YunaDances: It looks like the first one is from Michii.. XD
Anyways, you might need to work on the brushing a little more this time. Like, think about where you want to put your brushes? Does it look good in that area? If not, ctrl+z and try again.
BerserkPaladin: You were supposed to rate the graphics above It's not bad, but you could use some more brushing instead of not using your own backgrounds. I can't think of any text because I am not really good at that. ><