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the fact that you described a semi-lame game compared to FE7 made me steer clear away from it a bit more. It's too bad it overshadowed FE7 and AW2... those were two awesome games.
Bliksem said:Yamato-san, some people don't aspire to be professional writers. Obviously, you're very passionate about writer's, but a lot of people aren't. I write because I enjoy it. I use writing as a medium to show my dreams and explain my ideas because I can't draw. I write Original-Non Canon stories; I NEVER use characters that have been introduced in the anime. Does it cost me views? Heck yeah. Does the fact that I dislike romance hurt me? Yup. I don't really care if not all that many people read it as long as those that do enjoy it and see things as I do. I did an experiment and, under a different pen-name, wrote a lemon (I dislike doing that). As it stands... that crappy one-shot lemon scored more views than my 15-chapter, ongoing OT story. Does that upset me? Yeah, it does, but people will read what they want. I want people to read my work, but if I'm not going to aspire to be a writer, I'm not going to go through unprofitable means to try to get a story written just for enjoyment published.
Just a disagreement.
;DYamato-San said:Other people may not feel the same.... some may think it's all fine so long as they're enjoying it, or have their close friends and a few others reading their work, not caring how professional it looks, and can simply drop it all when they feel like it. I respect such people's opinions, but as you can see, such a thing is not meant for me.
I was gonna do the same, but that would have been cliche. It eventually came down to a choice between a ten-year-old n00b with rich parents and a penchant for stupid battling names, an eleven-year-old son of two witchie-kinda characters and a beast whose initials, if you strung them together, spelled 'Death', a secret agent or a kid who was a nice guy, but had ta kill whoever he defeated. Tough choice, but I had the most fun typing up the agent, soo... XDNegrek said:Secret agent Death, eh? XD I was trying to think of someplace where I was going to be able to use that name somewhat plausibly; initially, I was going to actually make your character Death, but then I realized that you had given him ghost pok?mon and it wouldn't work and I was sad. *cries river*
I realize that, which is why I said that this was just what I've noticed. I also said that the badfics were generally under the heading of OT, not that OT was bad.As for OT 'fics being (generally) bad... you obviously haven't read most of the good OT 'fics...
Yo, man. I rEd ya on the car part, it's really tough on the body... XPfrostweaver said:And hello again everyone ^^
I'm back from my holiday (with my legs still hurting real bad because I'm cramped in the car for a 12 or 13 hour car ride) and hopefully can start reviewing some more before school starts again. Then again, I just picked up FFTA so not sure how the reviews will go with that... =D;;;
Either way, happy autumn everyone
(yay~ it's so close to winter la!)
I don't have a DS so I won't really know yet.Katsuro said:You're back Weaver-san! YAY! :)
Niko...what do you think about AWDS? ._.; [/off-topic]
Niko said:You know what? I'm thinking we should make it to fanfic of the month so that it would be more honorable.
Don't ask me why or who set this rule, but "die" can never go with the perfect tenses. I think that this is related to the common misusage of the 2 words "die" and "kill." You "actively die," and you are "killed passively" by someone else. You can never "passively die" and "actively killed." ("Actively killed" does exist, but then the word will become suicide instead.)having died in their feeble attempts to protect the humans they had sworn loyalty to.
That bolded comma is terribly weird. Colon is probably the better choice here.And right next to the creature lies a large, somewhat humanoid Pok?mon, its leathery gray skin bruised and its powerful violet tail covered with slashes.
The article is missing. An "a" or "the," please?It takes silent, wingless flight
I personally fail to see the closeness between these two clauses. They aren't related enough for the semicolon to be used.He liked Pok?mon speech; Mr. Flintlake?s Vulpix was usually a great deal more interesting than any human person he had met.
Can't we just stick with the old appositive with the fellow commas instead of the dashes here?They looked at each other - a tall blonde and a short, dark-haired man, -
The first clause is missing a verb...when both wearing that expression which Mark knew only too well.
Having, not hadsomething about North-West Ouen had creepy effects on Pok?mon.
If it's not important, then why use it? If a choice is made, then there is also a reason for the choice. If Sailance is really unimportant, then why not move the story back to good old Kanto, hmm? Obviously, something about Sailance moved you to place the story there, and that is the reason why descriptions are needed for Sailance.Sailance isn't that important of a setting, so I never really put that much thought into describing that in particular.
If you can honestly read this one sentence in one breath like what the punctuations are telling us to do, I'll give you a cookie.Taking it towards the house, he stroked the warm, orange scales and vaguely remembered pointing at a Charmander in a picture book when he was little to announce to his parents that he was going to pick it when he became a trainer.
A colon doesn't seem right at all to me there... a rewording of that sentence and probably splitting it into two sounds better to me.That bolded comma is terribly weird. Colon is probably the better choice here.
Um... does the phrase "to take flight" have an article? o.O;The article is missing. An "a" or "the," please?
I tried that first, but it seemed to have too many and confusing commas in there that way, somehow. Do you still think I should go back to that?Can't we just stick with the old appositive with the fellow commas instead of the dashes here?
Now, this is just plain wrong. It's simply stating that for unknown reasons, something about North-West Ouen had creepy effects on Pok?mon. I don't see how "having" could possibly make sense there.Having, not had
They will, actually. I just tend to take a looooooong while to make the relevance of various things clear. Mark's parents made a reappearance in chapter 24 of the previous version, and while Mrs. Grodski hasn't been very relevant, I've been planning for her to have a role towards the end of the fic.I know from previous version that all supporting casts so far will not do a thing for the main plot after Mark departs on to their journey.
Sailance is the city, not the region. I could not have moved the fic to Kanto because other settings in Ouen are important. I placed Mark there because it is, as it says, "stereotyped as a haven for Pok?phobes". I should probably describe it better, yes, but Sailance's importance lies in its image rather than the city itself.If it's not important, then why use it? If a choice is made, then there is also a reason for the choice. If Sailance is really unimportant, then why not move the story back to good old Kanto, hmm? Obviously, something about Sailance moved you to place the story there, and that is the reason why descriptions are needed for Sailance.
I think I've heard of 'Tangled Web' before from somewhere... Could I have the link to that and 'Revelations', please?Negrek said:My all-time favorite 'fics? Tangled Web by appishsnae, Gods and Demons by Keleri, Xanthic Growlithe Contract and XGC2: Johto by Facia, and Revelations: A Cynic's View of Pok?mon by CorianderWryters. All but one are OT's.