Rate these Fakemon sprites, eh?

[Pekin]

Right, so I've been working on a hack for several months now, and I've made about a hundred Fakemon. Some of them are pretty decent, imo, and some of them are just horrible. Anyway, here are some of them:

Unino, the Spirit Pokémon
Evolves into Kiniba starting at level 36.
Type: Ghost

Kiniba, the Spirit Pokémon
Type: Ghost/Flying

Noctic, the Bomb Pokémon
Evolves into Corunt via happiness during the night.
Type: Electric

Corunt, the Explosion Pokémon
Evolves into Curroctum when traded, while holding Blackglasses.
Type: Electric/Dark

Curroctum, the Nuclear Pokémon
Type: Electric/Dark

Onarun, the Sunlight Pokémon
Evolves into Synthago when exposed to a Leaf Stone.
Type: Grass

Synthago, the Herbivore Pokémon
Type: Grass/Dragon

I could really use some feedback on some of these.

 

[NatureKeeper]

My ratings

Unino, the Spirit Pokémon
Evolves into Kiniba starting at level 36.
Type: Ghost

He looks nice, but why not make some more pattern? 8\10

Kiniba, the Spirit Pokémon
Type: Ghost/Flying

Sorry, The front frame is kinda missing texture in the white colour, but I like the backsprite :). I'll maybe take permission to use him and his pre-evo. 9.5\10

Noctic, the Bomb Pokémon
Evolves into Corunt via happiness during the night.
Type: Electric

Wow, this Pokémon should be fine with Smokescreen or Selfdestruct. How about a lightning pattern on that? 9\10

Corunt, the Explosion Pokémon
Evolves into Curroctum when traded, while holding Blackglasses.
Type: Electric/Dark

I do not like the mouth, to be honest. Need's to be bending and not a straight line. Make the eyes frown and get that tooth outtadaway+ Lightining pattern and It'd be perfect. 7\10

Curroctum, the Nuclear Pokémon
Type: Electric/Dark

I seriously only want him giving an evil smile and It eyes flashing at the player. It'd be perfect, then. 9\10

Onarun, the Sunlight Pokémon
Evolves into Synthago when exposed to a Leaf Stone.
Type: Grass

Nice but make there be more space for the mouth. 9.75\10

Synthago, the Herbivore Pokémon
Type: Grass/Dragon

1 comment: Put-a-leaf. 9.99\10

 

[= GPR =]

Right, so I've been working on a hack for several months now, and I've made about a hundred Fakemon. Some of them are pretty decent, imo, and some of them are just horrible. Anyway, here are some of them:

Unino, the Spirit Pokémon
Evolves into Kiniba starting at level 36.
Type: Ghost
I actually have to say that simple is sometimes better... and this one looks great! at a surface view, the shading and outlining looks great... the only thing i personally don't care for is the far left little flap...

Kiniba, the Spirit Pokémon
Type: Ghost/Flying
the outlining on the head looks a bit funny here... it would be the lighter tone, but more in circumference... again, the shading looks nice, from a surface view...

Noctic, the Bomb Pokémon
Evolves into Corunt via happiness during the night.
Type: Electric
don't like the shading on this one, it's choppy and inconsistant... it needs to be rounder...

Corunt, the Explosion Pokémon
Evolves into Curroctum when traded, while holding Blackglasses.
Type: Electric/Dark
shading looks much better here...but my issue with this one is the actual design... it's just a bit ugly... the eyes are very awkward looking... and the tip with the fuse looks strange... but the actual fuse looks nice...

Curroctum, the Nuclear Pokémon
Type: Electric/Dark
this one i like alot, the shading is nicely done...although maybe you could have use a bit more of the light tone a bit more down... but that's entirely artist's choice... the outlining, at surface view looks nice as well... very well rounded design, i like it!

Onarun, the Sunlight Pokémon
Evolves into Synthago when exposed to a Leaf Stone.
Type: Grass
to be honest... i don't like this one... it looks a lot like bulbasaur... but that's besides the point... the shading isn't your greatest... especiallly under the little lapels... it would be darker, not lighter... not to mention the rear, far back leg looks awkward... it's wedged in there... all the legs have a strange pointy look, and the front ones connect in a strange manner...you need to add joints, and some shading to signify the legs connections...

Synthago, the Herbivore Pokémon
Type: Grass/Dragon
this one i like a lot! the anatomy is cutish...and the coloration is nicely done... even though the spot on his foot is a bit strange looking... but again, that's all the artist's preference...

anyhow, the shading looks great from surface view... although maybe it could use a bit more by (his) left foot, where it connects to the leg...


I could really use some feedback on some of these.

These are very nicely done, and i can see that you put a lot of time and effort into them! Great job! Keep up the great work, take my crit sparingly, and most importantly...

(Keep Spriting!>

 

[Noel]

They all look sweet imo especially the GHOST ones :D Keep it up.

 

[Pekin]

Thanks a lot for all the feedback, that was useful - I may upload some of my other sprites later, when I'm done editing some of these.

 

[RapboY]

UNINO

- He looks quite cute actually. The simple design works here.

KINIBA

- I don't like this one quite as much. The hands are cute, but I think he needs to be a little less cute cuz he's evolved. The wings look nice. One thing I noticed is that his body in the front sprite looks flat, i think you should move the line (his back) a little bit more to the right.

NOCTIC

- It's cute but I think it's a little too simple. How about you add a small burning rope around the top of his head or something?

CORUNT

- The eyes look weird, that's for sure. And the backsprite doesnt have the yellow spark things he has on the front sprite. And what's that on his mouth? A tongue? Tooth? Overall it looks nice, but could use some work.

