Thread: [Pokémon] Foul Play
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Old January 31st, 2018 (8:29 AM).
DreamSayer DreamSayer is offline
     
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    Review for Chapter 1

    Hmm, this story was much better than I expected it to be now that I've read it. Grimsley is no doubt an interesting character to focus on, and I'm glad to see you're working with him. You did well in incorporating his backstory from the games and I liked the small detail about him being half johtonian. Adds a little more depth to his character.

    We already see Nanu being a badass in the second half of the story, and I find it interesting that this takes place at the same time as SMs plot, which makes more sense the more i think about it. Regardless, I look forward to seeing where this goes.
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