Thergox
Average Hatter
- 105
- Posts
- 11
- Years
- Seen Jul 17, 2014
And they continue to grow more interesting 0-0
The lack of a pattern is really interesting, and gives a certain fluidity often found in fireworks and the likes of such exploding objects. I'm not sure if it was what you were going for, but some streaks (The pink on the left and the blue on the right) kind of go on a tangent from the rest of the exploding colors (Which I very much do like). It kind of does look like a whole galaxy going on behind the character, but perhaps some of the dominating color lines could appear more splattered/swirly/something.
. . . And that was my attempt at critiquing. I hope I helped this time!
The lack of a pattern is really interesting, and gives a certain fluidity often found in fireworks and the likes of such exploding objects. I'm not sure if it was what you were going for, but some streaks (The pink on the left and the blue on the right) kind of go on a tangent from the rest of the exploding colors (Which I very much do like). It kind of does look like a whole galaxy going on behind the character, but perhaps some of the dominating color lines could appear more splattered/swirly/something.
. . . And that was my attempt at critiquing. I hope I helped this time!