L'arc~en~ciel!
I'm dropping by, but I don't have much time to give you an in-depth comment right now; I will stop by again to do a proper comment, but for now, I'd like to point out some things with your Real People tag.
First of all, the edges are painful. D: It definitely takes awhile to get the knack for rendering them, but mess around with the options, and you'll get a nice, smooth cut. Because as it is right now, either you've over sharpened their hair, or something went awry when you were rendering them. Also, just because you've got multiple focals, doesn't mean you can slack on it! D: You could've really taken advantage of the corners to add some much needed negative space, and maybe sort of narrowed the focus back down.
And that's all I'll be saying for today, I will drop by again though, count on it! ;D