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[PKMN FULL] Cornered On The Market! [T](OOC)
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Who's Kiyo?
puking rainbows
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I didn't have anything to work with until your post made yesterday, so expect one from me in the coming days (aiming for tomorrow, depending on when I get out of rehearsal.)
let's get writing guys, gals, and those of you who don't identify as a binary gender.
Amazing picture! I really like the colors on this one and the glare effect on Jaunt's TV face.
But this reminds me, if anyone wanted the original Lucario pic I used to start this Kaze meme, I slummed the porn-ridden Google Search for Lucario to get it for y'all:
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fun fact this marks my 92nd post in this OOC, which are more posts than Ech and Grelzar currently have on this whole forum
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Who's Kiyo?
puking rainbows
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Tick tock, tick tock.
I know. It did hinge on me, so I take full responsibility for that delay, and I apologize.
Welcome back, how was Tijuana?
Also
You can only kill Rina off if you make a bloodthirsty Pikachu delinquent who is uncomfortably not vague about how much he absolutely wants to kill Amaryllis.
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I will post, tomorrow, but it's pretty much gunna amount to, Spora standing there while everyone leaves the room.
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i can't sleep
you're pure squalor
speaking of goro, i feel like a complete butthead for not keeping to my word and finishing the comic. procrastination and incompetence is my very existence. i punished myself by not eating and sleeping properly
but to make up for it, here is this, a thing and also I assume you can crop with the tools
my sentences are as flawless as rina's
and post count is for scrubs. and also, i haven't even been here for two full months.
also, 90% of my posts were made in this thread alone. i haven't even branched out of the theatre and posted elsewhere, so stfu u racoon hipster
did a writer as remarkably talented as you just make a honest-to-god malaprop or am I genuinely going insane from sleep deprivation and alcohol poisoning
and if it is an error, i thought i should point it out first before jaunt capitalizes on your mistake and goes full elitist.
also, welcome back
make her dream about dust-senpai, i want more ship material
i am going to bed
you're pure squalor
speaking of goro, i feel like a complete butthead for not keeping to my word and finishing the comic. procrastination and incompetence is my very existence. i punished myself by not eating and sleeping properly
but to make up for it, here is this, a thing and also I assume you can crop with the tools
Spoiler:
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and post count is for scrubs. and also, i haven't even been here for two full months.
also, 90% of my posts were made in this thread alone. i haven't even branched out of the theatre and posted elsewhere, so stfu u racoon hipster
did a writer as remarkably talented as you just make a honest-to-god malaprop or am I genuinely going insane from sleep deprivation and alcohol poisoning
and if it is an error, i thought i should point it out first before jaunt capitalizes on your mistake and goes full elitist.
also, welcome back
make her dream about dust-senpai, i want more ship material
i am going to bed
Whew. These posts coming in are going to be a doozy for FMN. And that Druag post was especially... unique. I especially liked the description of his gouged-out eye. Just a minor, gruesome detail that really stuck out to me, how it twitched with the flexing of his other eye. Yugh. And looks like Samuel is getting a backbone! Where'd this inspiration come from? Is Samuel going to be a true savior? Well, Amaryllis has to find that medicine first.
I wonder what would happen if Spora actually used Spore on the entire crew and they all fell asleep or became paralyzed. I wonder how that scenario would crumble my entire RP.
Dud, I'm surprised Benicle is just accepting the circumstances as is. I would have thought, considering his personality is described as "unusually rash" that he would be, well, doing something for the situation, even as terribly shallow and inconsiderate as he's revealed himself to be with that line of inner thought. You know, I thought he'd be buzzing around, searching for something or other, perhaps in the Supply Room without any further consultation or having further jumped to conclusions, or maybe speaking hastily and excitedly to Amaryllis to help while jumping the gun to directly assist how he short-sightedly feels would help.
I say this to say that I just want you to keep in mind in the future your character's defining personality traits, and in what ways your character can achieve his self-proclaimed quest to become a fit enough citizen to return from his exile from Farlance. It would benefit Benicle to have a kind of conscience to steer him back to that goal of self-improvement, and for his desire to make friends to manifest a little more than this current sit-and-observe that he's done the last few posts towards his co-workers.
If you need any help with that or ideas, I'm available, and I'm sure your other fellow players are willing to provide some constructive criticism as well, should you ask.
In the meantime...
I wonder what would happen if Spora actually used Spore on the entire crew and they all fell asleep or became paralyzed. I wonder how that scenario would crumble my entire RP.
