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[Miz en Scène]

Generally, I try to make my chapters at least 2000 words long or more. Though, it goes longer if it's a one-shot(which I'm currently working on).


Swampoleongaurdian [sic]: "lol hi guys this is a story thread that im posting in writer's lounge!"
Us: "'Kay. We're going to give you advice."
Swampoleon: "wut u gais r meen!!11eleventy"
Us: "Um... 'kay?"
Swampoleon: "heres another idea thread!!!111"
Us: "We're going to comment, assuming you're actually planning on writing this."
Swampoleon: "lol jk gais heres another thread and another thread and another thread."
Sparkling Dragon: "WTF."
The rest of us: "Word."
Swampoleon: "omg u gais r pestering me!!!1"
Everyone and their mothers: "lols heres more idea threads!!111sixtytwo"
Jax: "Uh, 'kay, so I saw all this going on in Writer's Lounge, and is anyone else getting annoyed?"
liveitout: "I think idea threads are just there because people don't actually want to write.
Jax: "...Are you ****ing serious?"
Remus Lupin: "Yes. That too."
Harry Potter: "What?"
Remus Lupin: "Oops. Too much information."
The rest of the FFL: "We can't stop these people from posting threads, but it's totally a problem. Seriously."
Jax: "You know what? How about I just work on a plot bunny thread?"
Bay: "Oh, by the way, Serebii covers all kinds of topics in their WL, whereas we try to dump all these topics into the FFL. That might be the problem."
The rest of the FFL: "lulz, Serebii."
solvino: "Hey, guys. 'Sup?"
Kanto Lover: "Plz beta my fic here's the prologue?"
The rest of us: "WTF, mates?"
Astinus: "Oh, by the way, did anyone else notice how stupid some of these guides are? By the way, I'm also proposing we redo a lot of crap in this forum."
The rest of us: "...YAY REWRITES!"
Swampoleon: "U gaiz r meen!" *gives up*
Us: "Finally."
Breezy: "Hey, what's a destiny fic?"
The rest of us: *Complex discussion on the nature of the above*
Astinus: "Sorry guys, no revolution. My computer died."
Everyone: "Aw . . ."
Feign: "Let's all write stories about psychos!"
Jax: *wandering back into the thread drunkenly* "I don't actually know where I am!"
Everyone: *intake of breath*
Someone: *says something particularly uninteresting or somewhat ontopic*
Starfox: "I can't let you do that."
Citrinin: "O BEE-TEE-DUBS, Sparkling Dragon, I notice LEGENDARIES."
Sparkling Dragon: "YOU NOTICE NOTHING."
Citrinin: "Oops. Misinterpretation, yes?"
Sparkling Dragon: "YOU NOTICE NOTHING. PAY NO ATTENTION TO THE MAN BEHIND THE CURTAIN."
Mika: "'Sup, guys?"
Jax: "I'm still drunk."
Mika: "Elvesmonkstortureevilwtforgy"
Citrinin: "The voices... they[sic] are too many."
Mika: Does Jax share those beverages she's procured? o3o
Neo Groudon: Hi, I'm new here....Lulz
Everyone: "Ghostbusters! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w_O7yn0k8Fw" [that's right, we can pronounce URLs out loud now]
Mika: Yeah... gunna need some beverages. And need to remind myself not to procrastinate. ~3~
Neo Groudon:I'm against drinking so I'll just have some coke, oh yeah...... PROCRASTINATION!
Neo Groudon: I'm doing it wrong XD
Feign: *talking in a bad dub* "I am ninja master!"
Neo Groudon: *Complains about keyboard problems*
Jax: *Reassures Neo Groudon about some stuff*
Neo Groudon: *Keeps the script moving along*
Sparkling Dragon: *whines about people missing the point*
Feign: "Strokes Sparkles genitally"
Us: "I hope you realise what you just said . . ."
Feign: "Damn you Freud and your cigars!"
Sparkling Dragon: *slaps* "Keep your hands to yourself!
Shrike Flamestar: *Tries to Bring FFL to talk about something relevant*
FFL in General: *Continues Freudian Jokes...*
Sparkling Dragon:* Bringing conversation back to chapter/fic length.*
Neo Groudon: *Supporting Shrike and Sparkling Dragon by doing the same*

 

[Dagzar]

How long do you guys like to make your chapters?
I like my chapters to be between 4000 and 6000 words with only a couple of exceptions.

