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The Land Of The Umbreon (revived)

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Restren could his name being called over the sound of the wind rushing through his fur but he didnt turn back. He closed his eyed to get the tears out then opened them again to a cleared vision. He suddenly stopped. He was at a meadow. He wanted to walk in but he was scared as it was much to quiet... Restren looked around. He began to move into the meadow cautiously. He suddenly turned to see something shiny. It was the glint of a gun! "Oh great groudon!" He said running back into the forest. He turned to go away from the poachers but his paws had a different idea.

Go to the poacher and kill him. Give him a taste of his own bloody medicine! They said as Restren leapt at the poacher. Surprised the poacher flinched then fell over uncontious.
 
Juni was about to call Restren again, but she stopped when she saw him attacking a poacher. Juni forgot the reason she had came here and turned her attention to them. She lunged at another human and sent him to the ground.
 
Silverbane caught up, but something was wrong, it was quiet, he couldn't see restren, and he saw juni jump in to but he had lost her(arg sorry if you're not female violet) as well then suddenly he hear footstpes, turning to see the poacher, and a poacher he recognized, the poacher that too contica
you are so dead you evil poacher silverbane thought, and before the poacer could react silverbane bit down hard on his leg, then as quicjly as possible doged behind him jumped onto his back and bit into his neck, then used shadow ball on him, rendering hi unconcious,
But silverbane couldn't kill him, he just couldn't, he saw a meadow up ahead, so he dragged him out there, heard a gun shot, and ran in that direction...
 
occ: of course i'm a girl! what did u think i was? -_-

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Juni could hear a gunshot hearby, and turned her head in that direction. She glanced behind her. Silverbane was gone... "He must have went after the other humans..." She looked back to where she heard the noise and gasped. A black umbreon with blue eyes and yellow rings... "Kirik!" she yelped running as fast as she could.
 
Violet kato said:
occ: of course i'm a girl! what did u think i was? -_-

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Juni could hear a gunshot hearby, and turned her head in that direction. She glanced behind her. Silverbane was gone... "He must have went after the other humans..." She looked back to where she heard the noise and gasped. A black umbreon with blue eyes and yellow rings... "Kirik!" she yelped running as fast as she could.
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ooc: sorry but i just couldn;t be sure i read your application but i forgot =P

IC: He heard a patter of feet behind him yet dared not look back, he kept running in the directiong of the gunshot, and he saw a poacher looking triumphant with a gun, and silverban pounced and bit, but it was too much he injured the guy but he done himself damage, he was down now, and he knew the human wouldn't hsitate to kill him, so he stood up proud and stared the human in the face,
and growled "kill me human"
and shut his eyes expecting death...
 
occ: that's alright! but you can't die yet!
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Juni stopped dead in her tracks when she saw a man about to shoot Silverbane. She tackled the guy and her bird mark started turned red. She shot a strong water beam out of her mouth to keep him back. A thought shot through her mind. "Kirin... i've got to find him!"
 
OOC: never said i was going to die, at all :P

IC: he heard the gurgling of water and saw the human on the ground so he took advantage and used <beserk> his fur went blood red and he attacked the human ferociously not stopping,

OOC: sorry for the short post but i need to do someting and the post can't wait
 
occ: yea, i need to get off soon too.
As soon as Silverbane got up Juni sped off into the forest. She had to find him... After a few minutes of chasing after no one in particular, she could see a poacher holding a cage. "Kirin!" She yelled runinng even faster. Kirin's blue eyes fell upon her, and he whispered in her mind: "Juni don't follow me, it's a trap!" She nodded and slowed down.
 
Silverbanes fur and anger didn't fail, and he ran after juni, fater than any normal umbreon, but he wans;t any noral umbreon,
He wanted to hide this, but he couldn't now. He stopped right beside Juni, trying not to attract her attenton,and he looked at the other umbreon run away,
he began to chase after him at a slow pace...
 
