Feign

You bet... it's a great relief to know that someone actually commended it. :D

I partly owe the military part to Sgt. Shock. His fic is actually a good help if you want to read something about police matters and such. And, of course, I gotta thank you for the help in the sinking part.
Glad it gave such a feeling, though. ^^

Eheh, thanks ^^

See ya later!

Bah, I'm done waiting. I'm posting the danged chapter today xD

I followed your advice, but twisted it a little, so it might not be really obvious. xD

Haha it's Nauota from Fooly Cooly.

Y'know, I thinkI'll borrow that idea. Can I borrow that idea? xD
The way you said it somehow reminded me of those horribly exaggerate fics where everyone ends up dieing xD

Only nubs play DMC4.
just saying :/

http://www.pokecommunity.com/member.php?u=99918

I can't make great Devil May Cry icons like Dukey. D: Those are smex, lol

hey =_=

what a difficult to focus on profile,

anyways after reading your first chapater of your story i must say im impressed!

and well im looking at starting a hacking magazine called HM (hacking monthly)
and well im looking for a writter for a 3 part series with each part being about 25 lines high.
heres a link to the concept for it. [click to zoom in, youll need to :)]
nothing in it will being in the final execpt for the graphics and layout :)

Hope to hear from you!

The problem I'm having with being/sounding repetitive is that I want to "follow the example" on tragedy stories like the abnormally common oneshot fics where Ash/Pikachu dies so I can reproduce on this specific part of the story. But when I go notice, just like you mentioned, I red too many of them and maybe started making this part sound the same as those oneshots.

In short, I'm having trouble with knowing how to write a good tragedy chapter. <.<

I guess so... Hey, you ever had the feeling while writing that you're being a bit repetitive or generic on the story? (Not that they're synonyms xD)

D:

Wakaru. x3

Estas Esperanto. xD

Ŭaŭ. :o

O rly?

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I get a somewhat hard time figuring what to do when I get those mean looks from everyone because it seems like the story isn't good enough xD

Yeah, smoking style! :P

Glad you like it! :)

You better change your usertitle. Dante is not at a forest (unless you count that lady snake...thing monster O.o ). XD