DassenSupes

Hi,

I just wanted to say that I loved Brave New World and Fahrenheit 451. Yaaay classics. I get all sentimental just thinking about it. o3o

Hey, I posted the fic I've been working on :D

Pokemon - HeartGold and SoulSilver Adventure!
Hope you enjoy it, I worked hard on it.

Nice.

Though you said your hands were a little sore, I hope you don't shorten the chapters up in the future. You don't skimp on the details, which makes the story more desirable.

That seems like a fair break, especially considering how much you write.

How many words were in that last chapter? I would check, but Microsoft Word is acting up, haha

Definitely my favorite chapter to date. The timing in the chapter from the beginning, to the Pikachu run in, and the Hypno battle was perfectly executed. I especially liked the circumstances for Metapod and Kakuna evolutions. How Psyduck was awake the entire chapter, and how we finally didn't get to know why until the main battle was superb. Applause shall be given, as that was a kickass chapter.

Holy hell. I don't know if this was intentional, but did you notice that the third chapter is a wall of text? Did your enter key like break or something?

Nevertheless, I look forward to reading it.

You bet I will! I like your style, dude!

Dude, I'm in high school. I can't complain. ~_^

Well, like I said, I'll sit down and read that soon. It looks like fun. You said in the FFL you're an English major?

Figured I'd continue this here instead of spamming up your fic thread. >_>

The irony is, I don't actually like Misty. Until I started reading some of the better fanfiction about her, I despised her. Weird, huh? Now, I see that she can have depth, even if canon doesn't actually give her any. Anime!Misty has no personality whatsoever; she's an OTP, and that's why I hated her. That's the wonderful thing about fanfiction, though. It's beautiful, the way people are free to interpret things as they will. Your interpretation of Misty, for example, was different enough to give her depth, yet similar enough that it didn't make me go "Wth? That's not Misty!" I also forgot to mention, I like the part at the end with the boy and his Pikachu. That's sweet.

No problem. And, can't wait, I'm sure it will be good.

Chapter three after that with Viridian Forest, right?

Well, I'm not too good at reviews, but I'll do my best.

Overall, a good chapter. I forgot if I've mentioned this, but I like the move you made by having different starters, away from the cliche. Anyways, that made for a better battle against the Trainer and his Machop. I only noticed a couple spelling errors, but I didn't notice any sentence errors. If there is, I'd have to read through it again, which I wouldn't mind.
I like how full your chapters are too. Shortening them is something I would not recommend. If they were shorter, the chapters wouldn't be as full. I guess what I'm trying to say is, you have a good balance on chapter length. They're just right.

edit: Yeah, like I said, I suck ass with reviews XD
Anyways, I read what you said in the FFL, about 'deciding if its worth keeping up with'. If I wasn't a fan of the story, I'd still say yeah. Anyone who puts as much effort as you do into a chapter deserves the recognition for the chapters he/she writes.
So yeah, definitely worth keeping up with :p

Can't wait.

Another thing I can't wait for, the first gym battle. That ought to make for a good match, especially for Blue if he doesn't catch any Pokemon with a type advantage.

Haha, I would ask if you're going to do the game style of hero VS E4, or bracket/tournament style, but that would probably be a major spoiler, wouldn't it?

I just consider an OT fic to have any kind of trainer going on the journey, made up or not, haha.

But a retelling of Red and Blue in the sense of realism you use if an awesome combination, if I say so myself. I can't wait to see how you implement Team Rocket.

Well, I know it's an OT fic, but I don't know some of the backstory you posted in the FF lounge. I was so tempted to open up the spoiler, but couldn't.
And everybody knows, spoiler means additional plot! Or at least that's what I think it probably is, haha.

Before I'm done reading chapter 2 (Just got done reading the battle with that Machop), I would like to comment on how you write it. When I read you're writing, I'm not envisioning the cute little sprites, or how they appear in the anime.
Rather, I see the Pokémon and everything else in the story as if it were happening here in the real world.

Dude, I don't even know you, or the story on your fanfic at all, but your damned good writing has influenced me greatly already. I'm not bull crapping you when I say you're one of the best writers I've ever seen.

I will take a writing break from my fanfic temporarily to read&review chapter 2 of Blak. Long chapters, ftw!

I'm not particularly good at giving criticism, but I read through your fanfiction. It's quite good, actually. :3

Good luck with it in the future, and I'll enjoy reading it.

Hey. You. You suck.