Ruby hack: [Hack of the Year 2012] POKéMON LIGHT PLATINUM

[Wesley FG]

I am needing a person that corrects mistakes
of English so that when the hack is ready
he translates, please the ones who it can help speak right here
or send me MP's

BIG UPDATES

PART 1 THE CHARACTERS

Hero
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It will be you, a cheerful and very tempered face that lost
its father with few years of life, and not very remembers him.

Heroine

It will be you, a cheerful and very tempered cat that lost
its father with few years of life, and not very he/she remembers him.

Prof. STeven

The local Teacher of YELLOW TOWN city and
its great friend during all its adventure.

Prof. OAK's

You know it at little time but soon they become
great friends being alwayshelped by him.

Kenta

Spoiled nephew of Prof.OAK, it will be a big one
friend and rival, developing with you.

Red

Mysterious trainer of Pallet is very strong
and resembles each other a lot ASH.

Champion Kaohri

Champion Pokémon of ZHERY is an its great friend
it will help it in a lot of occasions

Champion Ash K.

Current World Champion Pokémon him this being
always very exactly with everybody and is a great trainer

Champion Lance

Champion of Johto-Kanto one of the largest ones
and legendary trainers of the history.

Champion Steven

Champion of Hoen a great master
pokémon.

PART 2 OS HM's

HM01 CUT

HM02 FLY

HM03 SURF

HM04 STRENGTH

HM05 LAVA SURF

HM06 ROCK SLIDE

HM07 WATERFALL

HM08 DIVE

PART 3 NEWS ITENS

DYNAMITE

It explodes big stones.

HEADBUTT TREE's

It knocks down pokémons or Berrys of you tree's.

FLAMETHOWER TREE's

It burns you hoist colours with a fire burst (Flamethower).

HONEY TREE's

It attracts pokémons insects used in you tree's of honey.

DIG HOLE's

In certain holes in the Desert you can use DIG, to dig and to go until the underground (UNDERGROUND) of ZHERY for you explore it as well as in the game of D/P, it will exist items and if you walk a lot will find a villa lost in the underground
where many mysteries await it.

FLYNING IN ALTARIA-CHARIZARD (Boy) AND ALTARIA-HONCKROW(Girl)

I really think that was of my great creativity to create a map combining with an iten of this to form a great creativity explosion you will really fly literally.

PART 4 NEWS COMPETITIONS

SURFING COMPETITON

A competition of surf of the city of SEANPORT of which the leader of the city (on top of GYARADOS) and the current champion, the winner will take a lot home of present money and a special pokémon.
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[kennyj92]

This is something serious! AMAZING!! I cant believe how good this looks.
Keep up the great work!

 

[874521]

Amazing tiles! Good job Wesley!

 

[Tropical Sunlight]

I just love the updates!
Every idea is just amazing!
It can not be better, it can only be more perfect!
GL!

 

[Tyrantrum]

Wow, great updates, Wesley! :D
I love the HMs and other moves and their effects outside of battle. :3

One question, what is the girl player riding on the Surf HM?
Anyways, good luck~

 

[Surf]

Spectacular!
Incredible graphics, and having two types of surfing, incredible.
I would be happy to correct your English if you would need me to.
If you want proof, just ask and I'll fix up the post that you just made.

hhaha! I think that would be a good idea accually.
You need someone good with sentence structure and whatnot.
However, think of it this way guys: The more "grammar" add-ons we aim to add, the longer we must wait for the game to be released!! :(
Think: Do we really NEED good grammar that bad to ENJOY the game?
You know we can still understand what the script is saying, it's just mediocre grammar that's all. Just think about it guys...........

I'm quick (if I don't have homework)
I just open up A-map and play through the game until I get to an error then I open up the script in XSE and correct it.
Plus, good grammar could be the key point that gives this hack the push to become HOTY(if it can beat Dusk)(woops).

 

[874521]

Is HM06 Rock Slide or Rock Climb?

 

[Master123]

Alright!!
Wesley, you should send each of us a part of the script. (maybe a city/route per person) In order to get this hack done quicker, we should all edit our part, then send it to Wesley and he'll integrate it into the hack.
Now this may take about a week atleast, but if everyone can do their part we can get this done and we'll be playing a grammatical-error-free hack in no time!!

I'm IN!!!!!!!

LETS DO THIS!!!

 

[Surf]

Alright!!
Wesley, you should send each of us a part of the script. (maybe a city/route per person) In order to get this hack done quicker, we should all edit our part, then send it to Wesley and he'll integrate it into the hack.
Now this may take about a week atleast, but if everyone can do their part we can get this done and we'll be playing a grammatical-error-free hack in no time!!

I'm IN!!!!!!!

LETS DO THIS!!!

Wait,what?
How does that work?

 

[jadengxfan]

Im on 2 but i dont know a lot of brazilian that is the big thing-_-

 

[Sarcastic Prince]

Im on 2 but i dont know a lot of brazilian that is the big thing-_-

Actually, there's no need to know Brazilian.
Why? Because this Hack is in English. (Not Perfect)

 

[jadengxfan]

Ow cool then i'm on if he wanna ^^

 

[SierraTDI]

um frozen darkness is helping with my hack

 

[Hall Of Famer]

The update is spectacular! I like the new features a lot, especially the new fly system.

 

[Master123]

So wesley r u going to just send us text files or something?
Please send them by tomorrow or Friday because my homework load wil be so much smaller.
Send it soon please! I would really like to be part of this grammar team.

Ok people, let's not screw around. We got to work on this as fast as we can so we can play our new awesome hack.

 

[destinedjagold]

The updates are so darn cool, especially the ones showing that the player's flying above the region. ^^
though I was planning on adding the DIG in my hack though, but your's is cooler than my idea. ^^
(I hope you won't think that I stole your DIG idea, since I already got the idea before I even started LoG. :P)

Good luck and keep up the great work! ^^

 

[Xelios]

Oh, really gr8 updates..........
The fly system is spectacular......
oh, and I really love tiles ur using...

 

[Surf]

So wesley r u going to just send us text files or something?
Please send them by tomorrow or Friday because my homework load wil be so much smaller.
Send it soon please! I would really like to be part of this grammar team.

Ok people, let's not screw around. We got to work on this as fast as we can so we can play your new awesome hack.

I marked a word that you spelled wrong, in bold.

He never said that that would happen, and it won't
I'm fixing the English in Light Platinum now.

 

[Master123]

I marked a word that you spelled wrong, in bold.

He never said that that would happen, and it won't
I'm fixing the English in Light Platinum now.

Oh sorry macmini. I just misunderstood. Hahaha! You're probably better at grammar than me anyways. Is it just you doing it? Because we're counting on you Mr. Grammar and English! GL!!

 

[Kryszajtys]

What do you do after you catch Moltres Atricuno and Zapdos? cause i got them adn now im stuck??? help please ;P



Edit: I need Dive where do i get dive!!???

Im using Beta 3