CORRUCTUM

- Now this one looks badass. I like the way you highlighted him, he looks like he's about to explode lol. What I would suggest though is that you try and make his eyes and mouth better. And try to give him a better, more dynamic pose. This one is really cool.

ONARUN

- He looks a lot like bulbasaur lol. How about completely getting rid of that bulb on his back? And maybe give him a tail, because his evolution has one. And spots too.

SYTHAGO

- I'm really sorry to say this, but he looks Barney-ish. And no, that's not a compliment. Maybe you should try to put wings on him? Especially if you're gonna keep that bulb thing on ONARUN.

Overall 8/10

- The shading could use some work, maybe a little bit of dithering could help. I like the typing combos you made though, very nice, especially the Electric/Dark, CORRUCTUM is really cool lol. Anyways, hope my comments helped. Good luck with the fakemon. :D

EDIT: Looks like i'm the only one who doesnt like SYNTHAGO lol.

 

[Pekin]

Haha, you're actually right, Synthago does look like Barney, now that you mention it xD
I'm working on a cooler pose for Curroctum right now - It looks like people like him way more than I expected, so I figured I'd try and make him look a little more badass, haha. When I'm done, I'll correct the shading on Kiniba's front sprite and Noctic's back sprite. And I may give Onarun the complete makeover, and maybe even give him a new name - I'm not too proud of him, to be honest, but personally, I like his evolution.

 

[fwice]

i tried but i couldnt ever successfully make a fakemon =[ a tutorial would help (everytime i try it looks like a box or a blob or something stupid)

 

[Logan]

Spoiler:

Right, so I've been working on a hack for several months now, and I've made about a hundred Fakemon. Some of them are pretty decent, imo, and some of them are just horrible. Anyway, here are some of them:

Unino, the Spirit Pokémon
Evolves into Kiniba starting at level 36.
Type: Ghost

Aw, this little guy is quite cute. The backsprite is nice and organized, the shading on it is very nice. But you might want to make some of the outline a bit lighter, some of the darker of the sprite colours maybe? Now the front sprite, once again it is very nicely shaded. But, the line art again needs work, with it needed some other colours that aren't black. Also, I will not say more than wth is up with the eyes?

Kiniba, the Spirit Pokémon
Type: Ghost/Flying

Aw, this little guy is really awesome cute. Front sprite, now, I previously said you nailed the shading, but on this one their is a bit of a misuse here. There is a next to nothing on the shading on the head parts. The lower body shadin is done well though. The lower curve on the body is a little bit too scratchy and doesn't look well done at all. Now, the back sprite actually is pretty perfect in my opinion. But, seriously, what is up above the right wing? Were you meant to put in a eye or something? Because something is definitly missing.

Noctic, the Bomb Pokémon
Evolves into Corunt via happiness during the night.
Type: Electric

Um.. Seriously? This guy is oh so weird. The shadin is again well done, but there really isn't much to say on this one. It's just maybe make it bigger and improve it a little? Maybe make it a little less darker because it seems I can hardly decipher what is going on here.

Corunt, the Explosion Pokémon
Evolves into Curroctum when traded, while holding Blackglasses.
Type: Electric/Dark

I guess this is the evo? Well, again it is okay. The front sprite is very weird the front is an okay shape. But, the shading is very nice. But, the eyes are again one of the flaws on all your sprites. The mouth, is it a mouth? Is off and very weird. This little electricty coming from it looks pretty much drawn, it can definitly be improved. The sprite is very nice and very well shaded, but what is going on at the bottom? It had electricty on the front but now it is just blank.

Curroctum, the Nuclear Pokémon
Type: Electric/Dark

Is this the third evo? Because this line intrigues me in it's evolution processes etc. Now the back sprite is really very nice. It's almost perfect except for a few flaws, such as the arms are a little bit too scratchy and weird. The front sprite is very pretty too, once again the eyes let you down as they aren't well done and they look very weird. The arms again are something that let's you down they are way too scratchy. The mouth is just a straight line, why? Not a piece of good shading on the bottom of the body either. The points at the bottom are not well done either.

Onarun, the Sunlight Pokémon
Evolves into Synthago when exposed to a Leaf Stone.
Type: Grass

Well, this guy is just really weird xD. The tip of the sprite on both front and back looks weird. Have scratched it? You should observe it a bit more and re-do it. The shading on the front sprite is really poor and again the eyes are really letting you down, again. The legs/arms/whatever are really weird and all look like they're connected.

Synthago, the Herbivore Pokémon
Type: Grass/Dragon

Seriously, I actually love this one and I think it's been done really well. Only a few things I don't like. The head on both sprites is the little to curved at the top to be honest. And once again it's the eyes that let you down :(. You need to have a bit of shading.

I could really use some feedback on some of these.

Review in italic's kthnxbai :P Hope it all helps!

 

[Nyu~♥!]

I think your spriting is okay.

The second one... When something is black, even though it is pitch-black, it's best for it to be a dark gray color so that a little bit of shading is visible. 3/5

And I think the last one is good, but it might need a little bit more of proportionalism(is that a word..?) XD 4/5

 

[Mr.Silver]

Pretty good a bit simple but good all the same

 

[GameFreak Executive]

I like them all very well, but as some have said, Onarun could use some work, not too fond of it.

I think you did best on Corructum.

 

[Steveice10]

May I use Onarun and it's evolution in a hack?

 

[amylisagirl]

They are all amazing! You are really good! Maybe you could talk to Nintendo with some of your ideas.

 

[pikachux2]

some of them arent detailed enough in my prespective

 

[Esper]

This thread's been revived after laying inactive for over a month so *closing*