Dud, I'm surprised Benicle is just accepting the circumstances as is. I would have thought, considering his personality is described as "unusually rash" that he would be, well, doing something for the situation, even as terribly shallow and inconsiderate as he's revealed himself to be with that line of inner thought. You know, I thought he'd be buzzing around, searching for something or other, perhaps in the Supply Room without any further consultation or having further jumped to conclusions, or maybe speaking hastily and excitedly to Amaryllis to help while jumping the gun to directly assist how he short-sightedly feels would help.
I say this to say that I just want you to keep in mind in the future your character's defining personality traits, and in what ways your character can achieve his self-proclaimed quest to become a fit enough citizen to return from his exile from Farlance. It would benefit Benicle to have a kind of conscience to steer him back to that goal of self-improvement, and for his desire to make friends to manifest a little more than this current sit-and-observe that he's done the last few posts towards his co-workers.
If you need any help with that or ideas, I'm available, and I'm sure your other fellow players are willing to provide some constructive criticism as well, should you ask.
In the meantime...
State Your Business!
Building a network with your boss' pals!
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Aaron the Aggron & Cullinan the Carbink
You are free to ask any appropriate question you'd like to better know your superior's fellow man!
Building a network with your boss' pals!
Please welcome this edition's panel:
Aaron the Aggron & Cullinan the Carbink
You are free to ask any appropriate question you'd like to better know your superior's fellow man!
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To Aaron, are you always in mega-form as compensation for something?
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Its hard to find a happy medium there. I do agree that Benicle would usually do something like you described, but it's hard to see him doing that for someone he does not like. However, Benicle is not going to say something like, "I'm not going to help." Because then he runs the risk of losing his job, which he does not want to lose at this time.
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Personally, when I write, I usually go for the option that takes more physical action. It makes for interesting writing challenges and gives other players something juicy to react to that leads to more creative moments. While I can say I personally enjoyed reading Benicle having some salty thoughts, it is kind of uninteresting to react to "what would you like me to do" versus him saying/doing something character-driven or provocative.
In addition to Elwood's suggestion which can be very helpful for an animated Pokemon like a Ninjask, the situation Benicle is witnessing is very clearly urgent. Even if Benicle doesn't like someone (for reasons that were just as rash as Rina looking at him the wrong way one minute, or not looking at him at all the next), it would be hard to say that he's someone who has an interest in making friends if he's expressly on the standby when someone is, you know, choking to death, offering help in a way that comes off as very removed.
As I said before, I think it'd benefit you to give Benicle a conscience for self-improvement to be a fit citizen, since that's ultimately his goal for a return to Farlance. This isn't to say he can't have these negative thoughts and moments where he is disengaged, but since you've established in his history that he has a clear path for development, when it is most appropriate or when he's faced with a situation that more than urges decisiveness, redirecting him into that "How can I improve this situation" mindset will help him grow in that direction.
That mental question allows for him to 1) react rashly as an answer and 2) be the guy who really does have the intention to "make friends" and grow in "wisdom", even if he messes up or initially reacted negatively beforehand.
Do you understand my intentions and hope for your character? I just want him to shine uniquely in every post through his niche role to the group dynamic.
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My 100% original characters.
Frederic the Furret
Aaron the Aggron
Aaron the Aggron
I am successfully wearing glasses. Science.
Fascinating. It appears that you are able to maintain such a rare transmogrification. Yet... If my extensive research on Mega Evolution is to be held accurate and not based on fraudulent sources, I must decipher the enigma behind your form. According to my data, I was led to believe that this artificial process of genetic augmentations specifically required the succor from a member belonging to the homo sapiens. And yet, I see no human accompanying you. Hmm.. Pardon my inquisitiveness, but I truly wish to inquire on your unusual condition. May I ask a few questions?
- How were you able to transform in the first place?
- Did you have a human's assistance, or did you accomplish this wondrous task alone?
- How are you maintaining this augmented form?
- Are you able to alter between forms? Does it hurt if you change?
- Do you feel a part of you changes post-transformation?
- And do you think all Pocket Monsters have the potential to evolve beyond their evolutionary limitations?
Tikki the Chimecho
Cullinan the Carbink
Cullinan the Carbink
WATS PAPPING
HOOOOOIIII!! IM TIKKI FUM FURMAL0W LMAO SNAP CRACKLE POP LOL
UR SOoooo SHeeeeN33, such a cuuuuuute!! hnnnnnnngg
Luk at DEM speckly JIMS!!
dAZZUL, SpAzzUL!! LMAO x3
Do u go 2 dah PaRTys and be a DISCO BAWLZ?!
