviewer, is there some specific type of antagonist or evil plot that you would not want to see in a fanfic? I agree with Dragonfree and purple_drake that the antagonist should not be a stupid bumbling idiot who trips over his or her own feet just in time for the protagonist to...
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    Fanfiction Lounge

    Are One Shots worth writing? Definitely. In fact, I find them a lot more satisfying to write than chaptered stories (which would explain my lack of chaptered stories). They are also, like people before me have said, challenging to write, and as a writer, challenges are what you want. Of course...
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    Fanfiction Lounge

    How do you choose your characters' teams? That really depends on the story I'm writing, and who's team it is. For one, I wouldn't give a young trainer from Kanto an Absol, just as I wouldn't give an experienced trainer from Hoenn a Rattata. On some occasions, they play roles in the plot, but...
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    Fanfiction Lounge

    Interesting debate, you two. It's definitely worth talking about, but really I don't have much to add, and butting in would be stupid. Instead, I'll answer a few questions. ^^ How long do you wait in between posting chapters for your upcoming fic? Initially, I used to be able to type up a...
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    Choice (One-shot)

    Choice One-shot by Deathspector “How’re you feeling, Avaron?” she asked him. Avaron looked up at his elder sister, worry etched into every corner of his beady black eyes. He hadn’t been to sleep since the previous evening, insomnia keeping him awake the entire night. There were dark...
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    The Hunter (One-Shot)

    Sure. Always happy to help ^^ Now I know that it doesn't look too different, and it may seem like I've actually added more. But what I've done is combined several sentences together, to prevent the description form seeming too static (like, for instance, the first, second and third sentences...
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    The Hunter (One-Shot)

    Interesting concept, and well presented. My congratulations. What I found most enjoyable was (like Flareblade said) the way you portrayed Stun Spore, Sleep Powder and Poison Powder through the eyes of the Scyther elders. It was also interesting how the Venomoth (for I'm guessing that's what the...
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    Fanfiction Lounge

    I really can't answer to the "favourite character" question just yet, 'cause, again, I don't read much over here (seeing as I just came back), but I will indulge myself in the other...xP Do you tend to make your protagonist the same gender as yourself? In my earlier stories, I did, because it...
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    Killing Machine (PG-13)

    @Griff – Thanks for the compliments; I'm a pretty big Treecko (sorry about the mis-spelling) fan, myself, but I had to have him knocked off for plot purposes. Now, I understand why you want me to describe my Pokémon more vividly, but being on a Pokémon forum I've always figured people would know...
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    Killing Machine (PG-13)

    Killing Machine One-shot by Deathspector Thick tree’s towered tall above me, marking the beginning of Ilex Forest. The leaves were the greenest, plushest I’d ever come across on all my travels, and it calmed me to know that there were still places that the humans hadn’t destroyed; still...
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    A Friend in Need is a Friend Indeed (Revival)

    Meh.....DaVinci's turn to post and get a Pokémon. I'm last as I posted last. DS
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    Discovery: Mithrial

    Thanks. Typos have alwas been my problem. I'll try to look over my work more carefully from now on. Don't expect the chapter all too soon, this isn't exactly my priority. DS
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    Discovery: Mithrial

    Discovery Mithrial By Deathspector Disclaimer: Okay, another attempted fan fiction by me. I have tried to make it as original as possible, but there are aspects which are difficult to overcome. But I am pleased at the way it has turned out. Perhaps it is not as good as I originaly wished, but...
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    Poetry Contest <info & entries>

    Is it too late? I'm not great at poetry, but I think I'm alright. If I'm allowed, I'd like to enter. If not, well, I should read this place more often....=( DS
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    A Friend in Need is a Friend Indeed (Revival)

    OOC: Sorry, but Chansey would be considered as too strong. If you wish, you may capture a Chansey later on, perhaps as your last Pokémon. Any more comments like that may be sent over PM, so that we don't clutter up the board with OOC posts. I've sent Steven a PM, but he still hasn't replied. In...
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