Okay well, I think I've fixed up the most of the problems faced in chapitre duex, and chapitre trois is very overdue (should've been posted thursday).
The Final Turn
"I don't expect anything less that your hardest Chris. But sometimes, some ones hardest just isn't good enough. For now, I'll have my Scyther finish this turn off with a swords dance," Nick said.
The Scyther raised its arms and blades and closed its eyes. Its entire body began to glow and a green aura was emitting off of the grasshopper-like creature.
"Good job Nick. You also Chris. For a two on four battle, you're doing an incredible job! Anyway, this is the final turn so
Apresúrese*," Mr. Fisher explained to the boys.
"Right, now Raticate, come out come out wherever you are!" Chris said again with the same evil voice that had come upon his near the middle of the battle.
But this time, Nick was more prepared for whatever cards were dealt to him. He now had the emotional stability that he lacked the last time this happened and he realized he needed to take this like a man should. The Raticate, still underground, scrambled rapidly. Eventually, the Rat-pokemon jumped out from the ground and landed straight onto Bagon. The small dragon was severely hurt, but not as hurt it would've been if the attack had gone the way it had previously gone. Nick couldn't help this time but lower his head in shame. After a few seconds, he picked his head up and smiled a devilish smile. He knew that this battle was his.
"Alright Bagon, we need to do this to win. Use double-edge!" Nick commanded.
Bagon shifted its weight to its head and charged towards the rat. It hit him, in a not-so-soft spot, for it appeared that it didn't affect the rat as much as it did the dragon. Bagon was at such a loss at energy, it literally fainted right there on the spot, completely knocked out.
"Bagon, I must say, for such a small creature, you put up a mighty fight. Don't worry, this battle is ours for sure," Nick promised.
Nick had but one move left until the battle would be over. Chris had been through so much, and Nick wanted to forfeit and give Chris the battle, but he knew that he couldn't do that. He needed to make this team.
"Scyther, use slash," Nick said.
The pokemon raised its arm and flew towards the Raticate and full speed, slashing it right across its face. It wouldn't shatter the pokemon that easily, but it would shatter both of their chances of making the team. Nick had used his last move and the five turn battle was over. Both of them would be cut from the team.
"Boys, I'm sorry but, you didn't finish in the five expected turns. You both have to leave," Mr. Fisher explained with a melancholy tone.
Nick held his head in shame of not making the team for about three seconds until he heard a familiar voice from the crowd.
"Wait!" exclaimed a voice in the crowd
Nick and Chris both looked to see who said it. When they looked, they found that it had been said by their friend, Jimmy.
"These two boys have battled their hearts out this entire battle. If they are not granted one more turn then, how do you expect to win anything? Real battles in this league never last five turns. Give them what they deserve, one more turn," Jimmy lectured.
Suddenly, after that speech others from the crowd began to all say "yeahs" and "give 'em one more turn."
"Jimmy, the only way I can allow that, is if I cut somebody here. I have to make a certain number of cuts, in a certain amount of time. I need to make sure everyone makes their bus, so unless someone would like to speak up, it's over for you two," Mr. Dagger explained.
It all went silent for what seemed like ten hours to Nick.
"Nobody?" Mr. Fields questioned. "Nobody wants to take the cut?"
"Okay then, Chris and Nick, I hate to say this but-" Mr. Dagger started.
"Wait. I'll take it," somebody said.
Again, surprised by a familiar voice, Chris and Nick turned around to see who said it. When they turned to the voice, it was somebody in the middle of their battle, none other than Connor.
"Connor, are you sure you want to do this?" Mr. Fisher questioned.
"Positive, I didn't even want to do this in the first place," Connor said.
"Alright then Connor, it kills me to say this because you would've survived first cuts, but you have been cut," Mr. Dagger said.
"Thanks Connor, we'll be sure to finish this battle," Chris explained.
"Connor, I-I-I, thanks. This really means a lot to me," Nick said.
Nick smiled a little bit and a small tear formed in his eye, but it didn't come out. Nick just wiped it away and raised his head. Nick put a smirk on himself.
"Chris, I've been granted so many chances in this battle, I will not let this one go to waste. Prepare to lose," Nick said.
"Alright, because Connor eliminated himself, I will give you two more turns," Mr. Fisher explained while holding up two fingers which made as peace sign in Nick's head.
