Kay, so how come we have people posting sprites here and no one giving any C&C?
Samson: Both of your sprites look awesome. The designs and colours are really well done.
Chizzy: Again, some nice work here. Your skills have definitely improved from when I last saw some of your work.
Aviator Maz: As I've told you before, they look great.
Wattsie1993: The shading is pretty good. However, you left the lines unshaded - they should never be completely black. I suggest that you go back and take a look at the advance sprites for Bulbasaur and try to emulate the shading that the lines have there.
I know it ain't your fault, but the the bulbasaur just
looks bad XDDD;;;
Jake: That's a big submission there.
Male trainer: Eh, I don't like the beret on the trainer sprite, the trousers should have pockets on them, the colours are too dark, and the smile is damn freaky XDD;;
The OW's aren't that bad, but the beret seems like a flat cap to me. And the colours aren't all that great either.
Rival trainer: The torso is too long, the shading of the torso, arms and hair is wrong too (completely devoid of line shading), and the scarf is just way too long in my opinion - it shouldn't be straight down either. You also forgot his bag.
The hair is quite crazy as well XDDD;;
Female trainer: Umm, the hat is too tall, the hair needs some outline shading, she looks kinda chubby XD, and the bag she's holding looks really unnatural, like as if she'd hold it perfectly straight =p
The OW's aren't that bad. Shame you forgot the bag XD;;
And yeah, RSE OW's are crummu in my opinion. But oh well =p
Astral Maelstrom: The hair seems like a blob to me - at least give it some shape. And a bit of line shading too. The hat needs some of that as well. Also, the hair is covering the neck, so it looks like she has a beard XDD; Moreover, her arms look really odd. Like it looks like her left arm is supposed to be on an angle towards us, but the shading and outline makes it seem kinda warped.
Umm, where is the black outline on the OW's?
And you know, we have the official DP sprites for reference. Heck, we could even shrink them down and pixel over them if need be.
Well anywho, something I did yonks ago XDD;;;;
Just a recolour of Red really ^^;