It's
"what's", not "whats".
It's
"superb", not "supurb".
The word "lunch" shouldn't start with a capital letter.
The text went out of the box.
When I catch a PKMN, the Pokédex's background glitches up.
It's
"received", not "recieved".
Picknicker is spelt wrong.
There's no need to add a " ' " after ya.
"As well" are two seperate words.
There's no need to need add a " ' " after gonna.
Also,
"interest" is spelt wrong.
"Interesting" is spelt wrong.
"Interest" is spelt wrong.
The word
"civilian" only has one "l".
There's no need to add a " ' " after kinda.
"Received" is spelt wrong.
You should add a period after "Frickle Forest".
There's no need to add "the" in front of the name "CJ".
Also, since CJ is a youngster, he should have a youngster backsprite.
"Sun" should be decapitalized.
"Dilemma" and
"interesting" are both spelt wrong.
It should be "
it's" instead of its.
After "Huh?" The "t" in "that" should be capitalized.