FireRed hack: Pokemon Starlight

[DuoRyan]

It's a nice script, but...
there are some errors.
I'll list 'em out one by one.
1. Grammar errors. I can help you fix 'em.

2. The Oak text is still there.
Either change it to "Rival:", or remove it.

3. When your Rival is defeated, the text is
still the same. You have to change it, this Hack
is not Fire Red.

That's all. Apart from that, it's a pretty nice video.

Ok I make sure I fix that,and I already did.

 

[DuoRyan]

new screen beta 1 will be release in the next 2 week april 23 [maybe] if not may 10 0r something

also credit to fanking omega for tile

 

[giradialkia]

MY CRITIQUE​

Lol, only joking. Anyway...
The starters, they're a bit odd. You may as well switch Starly with a fire type, it'll be a proper type-triangle then.
(By the way, you may also want to change Azurill's type to Water, as it's actually a Normal type- although that doesn't really matter, as it evolves into a Water type, so it's your call).
Next, your scripts. Not the scripts themselves, but the text in them- you seem to do
this
alot, which looks
pretty bad, and gets
annoying after a
while. Ease up on that, is my advice.
Next is that grass tile (not the Wild Pokemon one, the normal land/grass tile that you inserted). It looks a bit "hairy" to me. I know that Fire Red has multiple land tiles, which get's really confusing and awkward, so replacing them with just one is a fine idea, but try a more plain one- you could even use the RSE one.
And... That Murkrow sprite is a bit low- use Wichu's "Advance Sprite Position Editor" to raise it up- it can be found in the Toolbox, or search Wichu, and there should be a link in his signature.
OK, that's it. Sorry if it seems I'm criticising literally everything, I don't mean to do that. Keep up the good work :)

 

[DuoRyan]

MY CRITIQUE​

Lol, only joking. Anyway...
The starters, they're a bit odd. You may as well switch Starly with a fire type, it'll be a proper type-triangle then.
(By the way, you may also want to change Azurill's type to Water, as it's actually a Normal type- although that doesn't really matter, as it evolves into a Water type, so it's your call).
Next, your scripts. Not the scripts themselves, but the text in them- you seem to do
this
alot, which looks
pretty bad, and gets
annoying after a
while. Ease up on that, is my advice.
Next is that grass tile (not the Wild Pokemon one, the normal land/grass tile that you inserted). It looks a bit "hairy" to me. I know that Fire Red has multiple land tiles, which get's really confusing and awkward, so replacing them with just one is a fine idea, but try a more plain one- you could even use the RSE one.
And... That Murkrow sprite is a bit low- use Wichu's "Advance Sprite Position Editor" to raise it up- it can be found in the Toolbox, or search Wichu, and there should be a link in his signature.
OK, that's it. Sorry if it seems I'm criticising literally everything, I don't mean to do that. Keep up the good work :)

Ok i sure do that yeah i know my grammar is bad and the reason why starly is a starter is because the only fire type with 2 stage evolution are cyndaquil,chimchar and charmander and yeah
I will fix script and other minor stuff thank for the criticism

 

[DuoRyan]

had remap map so beta 1 will be coming a liitle bit late [been busy ,test etc]

 

[luan13]

I liked the idea and the tiles and the colors are amazing

 

[DuoRyan]

well I been busy so update will go slow, sorry!

 

[DuoRyan]

sorry for no update at this time I have Region and so I did n;t update at all ,also hope you like the new tile
credit to WeslyFg

 

[DuoRyan]

update
I am actually ready to release beta 1 in a week

 

[DuoRyan]

sorry guy but my computer screw up and in result I must restart

 

[Resultz]

Nice tilesets. Haha, I see you use Windows 7, too, huh? ;p

You can take normal-sized VBA screenshots more easily than pressing PrntScrn. Just go to File > Screen Capture on VBA's menu. Then you can save the screenshot as a .bmp or .png.

And the one thing that seems amiss is that there's no explanation behind why Lugia has a Steel Form. Did someone do something to it?

Or Alt-Prtscrn?
Either Way this hack is looking Promising, Although i really want to see some of the FAkemon

 

[DuoRyan]

Can someone sprite and insert fakemon for me please and i mean professional type. show proof by pm\vming ok.

Edit:
new tile

Edit2:

credit to weslyfg
875421 and zeikaro from deviantart

 

[Sarcastic Prince]

Can someone sprite and insert fakemon for me please and i mean professional type. show proof by pm\vming ok.

Edit2:

Nice updates.
By the way, I can help you OW Sprite, if that's what you want.
I only need the 1st frame, and then I can do everything else.

 

[DuoRyan]

Nice updates.
By the way, I can help you OW Sprite, if that's what you want.
I only need the 1st frame, and then I can do everything else.

that will be good too
i needed a new hero sprite ok i send the first frame.

Major Update

The intro for getting the running shoe.

Rival talk to you when you get out of your house.

New house tile and people to talk to.

More communication.

Professor Luke [sprite will change]

Temporary Starter until I get a good spriter.

 

[Sarcastic Prince]

Ryan, you don't need a good spriter to change the Starters.
You're keeping the original Pokemon, right? Then be it.
Anyways, I think you should make a new event of obainting the Starter,
'cause I hate it when you pick your Pokemon in an old fansioned and boring way.
That would be pathectic.

Do you happen to need OWs for the Rival and Prof. aswell?
Well, same as before, send the 1st Frame in .bmp format.

 

[DuoRyan]

Ryan, you don't need a good spriter to change the Starters.
You're keeping the original Pokemon, right? Then be it.
Anyways, I think you should make a new event of obainting the Starter,
'cause I hate it when you pick your Pokemon in an old fansioned and boring way.
That would be pathectic.

Do you happen to need OWs for the Rival and Prof. aswell?
Well, same as before, send the 1st Frame in .bmp format.

I try to do a new script just give some time as i don't have the time to send you the first frames

 

[Sarcastic Prince]

I try to do a new script just give some time as i don't have the time to send you the first frames

OK. I'll be waiting for your frames, then.

 

[DuoRyan]

Update:
Progress is going well for me I insert new tile and did new script I truly am getting excited.
so tomorrow new image.

 

[Lord Varion]

Update:
Progress is going well for me I insert new tile and did new script I truly am getting excited.
so tomorrow new image.

Wow can't wait

This is my first time seeing this hack
I liek the story
The tiles
Its all amazing
Can't wait for betas

 

[DuoRyan]

new script also i staying with old fashion sorry sacrastic prince
but I put the real Pokemon sprite not Pokeball
also new city LUNAR CITY

Yup Team Rocket just took over a beautiful City and what this Ruby what he doing here?Rival or Championl