awesome pictures!!
@@ i'd suggest trying to make the lines a bit smoother because they cut into each other in places
i'd go over the picture in a black sharpie or inkpen (probably a size 0.7 tip)
also, try to colour in the same direction all the time and try to put the same pressure on each colouring stroke (try not to colour hard in some places and lightly in others)
if if you miss a spot, just layer over it with lighter pressure ._.
practise colouring boxes first, and when you're sure of yourself, make the boxes bigger and bigger until you learn to colour evenly :3
i hope you take my suggestions into consideration!!
you have alot of potential :3
i love the way your characters came out!
keep up the awesome work!
~kura