Don't worry not everyone can make a perfect intro, and yours is just fine! Anywho, welcome aboard Pokekid!
So, anything else we'd love to hear about you? There's not much info written out so your interests are a mystery but do tell us what you love so we can recommend stuff for you to check out here, and there's enough variety to even please those non-Pokemon fans. Our adoption center program is one you can get started with, by signing a simple form to have a mentor assigned with you to help show you around the forums.
Just my suggestions for now, but do explore and see what you like. Have a great time with us, and if you ever want to talk just shoot me a visitor message whenever you are interested!