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The Land Of The Umbreon (revived)

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Juni heard a howl in the distance and she followed it. She sat down in front of a dark cave. "Wonder what's in there..." Suddenly a dark mist surrounded her. Her crow's scar burned red and the fur on her neck stood up. She bared her sharp canine teeth and growled at the floating substance. The mist began to form a strange object... It looked just like... a seviper.

It's tounge flared out and it started to hiss, it's large tail slithering behind it as it moved. Juni felt dizzy. She had done the very thing she had tried not to. She was looking into the dark black pools of the seviper's eyes. But she couldn't look away now, it seemed almost hyponotizing... It was happeining again... This seviper was one of the pokemon that helped the humans kill kirin's parents.

Juni could only mumble a few words as the mist began to swallow her. "Kirin!..." "KIRIN HELP!"
 
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"Well the poachers have done it now, I guess whoever they want, they want them bad enough to put their pokemon in danger, and i doubt some of them even are their own pokemon"
Silverbane said, sadly, and growled fiercly at the houndoom trying to calm it down
"do you want those battle marks healed or not?" Silverbane asked the houndoom, while waiting for a reply Silverban'es thoughts wandered to contica, how he missed he so he had to get her back before the Poaches could do any more damage,
"contica i'll find you" he murmured

Houndoom:"Fine i'll hold still"
Silverbane: "ok this might just sting a little" he said and began to lick the houndoom's wounds, then released a howl, and the cave became bright, no one could see, and houndoom was healed, but Silverbane sat on him again not allowing him to run away, "You may be a good actor but you can't fool me"
Silverbane stared at the houndoom angrily...
 
"Are you sure it's safe, to keep the houndoom here? I mean he may belong to the poachers, and if he does he may be trying to lead them to us." Silver looked behind her, at the opening of the cave. "I don't trust him." She muttered, mostly to herself. She then thought back to what Luna had told her. Maybe I should ask him...nah this isn't the time. As soon as things quiet down, I'll ask him. Turning back to Silverbane she asked. "What do you plan to do with him?" Pointing with her paw at the houndoom.
 
"He isn't bad, i can sense the good in him, he's a wild pokemon, can't you feel it?" silverbane asked as if it was normal to feel these things
the houndoom ceased to struggle and fell asleep, it must have been late, he was beinging to wonder where the others were
and he was getting worried, but he couldn't leave silver and the houndoom, and he couldn't ask silver to do anything about it, so he left it they would come

he hoped...
 
"Juni!" Kirin had heard her screams and came running. His eyes and rings turned blue when he saw the Seviper. "YOU!!! Let her go!" he growled. The Seviper glared at him and hissed back as it wrapped it's tail around Juni. "I said let her go!" he yelled sinking his deadly teeth into the snake's neck. Seviper growled and threw Kirin off, and he flew into a tree. "...K-Kirin... help me..." Juni whispered out of breath. The seviper looked down at the paralyzed umbreon. it put a silence to her with a stab of it's tail. "Juni!!!" Kirin got back up with no hesitation. Kirin's ears pointed directly foward and with a quick swish of his head, he sent a razor water slash through the air.

The Seviper shrieked as it's tail was cut from it's body. Juni fell to the ground and the Seviper vanished into mist. "Juni?!" Kirin said scrambling over to her. He crouched beside her head and pushed her with a paw. She didn't move. He slowly sat beside her. He wrapped a paw around her and put her head on his shoulder. (Kinda the only way they can hug people ^_^). One of Kirin's tears rolled into Juni's eye. "Juni... don't go..." "go where Ki? Your kind of clutching me!" she asked blinking. He looked down at her, and never before had she seen his eyes such a bright blue. "ah jay, I thought you were gone..." he whispered. "Well i'm sorry to have scared you Ki." she gave him a weak smile and hugged him back. "Thanks..." she whispered.
 
Silver gave him an odd look. "Um... not really..." Trailing off Silver suddenly remeber she left Luna in the forest alone. "Oh my god! I ditched Luna!" She exclaimed jumping to her feet. "Oh no I feel so bad! What should I do!" Silver looked over at Silverbane with anxiousness. How could I totally forget about him like that? And the others! We all go split up! Silver paced the cave worriedly. "Think we can go look for the others? Oh wait...what about the houndoom?" She asked lowering her voice and looking down at the sleeping pokemon.
 
"Well we'll have to risk it, and if houndoom runs i'll catch him, but we have to find the others" he replied worriedly,
He never thought he would see the day when he was rescuing people left, right and centre, it was like some hero's dream, but silverbane knew he was no hero, they were his friends they had helped him too many times before, and now it was time to repay them
"Now get up houndoom, it's time to go" he said gently to the houndoom
who replied "fine, but don't expect me to help" he growled
"well that's that sorted, time to leave home, again" he said sadly focing houndoom out of the cave
The air outside was still and silent, what was wrong, even the tree's seemed darker than normal, as if they knew something we didn't
"Silver lets go, i can feel it, somehting wrong, we need to get moving again"
 
Silver nodded. "Right. Which way should we head?" She asked looking around.
"Oh last time we saw Juni she headed that way...I think." She pointed to her right with her paw. "And I left Luna somewhere in that direction." She pointed to her left. "Do you want to split up, and then meet up back here?" She asked.
 
