JX Valentine

Aren't you the moderator from PokéCosmo named Sydian?
I'm Silver Riolu, known as a helpful member on PokéCommunity and PokéCosmo.

wow "Bloom' is a really good story. I was supposed to be reading my book report book, and isntead, I end up reading your story all the way to the end. I'm tired. Gotta sleep, or read.

I am reading "(FFC)Bloom" and it is expertly written. The flash backs neatly incorporated as dreams. The excellent "narrator-like" qualities of your description. Each sentence seemed to fit perfectly - no awkwardness. I know your work is good. I don't know that about mine.

I kinda had a "writing epiphany," a very obvious one, but one that hadn't struck me yet. When you write a story, levels don't define anything. Levels are defined as experience, but experience isn't necessarily needed, with a lot of luck. This is in the logical sense - but I don't even have to question it that much. Hard to explain... Sounded so much more profound in my head... XD

Lol. I read "His Angel." You wrote it two years ago. Lol, Ash... The description at the beginning - without telling who it was - that was great. When I write, I always put the most passion and description into the actual "move"or progression

Hi, what are you up to? :\

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;;

That's odd. I really hope my mom doesn't do that when I got to the Jax college. xD

My pseudonym changes too much. :O

The silver splatter of a silver Smeargle, and a love for Silver...and the color...and Smeargle...but not splatters.

Sorry that I wrote so much. Hope I didn't chase you off... =P
Finally finished with the Bacon.
If I'm logged in after 10 pm( UTC -7) then I probably jsut forgot to log out, which is typical with me.
Feel free to leave a message longer than mine if you wish. ^^

Maybe I should be in Harry Potter fandom then *wink*
Don't worry, I already know the difference.
I'm on of those people who try to write based on what would be a turn on, because that feeling you get, can't compare to the real thing, but it is the best you've got.
Plus mature people know more about the attributes of how to turn-on the reader. The younger you are, the less you understand. It's a fact of life.

I'm one of those people who either loves to write steamy and sticky, or read steamy and sticky. Although it is hard to feel turned-on by your own writing. There is no mystery in your own work(unless you forget what you wrote =D )

Exactly! The feeling is important. Cute as the couple may be, if they aren't doing anything, I'm not as happy for them XD =P You get what I mean.

I know what you mean about sex too. I think more on the areas that send shivers up your spine, than send you reeling with pleasure. I mean pleasure is a good area and all, but the shivers are more like the indications to the feelings that are there. I was about to go on an sex-based opinion rant. Glad I stopped myself :p

I do have one you can see. I can assure it's better than "Exploding Chairzard" Boy, but I can't guarentee by much =P
I mean I took grammar classes and stuff(not remedial, extracurricular - which I passed with top in my class). I also got 100% in my writing class - but it wasn't Pokemon based.
Sorry to rant again... Yes I have two. Both based on kissing - but very briefly - because of my lack of time. My mom wants we to help her make bacon. I'll have to send you the message later.

Do you want one or both?
Remind me to talk to you about what I thought of last night

I'm a wicked guy, so you can let Emma's name be called out and Marvalo can have his ego deflated a tad for having to find it out through an announcement.

Also, I never asked you this before but it's been on my mind for months; are you working on a novel or have written a novel already?

Okay, now after hearing about Ash's alleged goods, I'm going to have nightmares.

Yes. She did.

Duuuude! They could be...like...asking if you've been doing it or something and you're not paying attention and you go, "Uh-huh". xD

Oh! I've been wondering. Is Jax Malcolm your psuedonym(if I spelled that right...) or did I just make an epic fail in asking? xD

(Didn't want to risk "off topic" on your thread) Lol, I see your point. The X Y thing did get me for a moment :p I was reading a few other romance ones, and hoenstly - none of them are as good as you. You build the suspense - the drama - the passion - the desire - and you do it quite well. Have any other romance stories I can read? Please Jax, Can i have some more? *holds out bowl like Oliver Twist*

That why I questioned it at first. I was thinking, "Bill's a guy...so he's got to have...oh dear" and I ended up reading that about seven times to make sure I got it. xD

I don't know. She calls me everyday...but I'm too busy typing to listen. All I hear is, "blah blah blah" over the phone. Occasionally agree, occasionally laugh...that's mean. xD

Hey, Jax. Wazzup?

Also, the hiatus is over.

-wink wink nudge nudge- ;O

Pssh. Nice. xD Ha, I told my friend about Bill's 'pooling blood to his lap'(the one who asked my pair about his sexual preferences). She was like, "Wooow. The last person I'd expect!"

Not that kind of snake. XD Bill's talented, but he's not that talented.

You would know, right Jaxeh? ;O

hey, thanks for the warning. Well looks like I need to be more cautious on my actions. And thanks for the suggestion too on looking for fanfictions! it helped, really...:D

I don't know how, but the fight song for on of my in-state college's just got stuck in my head and it reminded me of you.

Fight on! Fight on for ole Jax State!~

8D

I think you assumed too much about the intelligence and reading-comprehension of the average PFU member. I would think with a board that's on the small side that there would be a higher quality of members.

So even if you bold and use sparkles on a rule stating to talk about OT fics in general, you are still probably going to get someone meandering in and talking only about their fic. Because, obviously, they did it, so it's right to do things that way!

SPPf is home to wank, so much so that Serebii Joe comes to other forums to begin wank. Because how dare anyone spread the truth...I mean, lies about him!

Eh, my vacation is over, which is good since it sucked as a vacation. I missed going to work. Mostly, though, I just fought off depression and wrote my fics. And also fought off spiders, ants, and cockroaches.

Edit of doom: Our good friend Vincent is from Australia. So, that might explain his grammar issues with quotation marks.

On returning to PFU (after a day, I'm weak) because I figured it's better to surround myself with people during my bouts of depression, I have noticed something about the "Writing New Trainers" thread: people tend to want to talk more about their own stories than the topic at hand.

I'm beginning to feel sorry for you being on staff there. Perhaps not just beginning, but I didn't realize it was that bad there. My eyes have been opened.

On an entirely different page, what's been going on with you aside from new-found fangirl love of DS video games?

Now if you don't mind, I have to go smack the spider that just landed on me. Gods, I hate the summer. (And apologies for the crap message. My mind is dead.)

Other than who was working with us, no. ;-;

Before the cops got them for drug busts. :o

Ah. The usuals. Oni voted me most likely to drive off a cliff...and I guess he's right. I hate driving so much, I'd get nervous and...ba boom. xD