I don't know about any singular post, but I do love Eddie from Unific (yes I do want to continue writing him at some point gp) and I think I peaked with him tbh lmao - I reread them today and a lot of his posts still make me smile and be like "damn I was actually funny and good at writing"
I incorporated his personality into the narration a lot better than I have been doing lately (or maybe he just has a bigger personality overall) and spent a lot more time describing visuals from his eyes in a really fun way, while still having the posts be tightly written with no unnecessary bulk padding it out, so it's nice to be reminded of that and that I am capable of that, so I can keep it in mind instead of overly relying on dialogue or their inner thoughts to get my characters' personalities across. His Pokemon were also chaotic and stupid and cute
and I am totally not biased because Theodore is a Rowlet
I think part of Eddie's charm was that he was incredibly not slick but he thought he was, which is far more entertaining than someone like Marcella who just kind of is what Eddie wants to be in some ways, and I had a much easier time making a fool out of him. Which is not a necessity, but that did make me laugh.
But yeah, looking back, my writing is definitely sloppier now, though it's good I revisited this because even if I'm not writing the same kind of character, I'm reminded of a lot of things, like trying to keep every part of the post entertaining - I can tell that I injected his personality and humor even into transition scenes or paragraphs, it wasn't just "Eddie went here and
then he did this funny/interesting thing", so I'll keep that in mind going forward and also try to keep up the same energy when I pick up his story again.
Not to be too pleased with myself but I did smile the whole time I reread his journey, which is rare since I usually just cringe when I go back and read my older posts, so it was hard pulling out what I think was the best
Good NPCs that didn't just fulfill a purpose for the main character, but are likeable in their own right!
https://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?p=10117213#post10117213
https://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?p=10117722#post10117722
I hate writing battles, but I can actually read these!
https://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?p=10119306#post10119306
https://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?p=10120280#post10120280
Cute fluff!
https://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?p=10120493#post10120493