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[PKMN FULL] Kanto Adventure [OOC+Registration]

Finally, here it is:

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Finally, here it is:
Okay, so I polished up my post and hopefully fixed up the mistakes. Ended up cutting some of the fat of the Biography that I think is better concise, and I believe I made Alexis clearer. If it needs more editing, let me know.
 
Finally, here it is:

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Your app was fantastic as usual. Since being introduced to your writing style in Holon Rp, I've been looking forward to reading the stuff you type out, trying take some hints from your style and own way of writing. Your excellent flow of words overshadowed your initial story for me; which probably isn't true for everyone else, as I tend to try and take your work apart.

Anyway, without doing that -taking it apart-, your application was a pleasure to read.
 
Gonna post a heavily revised edition of my SU later tonight. The only thing that is remaining the same is the general theme of the character. Gender is changing, appearance is(obviously) changing, and so is personality and history. >.> I have a much better feel for this idea.

part of her history is a bit dark... maybe a little too dark for Pokemon >.>

the trainer- Valor Kästner



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the starter - Wrex, the Aron


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NOTICE: letting everyone know that today is the final day for applicationa to be submitted or revised, I will read them all over tonight at midnight and then have my decisions for final spots posted tomorrow morning in an IC post, ideally
 
It's after midnight my time but I don't know what timezone you're in so I'll post this anyway, just in case.

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Oh yes, sorry I never mentioned this. I'm Pacific Standard Time and at the time I'm writing this it is 10:45 PM. So in a little over an hour sign ups will be closed

NOTICE: All spots have been filled, I have made my decision and the OP has been edited to reflect so. For everyone that didn't make the cut I apologize but it was a plesaure to have you around, I plan on having re-curring characters and minor appearances in which your characters can be used by you. But that won't be until the near future, until then you can keep up and read along if you'd like. I won't be able to post the IC thread up today as I intended so you'll have to be patient for another day until this is possible. Sorry for the inconvenience and I hope those accepted are ready for a journey of their lives.
 
As soon as I had seen Fuyu had posted her app yesterday, I already knew it was over xD 3k posts, and being on this site since 2009, it would be odd for her not to win. The guest star appearances does sound like a neat idea though, and better than the app just getting wasted. Luck to the Rp getting somewhere productive.
 
The IC's accepted? nice, I'm going to go ahead and say I might not get a post in today but expected one tomorrow morning at the latest.
 
Woah! tell me why I never even considered the conductor/proctor being the GYM LEADER Clemont from the series.

Its like a hindsight shock for me, now I'm looking back at my post like I could had done way better with the materials given to me. If only I had put the pieces together... Smh

Was I the only person that didn't notice that? please tell me I won't.
 
Haha I tried to kinda leave it up to you guys to figure it out but maybe it was a bit too obscure. But don't worry he'll be back at least later on so you have a chance to redeem yourself. I changed the chapter theme because I just liked this new one better haha
 
Haha I tried to kinda leave it up to you guys to figure it out but maybe it was a bit too obscure. But don't worry he'll be back at least later on so you have a chance to redeem yourself. I changed the chapter theme because I just liked this new one better haha

I like the new theme better than the old one. It was too lyrickey for me. I personally prefer instrumentals when it comes to posting, it keeps my mind clear.

I get distracted suuuuper easy.
 
Haha I'll keep that in mind for future tracks, I'm planning on editing the OP with a sound track and character profiles. I don't know if any of you recall but once you are accepted you are supposed to reserve a post in the OOC thread for your inventory post which I will link in the character profiles. I will edit one of my last posts to make it an inventory so you can all see the forma and such. I kinda forgot to do this myself haha.
 
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