Bardothren

Noted. Also, I'm working on the first chapter (I just posted all your comments in the document near the quoted sections, and have put some general notes for ideas), and I guess the only thing I'm stuck on is how to build that tension. I'm not sure what there is for Annie to be tense about, so to speak, since the prologue is what was supposed to create the tension. Not sure if you read it or not, though? (You don't have to - just asking.)

Thanks again. If my shift overnight is pretty lax, I can probably return the review. Either fic you prefer?

Hello, Bardothren! I'm fairly new at fanfics, and I've recently started a fanfic that isn't just writing, but actually a manga fanfic in itself! I'vent got much done, but I would love it if you could drop by and leave a review or whatnot. Thanks!
http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=350017

Hey, thanks so much for the review! First chapters are always the hardest, aren't they? :) I think you can see now why I wanted to edit the chapter, so I'll definitely take your comments into consideration.

No problem. I just put up the edited version of the prologue but that's as far as I've gotten.

o_o well. that was a quick game for some people then haha.

lol just kill me off xD

eh i better stay out of it. i dont wanna get more confused without even starting it haha

Thanks! :D

lol maybe i should join. i feel like i would be confused as to what is going on or i would fall behind. so it's just a game? i need a tutorial haha.

fraction meaning like your team to win? sounds confusing >.< i never got the whole roleplaying thing.

i was just looking up about the blarzigord game. i dont really understand these mafia games.

oh well welcome ^_^ everyone is really nice here. i've never been in the fan fic section before. i mostly am in the video game, a&d, and treehouse section.

im good just finished playing a bit of splatoon. now im on here and on skype. are you newish to pc? ive seen you post here and there.

how are you

Noted. I'll be a bit busy this month with vacation and such, but I do return favors.

Whichever is fine. Love and Other Nightmares is an OT journey/chosen one fic that plays with cliches and is very emotional/psychologically demanding in terms of content. Flying in the Dark is an epistolary, slice-of-life fic filled with lots of worldbuilding, my own interpretations of certain pokemon concepts (such as why you have to catch the pokemon when it's conscious) and other such matters. If it matters, the former is in the process of edits and the latter has already thoroughly been beta-read.

Sounds good. Generally I do long-term review exchanges if you're interested in that as well. Depends if my fics are your kind of thing or not. Let me know~

Hi, you wanna tear apart either one of my fics for the review challenge? :P

HIYA.

HIYA.