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but quality ish better than quantity!!! >w< cuz if three people who are good writers criticized it good, ish good, right? ^w^

Soft- Are words spoken between lovers In tender sighs and whispers, Soft- Is comfort one finds in embrace As two dance in serene grace Soft- Are caresses across fingertips Kisses on her cheek or her lips

thankees for the commentsssss!!!!!!!! ^w^ its better than SOMEONE who dint comment at all... u.u

At Night when crickets chirp, the moon hangs (against the midnight blue with little holes that angels peep through) tucked with gray clouds cradled by darkness, lulled to sleep, with gentle whispers of the wind, singing a lullaby through leaves of trees whose gentle sighs wash away the...

yay yay new poem!!! ^w^ daisy petals Daisy petals are quite... Prim and silent... White? Innocent! Not quite vicarious, But still virtuous, Lacking in vigor And in virulence! Nevertheless, vague... Chaste and pure, yet melancholy, Simple little things that look pretty, Charming but lack...

thankees so muchhh!!! ^w^ ish too bad pishy isnt reviewing.... u.u

She walks on green fields with a handful of lily petals To which her hand yields, and on the ground they settle Sweet, tender fragrance wafts around her as she dances With her endearing laughs and memorable kisses And she, alas, lies on the ground, Smelling, fresh cut bleeding grass, the...

awwwzzz I dint win! But good job everyone!!! you guys are awesome!!! ^w^

thankees for teh comments!!! ^w^

cuz I wish spring ish here... ^w^ pweety please read and review!! "pink (pretty little things)" pretty little things, pink blossoms so young to bloom so quick to fade so slow to fall where children played so brief, so frail coy, and unafraid lo, as it lands on grass' blade.

this is the best I can do fer now! ^w^ "Autumn" Dear lady walking, beneath her, dead leaves on the ground Faded rouge on her lips, humming soft melodies and sound Swinging by barren trees with weathered hands lifting to pray Under the gray cloudy sky, to the sun's hidden day. Hear her grace...

cuz valentines day ish tomorrow!!! ^w^ "My Love Wants Roses" My love wants roses The roses that don’t die Ones that won’t make her sigh With pretty petals smooth as ivory So she’ll write about me in her diary Sir, she wants roses The kinds with fresh dew Ones that don’t fade hue If I have...

I'm sorry but I didn't get it >.< your rhymes are okay but I can't find a structure in your poem. Maybe if ya can make your poem be a bit more organized, it would help? I don't know, cuz that's just me ^w^

ok ok ok! ^w^ first of all, ya need to separate your story into paragraphs. Cuz if you don't, us readers get really really confused and sometimes, we don't like reading a block o' words. And another thing is try to calm down on descrips that you don't need. like your first sentence was long and...

hmmhmmhmm....... it's a cool poem but I think this would be even more awesome-er if the entire thing had a structure. I don't think you want to write in free verse cuz of the rhymes but it's all cool. I like it tho! Your descriptions are really pretty~