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Old October 13th, 2012 (12:24 AM).
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Originally Posted by Khawill View Post
Was mine not good? Or did you just not read it?
Your roleplay sample could use a bit more work, as it is basically an introduction to your character. It would be great if you could bold each title like some of the others have done as well just so it's easier to spot each section.

Machomuu - Daniel has been accepted! :) Welcome to the game.

Keep the good applications coming! ;D
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