GP's Art

[BurstX]

hmmm, im really liking the new colors for milodos, it makes the shading flow a lot better.

honestly you can add more and more shdaing to your lance sprite but its biggest flaw is the anatomy. his right arm looks really weird and the fact that your colors look so alike its really hard to tell where the bottom of the arm attaches, it also seems really fat compared to the other arm. no for the left arm.

not only is it to shart and skinny compared to the other arm but the hand seems weird to me, not really sure why it just does...


yea thats all i got, peace

 

[The Original Darkwiz787]

Ahem, I'm requesting Credit for my Trophy Gyrados... I did make the sprite. P.S. if you put it under the little legal thing at the bottom (Forgot what its called), put it as


Gyrados Trophy is copyright Darkwiz787, Doomed.&.dreaming and .|Dark|Wiz|.

All three because I dont know wich name ill be remembered by xD Also Im getting a name change tommorow or a few days sooo thats why .|Dark|wiz|. is there aswell.

Thanks in advance
-Darkwiz787

 

[= GPR =]

even better, i put directly under the sprite!

Sorry about that! The credit got lost in the shuffle... due credit is given where it is owed... and you shall definitely recieve credit!

It should be there now!

Again, sorry about that... thanks again for letting me use that sprite! I still love it!

 

[= GPR =]

BTW, thanks KageX. I'm taking your crit into account and am going to redo the arm... remember, this is my first scratched trainer... i'm not that good with people yet...

Anyhow, a little update: New Scratch & Recolor of scratch

Yellow Ribbon

Pink Ribbon

Ribbons may be used w/o permission, give credit though.

Keep Spriting

 

[Vannah☆]

Before I say anything else, what you've done here is great. Amazing, even. =3 I especially like Mr. Snorex and the Lance/Gyarados animation. Oh and the cockatoo. xDDD However, as for the fakemon, while some are alright, there are a bunch of factors that really need some fixing. It's hard to scratch sprite, I know. xD Especially when you don't even have a reference to look at. But, nevertheless, some of the designs (alone) are a little unoriginal and etchy. Humsaw, Sparkrust, and the ants for example, need a new fresh look. (If I have time, I'll make a Humsaw if you don't mind. xD) They look too 2Dish in some places and the shading is almost backwards (on Humsaw at least) Sparkrust is too big. xD Too much shading in there if we're talking about a potential fakemon. And on some of these, the anatomy is way off. When making a scratch, I've always found it helpful to look at a drawing of an animal or creature that the scratch most represents and an official sprite at the same time (for size, color, and shading references.) Overall, Lance is great, and everything in this collection you've made is fantastic. Keep up the great work!

 

[= GPR =]

Before I say anything else, what you've done here is great. Amazing, even. =3 I especially like Mr. Snorex and the Lance/Gyarados animation. Oh and the cockatoo. xDDD However, as for the fakemon, while some are alright, there are a bunch of factors that really need some fixing. It's hard to scratch sprite, I know. xD Especially when you don't even have a reference to look at. But, nevertheless, some of the designs (alone) are a little unoriginal and etchy. Humsaw, Sparkrust, and the ants for example, need a new fresh look. (If I have time, I'll make a Humsaw if you don't mind. xD) They look too 2Dish in some places and the shading is almost backwards (on Humsaw at least) Sparkrust is too big. xD Too much shading in there if we're talking about a potential fakemon. And on some of these, the anatomy is way off. When making a scratch, I've always found it helpful to look at a drawing of an animal or creature that the scratch most represents and an official sprite at the same time (for size, color, and shading references.) Overall, Lance is great, and everything in this collection you've made is fantastic. Keep up the great work!

Wowzer! Thanks!

You may do as you please with humsaw... i despise that sprite... it's has FAIL written all over it! As for the ants, they are very old, and have not been touched in more than half a year... i probably could go back and redo them... and sparkrust... that was just a shading experiment gone WRONG!!! I could probably go back and fix him too... although i think sparkrust is a lost hope since it isn't that original...

I think the ant's are original enough... well, at least torchant is... i know that their anatomy is WAY OFF... like i said, those were some of my first scratches... and i havent gone back to them...

As for looking at drawings, i don't have any of sparkrust or the ants... i made them up off the top of my mind in paint... but humsaw, i have some really rough skeches...

Thanks for the liking on my gyarados ani... I LUV it too... it was my VERY FIRST animation you know... ^_^

and Mr. Snorex... that's my teacher Mr. Snoreck... his eyes are really like that! One is higher than the other! I do exagerate it though...

Thanks anyways! Your responsiveness and encouragement is greatly appreciated! Also, good job on the crit!

Keep Spriting!

 

[SytheXP]

Like the banette fools thing lol looks neat. Kinda scratchy but the concept is really great. Um quick question. Im struggling making GIF animations with gimp...... Any chance you use gimp and could walk me through it? If not its fine. Love your sprites and everything. And you are really helpful to the community.

 

[= GPR =]

SytheXP... thanks for the comment, first off... it's greatly appreciated...

Secondly, thanks for the constructive criticism!

Thirdly, thanks for the pun... "it's kinda scratchy..." because it's a scratch! ^_^ No, i know what you mean... the shading is definitely a bit square, and the outline is a bit jagged as well... but still, thanks!

