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@Dr. Octogonapus posts
First of all, I like the visual style of the game (although I may be a bit biased since you posted stuff with rather cool looking water and I just like water in games for some reason XD). The character Rein looks pretty cool, and I like that the first pic with the mystery guy has a guy with his face covered instead of being inconsistent and having no Portrait for him while having ones for others like Rein. I also like that your using Portraits for the characters, it's small but I always like the idea of portraits like that.
The only other thing is as mentioned, the name box should be a little more to the left (I would say try and match the red corner thing on the name box to the one on the dialogue box, try and make it blend well if you know what I mean?)
I haven't seen if you have posted a thread about the game or not but I may have a quick lookie when I get time for one.
Anyway, sorry for the kinda long postish post but just trying to give you some detailed feedback :)
Many thanks for that feedback too.
Cilerba fixed the script for me, so, many thanks go to him. Here is another example of the edited script, but, the dialog box has been moved up to the top of the screen in actually gameplay as not to block the player's field of vision. Does this look any better?
![[PokeCommunity.com] Screenshot/Music Showcase [PokeCommunity.com] Screenshot/Music Showcase](https://i763.photobucket.com/albums/xx277/BakaBakaKitsune/Maxxy.png)