I bit u git AAAAALLLL the gurlz with supah swag!
... Oh, wait. I just remembered your species are GENDERLESS.
Hmm, do you see yourself as a sir or a ma'am in our society? Or is that something you and your species don't particularly care about?
UR SOoooo SHeeeeN33, such a cuuuuuute!! hnnnnnnngg
Luk at DEM speckly JIMS!!
dAZZUL, SpAzzUL!! LMAO x3
Do u go 2 dah PaRTys and be a DISCO BAWLZ?!
I bit u git AAAAALLLL the gurlz with supah swag!
... Oh, wait. I just remembered your species are GENDERLESS.
Hmm, do you see yourself as a sir or a ma'am in our society? Or is that something you and your species don't particularly care about?
State Your Business! #3
AARON: "Compensation? Haruh ruh raha! Listen, little nugget, I've got to be this bulked being the hands-on leader of the Jubilee Metallurgy and Metal Recycling Plant! Jubilee may be a little brick and mortar in more ways than one, but my team brings in a lot of revenue exporting reformed product to an actual Pokemon city! And the few lucrative gems and minerals we find here and there in my mining exploration team, well, those aren't a bad sell either! In fact, this little nugget beside me here gets his supplies from me!"
AARON: "But it seems you bitty ores are that amazed by my transformation, haruh harah! Sure, I'll answer your questions! It's a little short so you may not see it under my pick axe chin, but I've got a necklace here of three pendants. One's this grey orb, this other is my favorite piece of sea glass I found on a beach one day, and this other one is this rainbow orb. Now the sea glass isn't anything but these two orbs in each other's presence get to glitter, and when I start feeling convicted, they activate, and here I am! No meddling human necessary! Course though, since I'm so used to this form now, I can sustain it by will so much longer than when I first discovered it. Only time this power ever escapes me now is when it's time to go to bed from a hard day of mine and smelt!"
AARON: "I don't hurt when I change, don't worry. It feels like a surge of power, like I can do anything now! Feels real great! It can also feel exhausting the first few times I did it, like keeping it up can be a stress if you're not putting it to work, but that's just me though. I'm sure it's different for soft pieces like that yoga bunny or that one pretty singer. I don't really feel a change in my personality when I do it either, but that's just me. Might be different for everybody, you know? Maybe some of us let it get to their heads."
AARON: "You know, when it comes down to it, I really think any 'mon can do this mega evolve thing. I think we just gotta dig in the right cave for the right glitter. My team hit it big when we discovered a bedrock of this rainbow stone here. Mined some, managed to round 'em out, and here we are, a monopoly on Rainbow Gems! Elsewhere, deep in cliffs or caves, the ground, maybe even in the ocean, there are these special rocks that react to this rainbow colorful stone here, and only certain Pokemon can benefit from it. But with the right match, I think anybody can experience what I do now on the daily!"
AARON: "But it seems you bitty ores are that amazed by my transformation, haruh harah! Sure, I'll answer your questions! It's a little short so you may not see it under my pick axe chin, but I've got a necklace here of three pendants. One's this grey orb, this other is my favorite piece of sea glass I found on a beach one day, and this other one is this rainbow orb. Now the sea glass isn't anything but these two orbs in each other's presence get to glitter, and when I start feeling convicted, they activate, and here I am! No meddling human necessary! Course though, since I'm so used to this form now, I can sustain it by will so much longer than when I first discovered it. Only time this power ever escapes me now is when it's time to go to bed from a hard day of mine and smelt!"
AARON: "I don't hurt when I change, don't worry. It feels like a surge of power, like I can do anything now! Feels real great! It can also feel exhausting the first few times I did it, like keeping it up can be a stress if you're not putting it to work, but that's just me though. I'm sure it's different for soft pieces like that yoga bunny or that one pretty singer. I don't really feel a change in my personality when I do it either, but that's just me. Might be different for everybody, you know? Maybe some of us let it get to their heads."
AARON: "You know, when it comes down to it, I really think any 'mon can do this mega evolve thing. I think we just gotta dig in the right cave for the right glitter. My team hit it big when we discovered a bedrock of this rainbow stone here. Mined some, managed to round 'em out, and here we are, a monopoly on Rainbow Gems! Elsewhere, deep in cliffs or caves, the ground, maybe even in the ocean, there are these special rocks that react to this rainbow colorful stone here, and only certain Pokemon can benefit from it. But with the right match, I think anybody can experience what I do now on the daily!"
