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Old July 22nd, 2012 (12:08 AM). Edited July 22nd, 2012 by Skymin.
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Join Date: Sep 2006
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Originally Posted by Miss Doronjo View Post
Rachel "Fox" Worth
One who deceives! I like this. I had a lot of fun reading the RP sample, the dealer and Rachel have good chemistry going on. Awesome, you're accepted!

SLUGMA ♀ Naïve
Flame Body - Slugma may burn the attacker on contact.
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Originally Posted by machomuu View Post
Name: Rin Shavi
Much better! I like it a whole lot better like this. She's more developed as a thief! <3


Lightning Rod - Electrike draws in all Electric-type.
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Originally Posted by The Final Watchman View Post
Alan Destin
Your writing style is fine, I just want to see more of your RP Sample! It finishes way too quickly! It's over before they barely start to talk. If you can make their conversation a tad more interesting and lengthy, then you should be ok. :D

Originally Posted by Izuya_Namikaze View Post
Name: Antonio Chambers
Yes, better! Way better. Though pink eyes is probably a little weird, this is Pokémon, the land where all of the nurses in the world are dodecatripletuplets. Accepted!

Mold Breaker - Cranidos can use all moves regardless of Abilities.
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