Hmm.. the screens aren't too bad. There were a few spelling mistakes, but this hack now has my attention. I only wonder if you're going to have any other buildings beside those ones.
The mart doesn't look rigth :\ What is that thing in screens 4 and 22?
It was late last night; by spelling mistakes, I mean places where you need spaces.As for Barker's post..I dont find any spelling mistake in the screens.
If there are any spelling mistakes then please pinpoint where.
I dont know.So there are 4 pokemon to choose from?
Or is the pokeball on the far left a fake pokeball?