And wow, the FFL has certainly been active lately. I can hardly remember the last time the FFL went days without posts.

 

[Feign]

We're probably in celebration, but that is all I know, we might all be individualistic.

 

[Misheard Whisper]

This is the aftermath of Shattered's release party. All who say otherwise are just unknowing gatecrashers.

 

[JX Valentine]

This is the aftermath of Shattered's release party. All who say otherwise are just unknowing gatecrashers.

*spikes the punch and walks away whistling*

 

[Misheard Whisper]

I already spiked it. *takes another glass of double-spiked punch*

~Waltzin' Matilda, Waltzin' Matilda, who'll come a'waltzin' Matilda wi'me?~ *hic*

 

[Feign]

Well while you guys were spiking it, I shot you with a dart at you with a blow gun, so the poison should be acting just right about now.

 

[Misheard Whisper]

~And 'e sang as 'e watched, and 'e waited for 'is-guk! *dies*

 

[Citrinin]

Feign, you should drink the drink yourself.

Shortcut to inspiration. :D

 

[Feign]

No that's okay, I'm already high on life.

*dances around waving arms about and laughs like a maniac*

 

[Misheard Whisper]

Swampoleongaurdian [sic]: "lol hi guys this is a story thread that im posting in writer's lounge!"
Us: "'Kay. We're going to give you advice."
Swampoleon: "wut u gais r meen!!11eleventy"
Us: "Um... 'kay?"
Swampoleon: "heres another idea thread!!!111"
Us: "We're going to comment, assuming you're actually planning on writing this."
Swampoleon: "lol jk gais heres another thread and another thread and another thread."
Sparkling Dragon: "WTF."
The rest of us: "Word."
Swampoleon: "omg u gais r pestering me!!!1"
Everyone and their mothers: "lols heres more idea threads!!111sixtytwo"
Jax: "Uh, 'kay, so I saw all this going on in Writer's Lounge, and is anyone else getting annoyed?"
liveitout: "I think idea threads are just there because people don't actually want to write.
Jax: "...Are you ****ing serious?"
Remus Lupin: "Yes. That too."
Harry Potter: "What?"
Remus Lupin: "Oops. Too much information."
The rest of the FFL: "We can't stop these people from posting threads, but it's totally a problem. Seriously."
Jax: "You know what? How about I just work on a plot bunny thread?"
Bay: "Oh, by the way, Serebii covers all kinds of topics in their WL, whereas we try to dump all these topics into the FFL. That might be the problem."
The rest of the FFL: "lulz, Serebii."
solvino: "Hey, guys. 'Sup?"
Kanto Lover: "Plz beta my fic here's the prologue?"
The rest of us: "WTF, mates?"
Astinus: "Oh, by the way, did anyone else notice how stupid some of these guides are? By the way, I'm also proposing we redo a lot of crap in this forum."
The rest of us: "...YAY REWRITES!"
Swampoleon: "U gaiz r meen!" *gives up*
Us: "Finally."
Breezy: "Hey, what's a destiny fic?"
The rest of us: *Complex discussion on the nature of the above*
Astinus: "Sorry guys, no revolution. My computer died."
Everyone: "Aw . . ."
Feign: "Let's all write stories about psychos!"
Jax: *wandering back into the thread drunkenly* "I don't actually know where I am!"
Everyone: *intake of breath*
Someone: *says something particularly uninteresting or somewhat ontopic*
Starfox: "I can't let you do that."
Citrinin: "O BEE-TEE-DUBS, Sparkling Dragon, I notice LEGENDARIES."
Sparkling Dragon: "YOU NOTICE NOTHING."
Citrinin: "Oops. Misinterpretation, yes?"
Sparkling Dragon: "YOU NOTICE NOTHING. PAY NO ATTENTION TO THE MAN BEHIND THE CURTAIN."
Mika: "'Sup, guys?"
Jax: "I'm still drunk."
Mika: "Elvesmonkstortureevilwtforgy"
Citrinin: "The voices... they[sic] are too many."
Mika: Does Jax share those beverages she's procured? o3o
Neo Groudon: Hi, I'm new here....Lulz
Everyone: "Ghostbusters! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w_O7yn0k8Fw" [that's right, we can pronounce URLs out loud now]
Mika: Yeah... gunna need some beverages. And need to remind myself not to procrastinate. ~3~
Neo Groudon:I'm against drinking so I'll just have some coke, oh yeah...... PROCRASTINATION!
Neo Groudon: I'm doing it wrong XD
Feign: *talking in a bad dub* "I am ninja master!"
Neo Groudon: *Complains about keyboard problems*
Jax: *Reassures Neo Groudon about some stuff*
Neo Groudon: *Keeps the script moving along*
Sparkling Dragon: *whines about people missing the point*
Feign: "Strokes Sparkles genitally"
Us: "I hope you realise what you just said . . ."
Feign: "Damn you Freud and your cigars!"
Sparkling Dragon: *slaps* "Keep your hands to yourself!
Shrike Flamestar: *Tries to Bring FFL to talk about something relevant*
FFL in General: *Continues Freudian Jokes...*
Sparkling Dragon: *Brings conversation back to chapter/fic length.*
Jax: "I spiked the punch. Teehee."
Sparkling Dragon: *sings drunkenly*
Feign: "lol poison"
Sparkling Dragon: *dies*


