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Spriters Showcase Thread

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A present for Goatman.
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He's not exactly a close friend of mine, but I noticed that he watches me on Da, and he still provides some of the best comics I know of, so he deserves a present

I hope he still likes lickitungs XD

yay for no comments, or C and C
 
yay for no comments, or C and C

The shading would look a lot better if you used a few more colors. As it is now, the shading doesn't look quite gradual enough. Especially the inside of the mouth, as you only used one color. I don't like how you have the dark pixels around some of the border either. The border just looks too cluttered on the left side. The lineart is pretty well done though, and I love the expression on its face. It's a decent piece as it is now, but a few slight adjustments could really help it out a lot.
 
Here's an edit:
Your AA was far too thick and flawed. Some lines were screwed too. And most of all: It didn't really look like Lickitung.

yah the tounge looks rolled now, but i like the shading of Esupio's lickatung
 
Here's an edit:
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Your AA was far too thick and flawed. Some lines were screwed too. And most of all: It didn't really look like Lickitung.

You should really ask before you edit someone else's work, man. =X
 
No one has ever asked Nintendo/Gamefreak if they could edit the official pokemon sprites =/
 
It's a little heavy on the dithering, try smoothing it out a little.
 
It's a little heavy on the dithering, try smoothing it out a little.

Well the tutorial i used said dithering is a friend. And i thought it looked quite good. But being quite novice at photoshop means i am not very good.

I know what you mean by smooth it out but the problem is i don't know how or what tool to use! So advice would be greatly appreciated
 
The Pencil tool, a little AAing, the usual stuff. Dithering is a friend, but only in necessary amounts.
 
Its the first time i've really AA'd at all.

Yeah, you definitely went a little overboard in a few places. No worries though. There's a first time for everything.

Since I can't seem to get a comment in my thread, could I get some C & C on this please? Scratch Snubbull.

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That..is...EXCELLENT! I don't really see any problems. But that's me. :D
Just some D/P sprites for now:
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Ash
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Brock
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Jaden from Yu-Gi-Oh GX
 
You should really ask before you edit someone else's work, man. =X
Well, I go to Pixelation, Pixeltendo, Pixel and Pixel Joint. And on all those places, people actually want edits. And my English is good, but I can't bring all techniques and such to words yet, so I let my edit speak for me.

EDIT: Small update on the tank:
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Yeah, you definitely went a little overboard in a few places. No worries though. There's a first time for everything.

Since I can't seem to get a comment in my thread, could I get some C & C on this please?

looks great, i see no problems really
 
No one has ever asked Nintendo/Gamefreak if they could edit the official pokemon sprites =/

That's really completely different. Those are finished, professional sprites from an official game on the market where the creators are actually making money. =\

Well, I go to Pixelation, Pixeltendo, Pixel and Pixel Joint. And on all those places, people actually want edits. And my English is good, but I can't bring all techniques and such to words yet, so I let my edit speak for me.

EDIT: Small update on the tank:
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It really isn't that hard to actually type out the things wrong with a sprite. I know personally, I'd rather be given specifics about what to improve than have someone just completely change my original sprite. If Esupio doesn't mind though, there's no point in discussing this.

I love the tank sprite, Opacus. The palette looks wonderful and the animation pwns. Thank god you fixed the angle of the wheels though. It looked awkward originally, but now it looks excellent. XD
 
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