Anyhow, i'll talk to you elsewhere 'bout gif...

Anyhow, here is my May Pixel Art entry... i think it's wonderful... maybe a bit over done on the diveting... but i wanted to try something different...

Spoiler:

"Our World is crying"

Keep Spriting Folks!

 

[SytheXP]

I LOVE IT 0.0 the shading looks good the only part that bothers me is one of the petals looks a little funny. Good luck...... ^_^ and NP about the comments. And I just noticed the pun =P lol

 

[= GPR =]

OH NO! which petal? it must be repremanded immediately!

(edit: BTW thanks for the comment... ^_^)

 

[SytheXP]

I hope you dont mind I edited it for you lol, well its only a portion to show you plz dont be mad at me. Also I circled the area so you can make the corrections you see fit, you may not even see it necessary but I made it a little bit more round.

 

[= GPR =]

Hm... thanks, i'm gonna play around with it...

Any ways, something new...

Gyarados Chao

Keep Spriting!

 

[SytheXP]

Fox deleted my last post, I thought it was constructive I guess I wasn't constructive enough. I hope this one is better lol. The chao looks nice. The shading is fairly near perfect however the anatomy seems off (I know its a chao and its supposed to be short and fat) but I think you should slim it up a little bit. As for your other work with the petal it looks great as I have mentioned countless times. The petal thing isn't to noticible Im just prone to finding small impurities and it seems a little un natural. Can't wait to see a revised version of it and what you have in store for us in the future.

 

[= GPR =]

I'll do the chao later...

I made something new! I first started with girafarig's body... cut off the head... and scratched a new one... then i went in and redid the legs, so they weren't all knoby... then i scratched the mane and tail! I made my own shading... and voila! (there's two versions... and the gray mane ones are shinies...)

Rocinante (Wild Horse Pokemon)
Ground Type

Wild Rocinante roam in tight herds, keeping an eye out for one another.
These Pokemon are extremely loyal and will carry their trainer on their
back, no matter how far.

I also have once again redone Spinum's shading... this looks the best yet, in my opinnion...

 

[Jαcκςση]

Looks really nice! I think I prefer the lighter colored one. Shading is excellent! Maybe just the tail is a little, well awkward? It looks very strange. Anyway, keep it up!

 

[GFA]

Rocinante doesn't really look like a Pokemon... It doesn't have any abilities. It's just like a horse. Try making it more unnatural.

 

[= GPR =]

Rocinante doesn't really look like a Pokemon... It doesn't have any abilities. It's just like a horse. Try making it more unnatural.

Snorlax doesn't either... except his obsesive sleeping and eating... nor does bidoof... he's a beaver...not very wowing...

But no, it's all good ^_^

Rocinante is ground type, a fast one for that matter... you don't see to many fast ground types. he can learn a whole slew of ground type attacks, as well as many normal type, rock type and even a couple steel and dark ones...

He's solid, maybe not overly impressive, but he's solid... like a linoone or a raticate... he's pretty much just there to fill space in your pokedex... and to look pretty! ^_^

Thanks for the comments though HFI!

Jackson, how would you recomend me changing the tail? I am having a bit of difficulty with it... i like the pose, but i can't work the outlining on the far left, nor the shading in the back...

BTW, i made a quick edit... but i don't like the teeth...

Gyarados with it's mouth closed...

Thanks everyone!

Keep Spriting!

 

[SytheXP]

I'll do the chao later...

I made something new! I first started with girafarig's body... cut off the head... and scratched a new one... then i went in and redid the legs, so they weren't all knoby... then i scratched the mane and tail! I made my own shading... and voila! (there's two versions... and the gray mane ones are shinies...)

Rocinante (Wild Horse Pokemon)
Ground Type

Wild Rocinante roam in tight herds, keeping an eye out for one another.
These Pokemon are extremely loyal and will carry their trainer on their
back, no matter how far.

I also have once again redone Spinum's shading... this looks the best yet, in my opinnion...

Hmm I don't like spinum to much he just frightens me Id be scared to run into a wild one. Anyway I wanted to coment on Rocinante. I love the concept and the shading. However there are 2 well 3 problem areas for me. the first 2 are the front legs. They still appear knoby...... 3rd would be the tail. It needs to be rounded slightly. Shading is great and it is a nice original concept. I like it a lot. Still scared of Spinum though.

 

[= GPR =]

I'm noticing now that Rocinante's far right leg looks kinda crooked and broken... i'm gonna have to redo that... as for the tail... again... i'm not sure how to work that... i'm not sure what scytheXP means by rounding it... in the far rear? near the tip... or the butt? As for the legs... i can go back and fix them up... i'll smooth em out...

Thanks to everyone who posted on him!

A little joke i made...
Diglette!

Spoiler:

I know, it's not that great... i made it in like ten minutes... i just thought everyone would get a kick out of it!

Take care everyone!

Keep Spriting!

 

[SytheXP]

I ment the top tip of the tail it looks like it makes a triangle sorta, sorry that I wasn't clear lol. It probably needs to be brought down by 1 row of pixels and that should most likely fix that (Hope that was understandable)