We're waiting on you, Jax! XD

 

[Shrike Flamestar]

Swampoleongaurdian [sic]: "lol hi guys this is a story thread that im posting in writer's lounge!"
Us: "'Kay. We're going to give you advice."
Swampoleon: "wut u gais r meen!!11eleventy"
Us: "Um... 'kay?"
Swampoleon: "heres another idea thread!!!111"
Us: "We're going to comment, assuming you're actually planning on writing this."
Swampoleon: "lol jk gais heres another thread and another thread and another thread."
Sparkling Dragon: "WTF."
The rest of us: "Word."
Swampoleon: "omg u gais r pestering me!!!1"
Everyone and their mothers: "lols heres more idea threads!!111sixtytwo"
Jax: "Uh, 'kay, so I saw all this going on in Writer's Lounge, and is anyone else getting annoyed?"
liveitout: "I think idea threads are just there because people don't actually want to write.
Jax: "...Are you ****ing serious?"
Remus Lupin: "Yes. That too."
Harry Potter: "What?"
Remus Lupin: "Oops. Too much information."
The rest of the FFL: "We can't stop these people from posting threads, but it's totally a problem. Seriously."
Jax: "You know what? How about I just work on a plot bunny thread?"
Bay: "Oh, by the way, Serebii covers all kinds of topics in their WL, whereas we try to dump all these topics into the FFL. That might be the problem."
The rest of the FFL: "lulz, Serebii."
solvino: "Hey, guys. 'Sup?"
Kanto Lover: "Plz beta my fic here's the prologue?"
The rest of us: "WTF, mates?"
Astinus: "Oh, by the way, did anyone else notice how stupid some of these guides are? By the way, I'm also proposing we redo a lot of crap in this forum."
The rest of us: "...YAY REWRITES!"
Swampoleon: "U gaiz r meen!" *gives up*
Us: "Finally."
Breezy: "Hey, what's a destiny fic?"
The rest of us: *Complex discussion on the nature of the above*
Astinus: "Sorry guys, no revolution. My computer died."
Everyone: "Aw . . ."
Feign: "Let's all write stories about psychos!"
Jax: *wandering back into the thread drunkenly* "I don't actually know where I am!"
Everyone: *intake of breath*
Someone: *says something particularly uninteresting or somewhat ontopic*
Starfox: "I can't let you do that."
Citrinin: "O BEE-TEE-DUBS, Sparkling Dragon, I notice LEGENDARIES."
Sparkling Dragon: "YOU NOTICE NOTHING."
Citrinin: "Oops. Misinterpretation, yes?"
Sparkling Dragon: "YOU NOTICE NOTHING. PAY NO ATTENTION TO THE MAN BEHIND THE CURTAIN."
Mika: "'Sup, guys?"
Jax: "I'm still drunk."
Mika: "Elvesmonkstortureevilwtforgy"
Citrinin: "The voices... they[sic] are too many."
Mika: Does Jax share those beverages she's procured? o3o
Neo Groudon: Hi, I'm new here....Lulz
Everyone: "Ghostbusters! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w_O7yn0k8Fw" [that's right, we can pronounce URLs out loud now]
Mika: Yeah... gunna need some beverages. And need to remind myself not to procrastinate. ~3~
Neo Groudon:I'm against drinking so I'll just have some coke, oh yeah...... PROCRASTINATION!
Neo Groudon: I'm doing it wrong XD
Feign: *talking in a bad dub* "I am ninja master!"
Neo Groudon: *Complains about keyboard problems*
Jax: *Reassures Neo Groudon about some stuff*
Neo Groudon: *Keeps the script moving along*
Sparkling Dragon: *whines about people missing the point*
Feign: "Strokes Sparkles genitally"
Us: "I hope you realise what you just said . . ."
Feign: "Damn you Freud and your cigars!"
Sparkling Dragon: *slaps* "Keep your hands to yourself!
Shrike Flamestar: *Tries to Bring FFL to talk about something relevant*
FFL in General: *Continues Freudian Jokes...*
Sparkling Dragon: *Brings conversation back to chapter/fic length.*
Jax: "I spiked the punch. Teehee."
Sparkling Dragon: *sings drunkenly*
Feign: "lol poison"
Sparkling Dragon: *dies*
Shrike Flamestar: *Fails at his attempt to return sanity to the lounge*