State Your Business! #3
CULLINAN: "Please do not speak to me this way. I only took an eon to form, but I am very mature for my age."
CULLINAN: "Some call me "he" or "her". They are wrong, but I am fine that they are wrong because my name is Cullinan. I have not been on the surface very long after Aaron dug into my colony vein, but I forgive... she. I have met some other species who do not fit into gender, but they pick one because it helps them belong. I can understand these feelings, but I am also Cullinan, so please call me Cullinan and buy my minerals."
CULLINAN: "Some call me "he" or "her". They are wrong, but I am fine that they are wrong because my name is Cullinan. I have not been on the surface very long after Aaron dug into my colony vein, but I forgive... she. I have met some other species who do not fit into gender, but they pick one because it helps them belong. I can understand these feelings, but I am also Cullinan, so please call me Cullinan and buy my minerals."
Junier
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"...oh my.
"...Oh! M-mister Aaron, sir! You are just... very... very tall. And the stones that you have necklaced... Oh, you, Mister Aaron, must be very like my grandfather! He grew with 'occult stones' or something but then a thing must have gone wrong with that because he got very hurt and had to be hospitabled. Now when he visits once on a balloon we see he is still very much a ghastly white color. And he has a scar that is nasty as well. I hope that does not happen to you, Mister Aaron. The power of the necklace may be very risky, but I do not know for sure. Have your heard or have you seen bad happenings like with my grandfather, Mister Aaron?"
"Hello... M- um, Cullinan... My aunt very much often visits your shop, I think. However, I do not know what she comes to buy. What are the different minerals that you sell, Cullinan?"
"...Oh! M-mister Aaron, sir! You are just... very... very tall. And the stones that you have necklaced... Oh, you, Mister Aaron, must be very like my grandfather! He grew with 'occult stones' or something but then a thing must have gone wrong with that because he got very hurt and had to be hospitabled. Now when he visits once on a balloon we see he is still very much a ghastly white color. And he has a scar that is nasty as well. I hope that does not happen to you, Mister Aaron. The power of the necklace may be very risky, but I do not know for sure. Have your heard or have you seen bad happenings like with my grandfather, Mister Aaron?"
"Hello... M- um, Cullinan... My aunt very much often visits your shop, I think. However, I do not know what she comes to buy. What are the different minerals that you sell, Cullinan?"
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Oh for Shaymin's sake a temmecho.
Also I think I'll participate with this round of State Your Business:
To Aaron:
You ... just walk around Mega ...? I mean, I've heard of a handful of ways to get around needing a human, but I didn't think anyone actually did that. Don't you have problems with people trying to steal those special rocks that do that? I had to help guard a collection of them once, but maybe this is just a nicer neighborhood, I guess. And what do you need to do that makes you have to keep that going? I'd always thought it was just something for battling, you don't just go to the Arena all the time, do you?
To Cullinan:
Hum, I don't know if I recognize you or not but I did deal with a Carbink a long time ago out of this town. You wouldn't happen to know a Heatmor, would you? His name was ... oh, hell, this is embarrassing. Everyone just called him Iggy, but his name was something like Ignaccio or Ignojund, I actually can't remember it. Anyway, I was helping him with bringing up a vein of silver a few years ago and we traded it with a Carbink here, was that you? Or do you only sell finished materials and not the rougher ore and things?
Also I think I'll participate with this round of State Your Business:
To Aaron:
You ... just walk around Mega ...? I mean, I've heard of a handful of ways to get around needing a human, but I didn't think anyone actually did that. Don't you have problems with people trying to steal those special rocks that do that? I had to help guard a collection of them once, but maybe this is just a nicer neighborhood, I guess. And what do you need to do that makes you have to keep that going? I'd always thought it was just something for battling, you don't just go to the Arena all the time, do you?
To Cullinan:
Hum, I don't know if I recognize you or not but I did deal with a Carbink a long time ago out of this town. You wouldn't happen to know a Heatmor, would you? His name was ... oh, hell, this is embarrassing. Everyone just called him Iggy, but his name was something like Ignaccio or Ignojund, I actually can't remember it. Anyway, I was helping him with bringing up a vein of silver a few years ago and we traded it with a Carbink here, was that you? Or do you only sell finished materials and not the rougher ore and things?