Juni saw Silverbane run right past her, and she ran after him. Juni could see a net spread out over the forest floor ahead. "Silverbane! wait a minute!" She wanted to catch up to Kirin, but she might get caught. Kirin suddenly stopped in front of the net. "Juni... you'd better get your friend..." he said, his icy eyes glaring at the following Silverbane. "He's going to get hurt."
 
he ran straight by what seemed to be a net, not knowing what he had done, his fur retunred back to normal, and he was more coherent, he baegan to dig,
"wait when had i dug holes?" he asked, but kept digging anyway

OOC:again sorry
 
Silver ran after the others. "Guys it's not a good thing if we split up..." When Silver finally stopped she found herself at the edge of the forest. "Oh, why do I bother." She muttered as she walked out of the forest and into a wide open meadow. Looking around she narrowed her eyes in suspicion. Something isn't right here... it's too quietShe noticed a couple of dark figures further up and identified them as unconcious poachers. "So there are others." She mumbled as she crouched low on the ground. Analyzing her surroundings, and using the wind to her advantage she caught a wiff of Silverbane and Juni, as well as another scent, it didn't smell like that of a poacher, so she came to a conclusion. It must be another umbreon. Sprinting off in the direction that the scents lead her to, she soon found herself meters away from a digging Silverbane. "Um...Silverbane....why are you digging a hole?" She asked curiously as she approached him.
 
"GET BACK SILVER!" he yells, my fur beging to twinge red again
she's in trouble what do i do
let me take over said a voice in his head, "o-ok"
he whispers
Silverbane became pure blood red, and ran for silver, but not harming her when he got to her, instead stoppping in front of her
"look we have to go, or else the poachers trap will suceed, if you can jump onto my back"
in the state silverbane was in he was bigger faster stronger than your average umbreon, but it never lasted long
"quickly" he said hastily...
 
Silver hesitantly looked around, "Um..ok." She nodded and jumped on his back. What happaned to Silverbane? How did he transform like that? She wondered as she tried to hang on to Silverbane.
 
Silverbane ran all the way back to find juni, he couldn't see her
"i'll come back for her later, Silver you ok ?"
he asked truly worried, he ran straight back to camp, being careful of bear traps
Looks like they are after someone in particular he thought to himself, he was forgetting that some umbreon could read minds, so he threw up defenses over his mind to be sure
"ok well here we are" he said as he arrived back at camp, though he had plenty of energy to spare in beserk mode, so he stayed that way to let it wear off...
 
Silver slid down Silverbane's back and nodded. "Yes, I'm fine thank you, but what's going on here?" She asked with a confused expression on her face. "And what about the poachers' traps?" She quickly added.
 
"Oh i suppose you mean the fur thing , and the change thing" i said slightly flushing with embaressment
"well it's an ability called beserk, you cna see the effect's and it doesn't last long, it's sort of like rage, it builds up, but it has to stop sometime."
he said quickly
"and the poachers are out to get someone, i think, they have been very careful with their traps, it may be one of us, it may be myuu, but i don;t think myuu would fall for it, so i think it make be one of us"
i said without putting in to many of my thoughts, i lookd at silver, even in berserk mode i had to hide the blushing, but it didn't matter ij'm sure she hadn't, or couldn't see so i was safe..
 
Silver sighed heavily and drooped her ears, and lowered her head. "But WHY us? What have we done to upset them?" She exclaimed a little angrily. "It doesn't make sense, and why are WE the chosen ones? I'm so confused right now!" She yelled shutting her eyes tightly. A moment of silence passed and she lifted her head and looked at Silverbane with an apologetic smile. "I'm sorry. I didn't mean to snap at you, I'm just trying to make sense of things right now." She mumbled with a frown on her face.
 
"don't worry" i said, but even i couldn;t hie the glint of tears as silver reminded me my mother, but silver was different, and i felt proud, i had done somethign right, i had made friends
"Well i think i could give a feesable explanation why they chose you lot, think about it, none of you are your average umbreon, the colur of your hides would be enough to turn any human crazy for it, but we're wild and they can't catch us the normal way, all of us are protected, but you lot especially, me i was just in the right place at the right time"
I said remembering my dream that included myuu, what did it look so understanding about? i thought...
 
Silver smiled. "Yeah, thanks to you, you saved me and I owe you a lot for that! but why would humans want to steal our fur...I mean it's not like I chose to be born with a different appearance." she muttered the last part to herself. "Humans can be so greedy, don't you agree?" She looked up to Silverbane.
 
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