*Sighs*

 

[Bay]

Oh, good. Because I kinda married one of you in a drunken, Vegas-like state, and I'm not sure if you've noticed.

On a totally unrelated note, Bay, have you ever gotten a marriage annulled?

No. O.o Not sure why you asked me this, but no matter. XD;

Yeah, yeah, I'm late. I had to take care of some things while you guys are having fun at Sparkling Dragon's Shattered release party! :O

As for the page length question, NE ranged between six and fifteen pages for part one and part two ten to twenty pages. I try to have the target be at ten pages, but part two of the story suddenly has a lot more going on. :O

 

[Misheard Whisper]

but part two of the story suddenly has a lot more going on. :O

That's always the case, isn't it? I've never been able to get to part two of one of mine . . . >_> I'll get there one day. Meanwhile, have some punch! *proffers bowl of suspicious-looking punch*

 

[Citrinin]

I agree. I've got a lot planned for part two of mine, but for now, massive foreshadowing and character development are what I'm focusing on now.

EDIT: 7³ posts~

 

[JX Valentine]

No. O.o Not sure why you asked me this, but no matter. XD;

Uh, ask no questions and sign a piece of paper? Also, might I have the ring back?

Also, the summary needs moar sarcasm, guys. Fixed up the parts that were doing it wrong.

Spoiler:

