Beautiful colouring, liking the opacity up top. But the top line of text seems unbalnced to me- perhaps if you put g&p in the middle? Or shortened Other Trivia to "OT" and stick it on the far right? And the tildes (~) as much as I tend to use them... I don't like them here. I feel using a hyphen all around would look sharper and go with the image better. 8/10