"NO! it's two dangerous in this forest now, it's teeming with dangerous pokemon, much like him" silverbane said jabbing a paw at the houndoom
"we'll just have to be fast" he said breaking off into a slow run in the direction of luna, not knowing exactly what to do or to say anymore, his feelings were growing, so he just thought to find the others.
He was hit a few times by stray attacks but never thoguht to fight back againt whatever it was, he didn't have the time
 
Silver follwed after Silverbane, dodging many of the random attacks being thrown at the two of them. Silver thought that they should stop and find out who's attacking them, but then refrained from saying anything. I hope he knows what he's doing. She though silently following.
 
Silverbane was struck by a large white beam, that devestated abything in it's path, and houdoom ran off, and it sounded like he was laughing
"arggg, hmm if this is death it's not half bad" he joked, coughing "a hyperbeam attack, they have a strong pokemon on their side, one we probably can't handle, you have to this time, you have to leave me, fine luna and the others and if you have time then come back for me, ok? silver are you listening?" he asked frantically
he hoped she would listen to him this time...
 
OOC: I have been almost totally ignoring or ignored<< I dont have hours and hours online and stuffers like some of you others have.... Restren is being betrayed! *bows before Restren* My all mighty pokesona is being defeated by a thing called forgot fullness! *cries* Sorry Ressy... I dont think I have the time to be on enough to rp... I just dont know. Restren wil catch up to the others though. Here is a small post. Restren will get captured by poachers while getting attacked twelve (YES I SAID TWELVE) To one. His burn blast attack growing less powerful Restren leaps over the circle of pokemon right into a trap causing him to bleed. The poacher then comes and puts him in a cage. Okay read my miinions read! *cough* I didnt say minions I said friends. Oh and the names of the Mightyena. The actual kidlike names are guys at my school. I just had to make Justin do something stupid and had to make Camren sound awesome *blush* Justin is actually really stupid << I hate him.

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Restren was petrified. He loked around. No one was with him. He was extremely tired and franticly leaping around from tree to tree trying to keep his scent un noticable. The poachers were hot on his trail and he knew it.

Restren slunk around a tree hoping he could hide. he heard growling. He turned to see twelve mightyena barking and sniffing.
"Oh crud, I don`t have any luck at all." Restren groaned clambering up onto a tree branch. Ity would be hard to keep away from the dogs but Restren would have to try.

He stared at the mightyena from his branch.
Please don`t find me please don`t find me please don`t find me please don`t find me... Restren was pertified. He lay down on the branch shivering both in fear and from the breeze which blewq through his fur. He shook his head and looked at the mightyena again.

One of the mightyena raised its head and began to howl.
"I got the scent now move out ya pack of losers! The master says if we don`t find the rest of the umbreon then we are the substisutes!" the mightyena yelled.

"Oh come on, we already obey him Scar!" said another. Its voice was weaker.

"SHUT UP YELPER! IM TRYING TO TRACK PVER HERE YOU OAF!" Scar yelled beginning to sniff. He looked up at the tree.
"You little a......" He whispered moving towards the tree. He stopped when he saw a shadow move behind it.
"Okay boys, here we go. Yelper, Herin, Killer, Justin and Dusty. Your with me. Ben, Zach, Tyler, Russell, Camren and Cody, you go find master." Scar yelled advancing towards the tree. Camren looked at the rest of his group confidently.
"Right dad!" he said leaping over a log and running out of sight with the rest of his group.

The kids got spunk. he`s a born leader like me. I need to make sure he becomes leader after I wisk away. Scar thought as he started to scratch at the tree. Justin stared at him weirdly as he did so.
"Uhh Scar, what are you doing?" Justin asked.
"IM SCRATCHIN UP MY FREAKIN NAILS YOU IMBISOL!" Scar yelled swiping a paw at Justin who yelped.
"Whatever Scar Butt" Justin looked away from Scar. Scar growled and turned to Killer.
"You dont have the name Killer for nuthin. GET HIM TO STOP THE ROUGH WAY." Scar yelled returning to his clawing. Yelper, Herin, Killer, Justin and Dusty looked at each other then Yelper, Herin and Dusty began to claw also.


"Right away Boss." Killer slurred finally realising what he was supposed to do. He raised his paw and swiped at a tree nearby. His claws dug deep into the bark and pulled out a whole bunch of it.