Swampoleongaurdian [sic]: "lol hi guys this is a story thread that im posting in writer's lounge!"
Us: "'Kay. We're going to give you advice."
Swampoleon: "wut u gais r meen!!11eleventy"
Us: "Um... 'kay?"
Swampoleon: "heres another idea thread!!!111"
Us: "We're going to comment, assuming you're actually planning on writing this."
Swampoleon: "lol jk gais heres another thread and another thread and another thread."
Sparkling Dragon: "WTF."
The rest of us: "Word."
Swampoleon: "omg u gais r pestering me!!!1"
Everyone and their mothers: "lols heres more idea threads!!111sixtytwo"
Jax: "Uh, 'kay, so I saw all this going on in Writer's Lounge, and is anyone else getting annoyed?"
liveitout: "I think idea threads are just there because people don't actually want to write.
Jax: "...Are you ****ing serious?"
Remus Lupin: "Yes. That too."
Harry Potter: "What?"
Remus Lupin: "Oops. Too much information."
The rest of the FFL: "We can't stop these people from posting threads, but it's totally a problem. Seriously."
Jax: "You know what? How about I just work on a plot bunny thread?"
Bay: "Oh, by the way, Serebii covers all kinds of topics in their WL, whereas we try to dump all these topics into the FFL. That might be the problem."
The rest of the FFL: "lulz, Serebii."
solvino: "Hey, guys. 'Sup?"
Kanto Lover: "Plz beta my fic here's the prologue?"
The rest of us: "WTF, mates?"
Astinus: "Oh, by the way, did anyone else notice how stupid some of these guides are? By the way, I'm also proposing we redo a lot of crap in this forum."
The rest of us: "...YAY REWRITES!"
Swampoleon: "U gaiz r meen!" *gives up*
Us: "Finally."
Breezy: "Hey, what's a destiny fic?"
The rest of us: "Serious business."
Astinus: "Sorry guys, no revolution. My computer died."
Everyone: "Aw . . ."
Feign: "Let's all write stories about psychos!"
Jax: *wandering back into the thread drunkenly* "I don't actually know where I am!"
Citrinin: "O BEE-TEE-DUBS, Sparkling Dragon, I notice LEGENDARIES."
Sparkling Dragon: "YOU NOTICE NOTHING."
Citrinin: "Oops. Misinterpretation, yes?"
Sparkling Dragon: "YOU NOTICE NOTHING. PAY NO ATTENTION TO THE MAN BEHIND THE CURTAIN."
Mika: "Hey, guys. 'Sup?"
Jax: "I'm still drunk."
Mika: "Elvesmonkstortureevilwtforgy"
Citrinin: "The voices... they[sic] are too many."
Mika: "Does Jax share those beverages she's procured? o3o"
Neo Groudon: "Hi, I'm new here....Lulz"
Everyone: "Ghostbusters! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w_O7yn0k8Fw" [that's right, we can pronounce URLs out loud now]
Mika: "Yeah... gunna need some beverages. And need to remind myself not to procrastinate. ~3~"
Neo Groudon: "Yay bandwagon! I'm doing it wrong!"
Feign: *talking in a bad dub* "I am ninja master!"
Neo Groudon: "Still doingitwrong!Withoutspacesthistime!"
Jax: "You sure are, kid."
Feign: "Strokes Sparkles genitally"
Us: "I hope you realise what you just said . . ."
Everyone:"Lulz, Freud."
Sparkling Dragon: *slaps* "Keep your hands to yourself!"
Shrike Flamestar: "Hey, guys. 'Sup?"
Sparkling Dragon: "tl;dr MY FIC."
Jax: "I spiked the punch. Teehee."
Sparkling Dragon: *sings drunkenly*
Shrike Flamestar: *Fails at his attempt to return sanity to the lounge*
Sparkling Dragon: "JAX. TITS OR GTFO."
Jax: "Oh, for the love of Me, what are you ****heads doing?"

The last one also comes from an icon. Those of you who get it are as old as Jesus me. Those who don't... *pats sympathetically*

 

[Misheard Whisper]

I agree. I've got a lot planned for part two of mine, but for now, massive foreshadowing and character development are what I'm focusing on now.

<3 Foreshadowing is so much fun. Have you picked any up in Shattered yet?

Oh, and btw. Easter Eggs? I don't think anybody picked this one up in Torn-

"Really?" I asked. Before Dragon could answer, however, we were interrupted by a voice. It was a deep, slow voice, ancient and powerful. It resonated through my head and around the square.

Palkia learns AncientPower, I believe?

I know I got ninja'd. =P

EDIT: Yep. I did. What?

Sparkling Dragon: "JAX. TITS OR GTFO."

Where'd you get that from? x_X

Sparkling Dragon: "tl;dr MY FIC."

Yep, that's me to a T~ ^_^ Subliminal advertising. *coughShatteredcough*

 

[JX Valentine]

Where'd you get that from?

The "we're waiting for you" message just wasn't funny if I didn't modify it like that and took advantage of your drunkenness at the same time. *sage nod*

 

[Misheard Whisper]

Ah right. I meant "We're waiting for you to die as well", seeing as Feign shot us punch-drinkers with poison darts.

 

[Citrinin]

Valentine is a Lv100 master in sarcasm. ;D

<3 Foreshadowing is so much fun. Have you picked any up in Shattered yet?

Not anything subtle. XD;

My foreshadowing is mostly blatant - i.e. I want the reader to know that I'm foreshadowing.

Although some is definitely subtle. ;D