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Sorry for the delay, this one took a while and is very long. Enjoy, critism would REALLY be appreciated! Chapter 4 Escape of the Country Jason looked back. 2:30, in two and a half minutes this place and things around it would blow up. “Everybody get out of the building and contact the police...

I have bolded the things that need changing. Maybe you should try and guess them yourself. Things such as Spelling mistakes you also need to start a new line when someone speaks. You could have done better, so this has disappointed me.

Thank you very much, but dont down yourself, im not much better than you, keep trying and we could have a competition some time. You can FF like me. Keep trying at first you wasnt the greatest but you have defiantly improved because you listen to people advice. Now I know by fanfic cant be...

Old thread died. XD. I've taken as much advice as I cna. Lets see how I fair up now. Empoleon: Lvl 53 Item: Splash Plate: Nature: Adamant: Move 1- Surf Move 2- Ice Beam Move 3- Grass Knot Move 4- Waterfall Staraptor: Lvl 55 Item: None: Move 1- Fly Move 2- Toxic Move 3- Wing Attack Move 4-...

Chapter 1 TheDawnof a battle. "Drill Peck!" Dawn shouted as fiercly as she could. Gary laughed at her. "You know your effectivness, but can you beat my Venmoth's speed?" Empoleon waddled forward as fast as it could. As Gary had been blabbing he had not ordered Venomoth to do anything. The...

Trainers came from all over the world, auditions, shows, tests and battles were taken to see who the best trainer in all of the world was. Even members of the Elite 4 took part, even some champions. One boy has arived in Round 19, the round before the quarter finals. With all the people taking...

Nice and long. It was very interesting, fairly well described and a great plot. I will continue to read this.

Yeh I have Flash Canon, I dont know what happened to it. I will check route 216.

Yeh I made a typo, no need to lay into me. (my ts are very close to my ds) Anyways ON the subject you follow everyones advice and I'll keep reading to see how you'll improve. Dont expect to get better in a day, but take your time and you'll see just as much as we will.-Googlebug.

Its a he. Thanks for taking interest, but no need to argue. XD. I have a question, whats so great about Drill Peck? I already have flying moves with Staraptor. Anywhere you can buy, find, win Ice Beam? I used it in Emerald. Vry good move.

I dont breed, Im not going to re train Empoleon. please dont call me lazy, because im not, i roughly and hour or two a day training.

Oh thank you very much. Haha. So, Avalanche aint gonna help.. at all? Or is it just not as good as Ice Beam. Will Empoleon naturally learn it and also my Empoleon hasnt naturally learnt Agility either.

OK. Hey I have Avalanche, this should help huh? No im not going to use Close Combat on Bronzong. Its Fire Blast I need to use on it. I was gonna use CC on Lucario. I still have to check if i have CC.

Well seeing that this Earthquake was a big mistake, i caught anOTHER Graveller that knew it. Im training it up. OK. Staraptor knows Close Combat.. I htink. Once I defeat Mr Bronzong I'll post up my team. Will my Dialga's Fire Blast KO Roserade? Dialga should also be good against Spiritomb...

Shouldn't Staraptor KO Lucario because Staraptors is flying and Lucario is Fighting? Also the reason "Mr Smarty Pants" why I didnt learn Earthquake is because I already had magnitude, didnt think it would be much better and I seemed to like all my other moves.