I saved my draft. I have some questions especially on the grammar, because I am not sure I have written things properly.
That was quick!
- The word "lockscreen" is considered mistake, but I think it's a technical term.
I would lean towards "lock screen". It probably doesn't need to be in italics either. Neither does 'big Company' (big company) or 'gaming'.
- I used the Possessive 's with nouns, I see it used very often, but I know it's grammatically wrong.
Go with the grammatically correct case in all instances. That said, the only one I saw that I disagree with is "the iPhone's users" (can be just "iPhone users").
Other than grammar, I have other things to point out on my style: I pretty much did what I used to do when I wrote articles for another forum/network. They made us use many Bold and Italic, so I did that here too. Same thing for the links. I want to say that I tried to find a guide about Joy-cons or even an article on the Daily website, but I didn't find anything suitable, so I only used external links. If I missed it, I am sorry.
I already mentioned the italics that already exist that can be removed (and below I'll mention something that should be in italics), but there's no need for the bold there either - I don't particularly mind it, but it is inconsistent with other articles we've used.
External links are perfectly fine! I'd just say extend them across multiple words (so with "As illustrated in most guides", that all should be a hyperlink, not just the word 'guides'). Also, usernames (@rileytestut) should be in italics.
Also, I am not sure about the Featured Image, because even if I respected the size (640 x 480), it still has a weird effect when I see it in the preview page. How can I improve that?
The background effect? That's the case for all articles and is intended. Seemed fine to me.
A few other things:
More than that, Apple is still interested in giving its users the best privacy, that's why a new app will have its debut on the iPhone: Safety Check, which is going to notify the iPhone's users about which other apps have their personal information.
Split into two sentences (...the best privacy. That's why a...)
You'll want to add an excerpt. Wordpress is dumb and has this off by default, so: firstly, click the screen options tab top right of the editor window, and make sure Excerpt has a marked checkbox. The field for it will appear below the main text window. Give a couple sentences here that will accompany the article title and cover image (will appear below the cover image; see other articles for examples).
You can add a few more tags, e.g. 'Joy-cons'. Also 'featured', which will have the article appear at the top.
Maybe add a line at the end asking readers if they're going to try this out, or what's the weirdest controller they used, etc. Up to you!
And here:
https://daily.pokecommunity.com/wp-admin/profile.php Fill in the Biographical Info field (a few sentences about yourself in 3rd person), and you can upload a profile picture for yourself below that as well.