Justin turned and began to run as Killer chased him. Killer, whom was much faster grabbed Justin and swiped him on his back end.
"Whos the scar butt now you idiot." Killer laughed as Justin stared helplessly at his bum. He felt a tear go down his cheek and fall to the ground. Then he limped over to a tree and began to claw.


Restren was even more petrified. He flinched even though he should have. All of a sudden a gun shot went off in the distance and he heard Camren panting. He trotted up to his father victoriously. Restren`s fur stood up. He moved his paw and Camren saw it.

"Something over there moved dad." Camren growled and bared his teeth at the tree Restren was in. Restren jumped out. He bared his teeth also. His fur stood on end and he extended his somewhat long claws. Then he leapt at Camren and bit him. Camren yelped and swatted Restren who had some fur in his mouth away. Restren spat out the fur and growled.

Then all of a sudden he looked around to see a surrounding of mightyena.
"What is this? Double team?" Restren asked growling.
"No, this is the real thing." Scar said and all of the mightyena moved closer. Restren was trapped.

Restren closed his eyes and thought. His sister, his mother... Then a giant b last of fire shot out of himi. The mightyena got hit with it. Some of the mightyena(Justin, Ben, Russell, Tyler, Zach and Dusty) fell over but got back up. Countless times he did so but he finally gave up with almost all his strenght given up. the pack was to strong.

Restren only had one chance. he leapt. Just as he did Camren barked and theyre master the poacher came out. Restren scared moved his foot backwards. It got stuck in a trap. then the poacher grabbed Restren and put him in a cage. the helpless umbreon had nothing he could do but wait and see what the evil poachers plan was.
 
0cc: I wasn't trying to ignore you, but you were gone for so long! ^_^ Sowwies!

Juni was still leaning on kirin when she thought she heard Silver's voice. "last time we saw Juni she headed that way" Juni jumped to her feet. "Ki the others are nearby, I can hear them!" she hopped in excitement before realizing what a bad mistake that was. "Oww!" She mumbled through clenched teeth. She looked down. There was a big hole in her stomach and she hadn't even realized it. "Hold still Jay." Kirin said walking over to her. His eyes began to glow, and Juni could feel the hole sealing up. When he fully healed her wounds they ran out of the forest and back to the mysterious cave. "...No not there Ki, I heard Silver over there." she pointed with her little paw. They could hear someone up ahead and ran after them.

"I hope were following your friends and not another dark pokemon." Kirin sighed. As they began to catch up to them, they were surrounded by random attacks flying around everywhere. Juni barely missed a huge fireball that came her way. They were running to fast to see the pokemon, but they knew they had to be attacking them for a reason. "Come on Juni, we have to teleport out of here!" Kirin yelled over the roar of the fight. Juni nodded. She closed her eyes and whispered "Silver"-- *poof* they appeared next to Silver and Silverbane.
 
Silverbane saw juni appear near to them" well there's one" barely said through couughing up blood
"go help silver find luna, restren and the others, only when you find them and if you have time come back for me, or whatever is left of me ok?" he says, and even thoguh he is weak he lets on a strong impression
a second hyperbeam was fired elsewhere in the forest
"phew they hve moved on, but they'll come back lookign for survivers"
he says closing his eyes, his breathign slows down...
 
Juni wanted to go help find the others, but she didn't want to leave Silverbane. "Hey, you just can't stay here all by yourself you could die!" she looked over at Kirin. "Silverbane, let Kirin stay here and help you okay?"
 
"no" he coughs "you'll need hsi help, there are strong pokemon out there, some we might not even have seen, and you'll need all the help you can get, and don't worry....cough....cough.... i'm not gonna give up and die"
he laughed painfully
"please listen to me and trust me, you'll need his help, and he'll need yours, they'll be lookign for us ok so go move it" he demanded
the pain, i know i'm going to die and they knwo t, but i can pretend i'm not and they can help the others he thought sadly
it's not fair i have to go when i get so many frined,s but such is life i suppose
he wondered if anyone would remember him fi he dided or not...
 
Juni was still unsure whether to leave, but she nodded to kirin and slowly headed to the trees. "You better not die on us Silverbane! Or all come up to heaven just to beat you up!" she growled playfully. "And I mean it..." she whispered. Kirin nodded again in agreement. "She's right, your to good of a fighter to die now."
 
"don't worry i wont die on you, and i never was a good fighter, just in the name of my...cough cough.... friends" he smiled
"well go on then, are you wainting for and invitation to find them?" he asked playfully
 
Kirin smiled back and headed off into the forest again. "That's a brave kid..." Juni hesitated for a moment, but she knew he was right. "Ohh...okay." she mumbled. "we'll be back as soon as we can!" she said running behind Kirin. She hated goodbyes... It may seem like no big deal to Kirin, but she knew something bad might happen to him. "Come on Silver!"
 
Silver didn't say anything, she knew Silverbane wouldn't change his mind. "Becareful Silverbane! I won't forgive you if you die on us!" She exclaimed, and followed the others.
 
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