FireRed hack: Pokemon Starlight

[DuoRyan]

I like the storyline but, in the first screen, there's a pixel error at the down left corner, maybe a flying Jiriachi would be better, and a title to this Rom hack will make it more interesting :D

I know i try to fix it for now I am doing the title

 

[Sarcastic Prince]

Okay. Your titlescreen is pretty good.
Before the beta is released, you should
send me a copy of your Beta so that I could
correct it.
Any glitches I've found will be fixed
automactically if I can fix it.
If not, I give you screens of it.

 

[DuoRyan]

Okay. Your titlescreen is pretty good.
Before the beta is released, you should
send me a copy of your Beta so that I could
correct it.
Any glitches I've found will be fixed
automactically if I can fix it.
If not, I give you screens of it.

Thank
and i will send you it when i release beta 1 and
i would love screen shot

 

[.YAS.]

I could make a banner, or perhaps more than 1 if you'd like. :classic:

 

[DuoRyan]

I could make a banner, or perhaps more than 1 if you'd like. :classic:

Yes please
Just pm or vm me when the banner done !

 

[.YAS.]

I made two banners! :D
Don't know if the last ones turned out that good, but here they are:
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EDIT: Here's another one View attachment 52751

Sorry if don't like the styles I used for the banners, I was just trying to be creative!^^
So, if you want some banners with the "usual" style (you know, like most banners have), then tell me!

~.YAS.~

 

[DuoRyan]

I made two banners! :D
Don't know if the last ones turned out that good, but here they are:
View attachment 52737View attachment 52739View attachment 52751

Sorry if don't like the styles I used for the banners, I was just trying to be creative!^^
So, if you want some banners with the "usual" style (you know, like most banners have), then tell me!

~.YAS.~

They look good and I like the creativity,Thank

 

[.YAS.]

They look good and I like the creativity,Thank

No problem
I've edited them, so now they're looking a bit more Horizon Seaier Well that's my opinion anyway
View attachment 52767View attachment 52771View attachment 52782

 

[DuoRyan]

Update:
New screen
included
next town
rival battle

Yeah that all for now next time i will show new battle background and much more like a sewar area only accessible after meeting the first gym leader

update new title screen

better titlescreen =

 

[uigfnbxs]

sounds good , write when it,s going to be ready. but you need to fix the grammer

 

[DuoRyan]

I now need a Overworld spriter ! If you good at it pm or vm with proof of work and we discuss the overworld

Edit:
new beta 1 screen still in progress

all tile you see here are wesly fg credit to him

 

[DuoRyan]

sorry for no update to busy be back next monday

 

[PeregrineFig]

I have a suggestion, when using step-tile scripts that involve a character talking, before the msgbox use textcolor 0x0 if the character is a male and textcolor 0x1 if they're a female. That way the character won't be speaking in black text. Also, your grammar could use quite a bit of work. You do seem to be a decent scripter and mapper, however, and the story isn't that bad either.

 

[558122_DG]

Nice updates and whatever but just one thing :P

Is that someone's OW there randomly?

 

[DuoRyan]

Nice updates and whatever but just one thing :P

Is that someone's OW there randomly?

oh my bad i fix that sorry

 

[DuoRyan]

I have a suggestion, when using step-tile scripts that involve a character talking, before the msgbox use textcolor 0x0 if the character is a male and textcolor 0x1 if they're a female. That way the character won't be speaking in black text. Also, your grammar could use quite a bit of work. You do seem to be a decent scripter and mapper, however, and the story isn't that bad either.

thank,I do that before beta 1

new tile

credit to zein

 

[DuoRyan]

I have decided to make the main legendary ho oh because it was originally my idea
and so i will change the story line

 

[DuoRyan]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b4b2_VGNimQ
here a video guy lol
and the new starter that replace seedot and poliwag
is budew and azurill

 

[Mana1]

@DuoRyan

Seems to be an error in the text/script where the rival says:

"'See you later'

Also the door of the Pokémon Center door looks bad with that black outline so would be good to fix/change that :)

 

[Sarcastic Prince]

It's a nice script, but...
there are some errors.
I'll list 'em out one by one.
1. Grammar errors. I can help you fix 'em.

2. The Oak text is still there.
Either change it to "Rival:", or remove it.

3. When your Rival is defeated, the text is
still the same. You have to change it, this Hack
is not Fire Red.

That's all. Apart from that, it's a pretty nice video.