I simply Love this hack, i like the sprites and the dialogue "standing at prof. elm's lab window: Yeah, how cliche would that be" I simply rofled, i also like the "jump fence" thing, all those little details is what makes it great
Then again, i don't like the random people you meet, who battle you for no particular reason..
also, in the beginning, don't make battles between towns so frequent, i know some are optional, but still, battling 2 required trainers, the bullies and then 2 rivals(?) is just a bit too much for me :P
oh and the beginning was kinda weird "today is when masked man's injury acts up" how would she know that??
"lets take this rainbow and silver wing as a memento" as they randomly stop while being chased.
"So thats what happend" Said silver to lance, and idk how and why lance got there.
the beginning is critical, make it smooth!
I wish you a ton of luck!!