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Ok here's some stuff I've got:
Spoiler:
East of Solaris(?):
Swamp place:
Place north of swamp place:
Also, for the warps between inside forest and not-inside forest, you can extend the path until it reaches the end of the screen (look at how Nintendo does it in Berry Forest).
If I'm being picky, I'd say you have some text to fix, mainly converting Pokemon into Pokémon, as well as knowing when to split textboxes with \p instead of \l (you do a good job of this earlier on). The ! boxes should have sound 0x15 as well.
I also feel that in your flashback scene, you can execute your script when walking through the door, instead of when you interact with the Lunar Wing, unless you plan on including text for both the mother and the professor.
![[PokeCommunity.com] Pokémon Lunar Version (Pre-Alpha version released!) [PokeCommunity.com] Pokémon Lunar Version (Pre-Alpha version released!)](https://i.imgur.com/lUicyMS.png)
Swamp place:
![[PokeCommunity.com] Pokémon Lunar Version (Pre-Alpha version released!) [PokeCommunity.com] Pokémon Lunar Version (Pre-Alpha version released!)](https://i.imgur.com/yDNMZXo.png)
Place north of swamp place:
![[PokeCommunity.com] Pokémon Lunar Version (Pre-Alpha version released!) [PokeCommunity.com] Pokémon Lunar Version (Pre-Alpha version released!)](https://i.imgur.com/zg4t3bF.png)
Also, for the warps between inside forest and not-inside forest, you can extend the path until it reaches the end of the screen (look at how Nintendo does it in Berry Forest).
If I'm being picky, I'd say you have some text to fix, mainly converting Pokemon into Pokémon, as well as knowing when to split textboxes with \p instead of \l (you do a good job of this earlier on). The ! boxes should have sound 0x15 as well.
I also feel that in your flashback scene, you can execute your script when walking through the door, instead of when you interact with the Lunar Wing, unless you plan on including text for both the mother and the professor.