~? Pok?mon FR/LG: Continued ?~ [PG-13]

[Signomi]

Alright. Sorry for the long wait, but new part done ^^;


Post 1 - Part 30
Post 2 - Part 31
Post 3 - Part 32
Post 4 - Part 33
Post 5 - Part 34
Post 6 - Part 35

A Shine of Tara.

Part 1

 

[Karasuma]

Yes, you updated. Wow, so thats how Tara is huh? And is she gonna have a crush on Conor? Lol

Yep, good entry episode for tara. I think you made one mistake though, in the last panel, you spelled normal wrong: "The state of this grass seems nroaml and vibrant"

 

[Signomi]

Ah. Alright, I'll go ahead and fix that typo. Thanks :)

 

[Karasuma]

But its okay, I just wanna see how Tara is going to make Conor like her..she seems feisty as well.

 

[Esupio]

TARA *runs off with tara overworlds* precious one is mine *cackle*
yeah nice eppy... I wanna be in conors position!

 

[Smarties-chan]

W00T! More eppies =P Don't ask me why I haven't replied in a long time, because I honestly don't know O.o Ooh... Tara fell for Conor instantly =P But Conor will fall for her twin sister's hamster's previous owner. So hah!

 

[Esupio]

W00T! More eppies =P Don't ask me why I haven't replied in a long time, because I honestly don't know O.o Ooh... Tara fell for Conor instantly =P But Conor will fall for her twin sister's hamster's previous owner. So hah!

or conor will fall for her twin sister's hamster.

 

[Aisu K.]

Interesting. ^_^ Tara likes Conor, eh? This will be a good one, I'm sure of it.

 

[Signomi]

What the- Hamster? XD

Yeah. Tara falls for Conor at first sight. Though what shall happen to Blue and Green in the Pokemon Center? What could be the possibilities?

 

[Jaybob]

ok... I cant see anything from 31 to 35..... Tara has an attitude on her doesn't she

 

[Roy-Kun]

Hmm... Tara shows interest in Connor, x3

Hehe, i wonder what do you exactly mean with the Pok?mon Center thing Siggy =P

 

[Frostfur]

NOO0O0O0O OMG MY CONOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *stabs tara* I HATE HER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! rawr.

 

[Shijuukara]

Very good update Siggy. May I claim Tara?

EDIT:
Anyways I never knew Tara and Connor would make a good couple. But even though they don't get together I like them being together so......

 

[Frostfur]

nonoononoono EARASE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG *bawls* no they dont make a good couple *stabs tara again*

 

[Supreme Edgeboy Max]

Hm..

TOO MUCH TALKING, and not much action. A first episode of a season should have some action, but well .. this one pretty much bored me in a way. v_v You better have something funny, warm and fuzzy next episode.

^_~ Other than that, nice one. Mwar .. I think this should be enough for you, I think you know why you got this bad review. *runs away laughing like a maniac*

 

[Signomi]

Well, I never planned for much action in this part. Mainly the talking, But anyways, I'll make sure to tone it down next part. :)

-bursts out laughing- Nice Sig combo XiaolinDragon, but I'm not sure either Esupio or whitewolf might like it themselves :P

 

[Smarties-chan]

Very good update Siggy. May I claim Tara?

EDIT:
Anyways I never knew Tara and Connor would make a good couple. But even though they don't get together I like them being together so......

Esupio sono Kamereon will so kill you for that =P

Anyway... how's the next part coming along?

 

[Signomi]

Yeah...and Conor's name is spelt with one N. But no matter :P

I shall be working on the next part when I get the time, but for now, since a new page has started for most, I'll post the new part again.



Post 1 - Part 30
Post 2 - Part 31
Post 3 - Part 32
Post 4 - Part 33
Post 5 - Part 34
Post 6 - Part 35

A Shine of Tara.

Part 1

 

[Supreme Edgeboy Max]

Oh yesh. We need explosive fun things to um .. laugh at .. your story's gotten serious Signomi.

 

[Esupio]

Esupio sono Kamereon will so kill you for that =P

Anyway... how's the next part coming along?

got that right.
Tara's mine so no touchies *draws katana* heheheh

I'm going with my hamster theory. or tara is a guinea pig in disguise or something

nonoononoono EARASE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG *bawls* no they dont make a good couple *stabs tara again*

AHHHHHHHHHHH DIE DIE DIE *STABS WHITEWOLF* ye don't touch the precious *hiss*