"Alright Raticate, we must be blessed to get this second chance. I don't want any turns to go to waste, now let's use a super fang!" Chris commanded.
Raticate swiveled from side to side trying to confuse the Scyther about which way it was going to attack. After about ten seconds of swiveling, the Raticate gained enough speed and power and started to charge right towards Scyther, while still swiveling. At this point both Scyther and Nick were confused. Even Chris had a dazed look on his face. The mighty Raticate approached Scyther and bit its left leg. A screech could be heard from the grasshopper pokemon and it fell to the floor, cringing in pain.
"Scyther!" Nick cried out. "Come on Scyther, you can do it, please Scyther, please..."
A tear rolled down Nick's face. He thought he could be prepared this time for another emotional attack like this, but in his heart he knew he wasn't. He needed to make this team. But then he realized that it wasn't not making the team that he was upset about, it was his injured Scyther he was worried about. His brave Scyther, his most trusted and powerful pokemon, had fallen in defeat.
'All my chances, all of my hard work, was for nothing,' Nick thought.
"Nick, look," Chris said.
Nick raised his head slightly so he could see the battlefield. He saw the same sight he had seen before. He looked a lot more closely and he saw his Scyther's eyes. He saw that one of them was opened.
"Scyther?" Nick questioned. "Scyther a-are you alright?"
The second eyelid opened.
"I-I-I think he's okay guys," Nick said.
Scyther put it's blades on the floor and used them to lift itself up. Its knees were a little wobbly from the previous attack, but it was still standing.
"Scyther, are you sure you can do this?"
"Scythe, Scyther Scy Scy, Scyther," it said.
"Okay then buddy. Let's win this battle," Nick said with a smile on his face. "Use false swipe!" Nick commanded sounding sterner.
Scyther raised its arms and prepared to take off when it fell to the floor, its knees were still a little too wobbly.
"Well, it seems like that's not going to work. Let's use swords dance instead," Nick called out.
The Scyther started emanating a green aura from its body. It raised its arms and they formed into the shape of a sword, but not short after returned to their normal shape. The green aura disappeared only to have a red aura and an orange aura start emanating.
"Good job Nick, this battle is definitely going to be a close one," Chris said.
'Now let's see, I can't use super of hyper fang again, he's probably figured out the strategy by now. I can't use dig because I don't enough turns for that. There's only one last thing I can do,'
Chris yelled out a few commands to his Raticate. Raticate looked at him for a few seconds, almost stunned at the command. Raticate had never used this move before and honestly, it thought the move was frivolous. Though it digressed, it needed to use the move. Raticate started moving extremely rapidly. It was traveling around the Scyther in a big circle. It was making the Scyther dizzy and it fell down. That was Raticate's chance and Nick knew, that if this was the move he thought it was, the battle would be over. The Raticate stopped spinning for about a tenth of a second and rammed into the Scyther. It didn't effect it much though. It was only, a mere quick attack. Nick thought for sure it was hyper fang.
The audience went quiet for a bit. Chris knew exactly what he had done. He had promised Pidgeotto that he would win this battle for her, but he neglected that promise, and decided to put his friendship in front of all that. Chris knew this team meant a lot more to Nick then it did to himself. He decided to give it to him, and keep the friendship with that.
Nick drew a blank for a few seconds, lost for words. All he could do was stutter meaningless blabber. A few laughs were heard from the audience, and that was the first sound from them in a while. Nick couldn't even command his Scyther to attack, but Scyther knew what he was supposed to do. It slashed Raticate. A mark was left on Raticate's face, and it fell to the ground. Chris just smiled and held out his pokeball. A red light appeared and sucked in the unconscious Raticate. The battle had ended, and Nick had come out victoriously. Nick realized what Chris did.
"Chris, I-I, thank-" Nick blabbered.
"Save it, I know," Chris said. He seemed happy and tried to put on a smile, but Nick knew he was still crushed. He couldn't help but feel guilty and responsible.
'I needed to win this battle. I needed to win this battle.' Those words kept repeating over and over to make himself feel less responsible, but it didn't. He had just beaten his best friend and he knew they would never be as close as they used to.
'I needed to win this battle'
Alright, I lenghthened it a bit.
*Apresúrese-Hurry up